You Liar, Hurry Up and Take Me Away

Emma, ​​I feel like I have no common sense...

Dear author, hello. Sorry for not commenting until now. Because I'm getting ready to start school recently, I have a lot of things to do (although it seems like an excuse), so I haven't had time to write a review until now. I'm really sorry!! The author mentioned at the beginning of the article that the first three chapters of this article were written in the first person, and then changed to the third person. I understand that the author may feel that the first person is more likely to give people a sense of empathy, which makes it easier for readers to "get into the drama". Therefore, it is very common for the author to choose to narrate in the first person. But why does it suddenly switch to a third-person narrative?! Generally speaking, it is easier to control the narrative in the third person, so it is okay for the author to switch back to the third person if he wants. But can I ask the author to revise the article? Would it be okay to change the first-person narrative in the first three chapters to third-person narrative? Otherwise it will be confusing to readers. Author, have you ever experienced the college entrance examination? What does "passing the college entrance examination with all A's" mean? Does it mean that all students in the school have passed the college entrance examination with all A's? Or do we mean that all students' grades are excellent? However, it is not correct to say that the whole school got an A in this class. They should have just found out the results and the score line has not been set yet. How do they know if they have got an A in this class? As mentioned below, the protagonist's mother helps the protagonist fill out the application form, and it is basically impossible for the first, second, and third choices to go to the same school. Then, the protagonist's mother wants the protagonist to go to school the day after tomorrow. What is going on?! You have just filled out your application form and the unified admissions process has not yet started. How do you know whether the school will accept you? Even if your grades are very good, after receiving the admission notice, you must report and register at the school according to the registration date on the admission notice! Why did the protagonist jump three times in a row?! Besides, the school has to have a holiday. During the holidays, there is no administrative staff in the school. How will you arrange your food and accommodation?! It would be fine if your son was a powerful and noble person, but the problem is that the protagonist is an ordinary college entrance examination student from an ordinary family! He's not the so-called number one scholar! No family background! How on earth was he going to skip these rules and enter the school directly?! This is incredible. Moreover, the author did not explain the issue of scholarship clearly. Is this the scholarship the protagonist received when he was in high school? But you said that the protagonist's grades in his high school were only average, so how could he get so many scholarships?! Or was it a scholarship given to him by the university? University scholarships are generally awarded in the next semester after final evaluation. Except for those students with very good admission scores who can get scholarships before admission. You said that University X has a good ranking, so there should be a lot of people applying for it. Even if the protagonist ranks well in province A, what about the whole country? If his ranking in the country is also very high, then it would be inconsistent with what the author said about his school performance. How powerful does the high school that the protagonist attends have to be for a student with average grades in the school to be among the best in the country?! But an aristocratic school is an aristocratic school, so why can they keep large dogs in the dormitory?! Is it a single room?! Otherwise, what should you do if your roommate is afraid of dogs or allergic to dog hair? I hope the author won't blame me for writing a review after only reading a little bit. You have to know that a good start is the key to success. If you don't write well at the beginning, how will you attract readers to continue reading?! Therefore, I suggest that the author should first understand the content that he is not familiar with before writing about it, and do not write casually, otherwise he will make many common sense mistakes. I hope the author will continue to work hard to improve this article.

Come on~~~Momada

The big guy at the beginning is so cute, come on,,,

Damn, the character design has been completed and can be checked out mua! (*╯3╰) ~

I feel like the heroine is so miserable, and school hasn't started yet. . . At once,,,

Oh my gosh, their family is all weird!

Come on, author, I really like this article!!!

Emma, ​​changed to third person again

First person, hard work, I don't read first person articles, but I still rate them~