
HP: The Abandoned One
HP之遗弃
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 110k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 12y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
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43Chapters
1.2kFavorites
8.8Score
12Nutrient gifts
10kClicks per chapter
251Comments
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It's complex and beautiful, but it's too heavy and too sad. I still like to watch more light-hearted and cheerful ones. I want to watch more extras, to see their lives after rebirth, to see their lives after abandoning all darkness and freeing themselves from everything.
Love and hate, hey, you are my god
This is a classic. I really like this article.
If you, the author, see it, I hope you can realize my wish. I'd love to see a DeHaven story about Harry and Draco being reincarnated into marriage and a spin-off (with buns included). [PS: This is Draco and Harry here.
Deha's setting is like this. The little snake is cruel and sinister, and loves a scheming boy, but it is because he loves Harry that he would otherwise waste his thoughts. Harry is completely tolerant and loves the little snake. He has lacked love since he was a child. He may be in need of such possessive and forced love. They love in different ways, but the degree of deep love is not the same. As long as they are happy... Ah, it's great.
It's finally over. To be honest, I breathed a sigh of relief at the end. Is it worthy of being a dark novel? Even though I was the one asking for the abuse. The reason for seeking abuse is because I was attracted by a Deha video on site B, even though I haven't even finished watching Harry Potter yet. In addition to the sweet ones, of course there are also sad ones. Some of the sad ones made me feel bad. Either the sugar contained glass shards, or the whole story was dark and depressing. After brainwashing the dark song, I felt bad and depressed, so I felt that I needed to find a story that was more cruel. Mobile Phone Jinjiang's weak character is very annoying, but I'm glad I found this novel. Maybe it's because there are so few people. The dark style alone is already prohibitive. There's another reason why I'm glad. I didn't read the introduction before clicking on it. I was really heartbroken when I saw it halfway through. Fortunately, it was HE in the end. Although their love is morbid and extreme, and although the human nature here is so dark, I am very grateful to the author for giving them such an ending. I breathed a sigh of relief when I saw them together, and cried when I saw them hugging each other to sleep and welcoming death peacefully. It was already a good ending. And being reborn is a relief. If I had not been reborn, I would have been sad about such death and injury for a while, but if I was reborn, there are many things that can be changed. I read an article about DH before. Draco was reborn as the main attacker. It was very sweet, although it made me cry many times in the middle. Since I haven't read the original work, I really want to take that as the real ending, but obviously I can't deceive myself. The ending of that article was perfect. And this article just completes the untruth in my mind. I won't be looking for another DeHaven or watching it a second time. A great piece of writing can become a classic in my opinion. Memories that brought tears to my eyes when I was young. Deha, it is complete for me. Well, after listening to that dark song more than a hundred times, I finally feel nothing at all. Of course, it is still beautiful. The long-term depression, sadness, and paranoia surrounding Deha has officially come to an end. There is one thing in Harry Potter that has always been quite sad. Why do we hate Slytherin students so much, just because of their parents? Relatives? Why call them Death Eaters? This is exactly what pushes them into darkness. If Harry Potter could enter Slytherin, if he didn't meet Ron who hates Slytherin so much, I believe it would not be like this. But it's a pity that Potter, who had been lonely since childhood, met Ron, and his new friend's dislike of Slytherin was imposed on the ignorant little Potter. Ron in this article is really too much, and it makes me mad. As I said before, I haven't read the original work, so I can only talk about this article. But Ron's hatred of Slytherin was really annoying. Well, I enjoyed it quite a bit. I just hate that the author's description was too brief. Free←_← can really be said in these three words.
I now believe that Maizi you were really depressed at that time, and the beginning was indeed very dark. How can I put it... I dug out the other side of the lion in the HP drama who was spoiled by Gryffindor-style enthusiasm, reckless and cold values and savior privileges, and completely forgot that there is a dark side and mistakes in the world. That's why I hate stories about real fights. It's really depressing to watch familiar people who may have played with you, tutored you, played games with you, played pranks, or dueled with you, fall down one by one, and died at the hands of yourself or other acquaintances... Part of H, Xiaolong is a scumbag! Malfoy is never rude in front of others! ! ! Dad Lu definitely taught us to forget some parts of youthful enlightenment! ! ! ! It's a bit abrupt for the two to come together, but when you think about it, it makes sense. After being depressed for a long time, you are surrounded by crazy people... It's normal to be crazy... The girl who is not allergic is not in the hands of Maizi. Or everyone's reaction to Hermione is like this: Relatives or remnants of sorrow, others have also died, what's the point of death, support the body and the same mountain? Ouch, my rare bright mood has turned cloudy again! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 11 The main drama suddenly started after Chapter 11... Does this mean that Maizi you are in a better mood? Congratulations... But when you build up the momentum and start to torture, it will be really painful... When you torture Harry, it also affects Xiao Long... Wow, why do you have to connect the accidental constitution with Xiao Long! (This person is having convulsions) Then again, because a prophecy regards a baby riding on a chariot as a spiritual banner to rely on... Should I say that the wizarding world is particularly superstitious because it is a collection of superstitions. Or... The reason why Lao Deng didn't catch Lao V and instead tormented the children in school was because he was too bored when he was old? Love is indeed the greatest power! Watch a savior learn to think and fully harness the power of the ancient nobility, little dragon you're the best! Old Lady Blake is amazing when she looks normal~ Poor professor who listens to the little ha scream ||||||||||||bed... The professor is also crazy... That complaint was made by a certain shopkeeper... Maizi, the darkness turns from drama to joy... You are really not suitable to write about darkness, the more you wash, the whiter you wash, the whiter you wash~~ Of course, after the red-haired family's essence died, Ron became completely dark, and along with Hermione... Okay... Girl Ginny has taken on the image of a lot of female villains in translations, but the little female weasel has never been my cup of tea... Ever since I read Seduction, which has nothing to do with utilitarianism, I can't eat the female weasel who indirectly harmed the dragon through tricks... Can I fry it? ? ? I want to swallow the wheat without salt~~ I also want to eat the wheat without salt! ! ! ! Disfigured, disfigured, that's Xiaolong! ! ! ! ! Wuwuwu, the one who tortures the body is also very cruel! ! ! ! So I hate war, this inhumane thing, meow... I have decided that next time I will write an article, I will dedicate a part to specifically torture Ron, Seamus and his like! ! ! ! ! No one said that Ravenclaw can't express his anger~ Yaya's research on punishment can guarantee that it will last from Western Zhou Dynasty to Manchu Qing Dynasty! ! ! It's really enjoyable to torture Xiaoha, and I feel a little refreshed! Especially after being tortured so hard by Tieba, I feel so comfortable when I see Xiaoha being tortured. In fact, Mai Zi, you are very good from the perspective of physically torturing, and torturing the heart... Sigh, it is quite torturing and unique. As expected, the white-eyed Gryffindor is the most hurtful, especially when you don't know that you are wrong, Xiaoha is completely black. Xiaolong is very Slytherin, he knows how to calculate everything and grab everything he wants. Harry loves Xiaolong very deeply and sacrifices a lot, but Xiaolong calculates more for their future and has a different focus. However, the fact that Xiaoha is very affectionate is satisfying. Let's complain again... Even the Veela in heat is not as rough as Xiaolong when it comes to sex... Facepalm, Xiaoha, you should be lucky that Xiaolong's godfather is a potion master. War distorts everything, so in a sense, when the war reaches this level, the east wind really overwhelms the west wind, or the west wind overpowers the east wind. If we don't kill all the war madmen with bloodshot heads, peace will not come... It's so melancholy... Jealous? Uncle V is a scapegoat, a plotter, a cannon fodder, and a hand-training tool. It has multiple functions in one. It is a must-have product for home and travel. It is nothing to be jealous of. Justice? Justice is always a hymn written by the victor. Even if you hold all the principles, you will not win if you are reckless, brainless and passionate. There is no winner in the ending... Does this mean no one is innocent? Well, the war has distorted all the beautiful and innocent things. It's so sad. The final side story won't be Mai Zi, you plan to be sweet and write a simple and beautiful HP that the public loves to hear~ Your translation accent is one of the best I have ever seen~ Come on~ Looking forward to Fuhua~ I haven't written a long review, so I just write what I feel. Except for the somewhat abrupt development of the relationship (thinking about it carefully, it's not unreasonable, just a bit... Sudden...), Ron is even more twisted and there is no sign of it. The only good quality in him has been lost - is it really because he didn't have the guidance of Lao Deng in the last year? Everything is good ~ I am very satisfied to read a good article, especially, there is no cold CP! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
It doesn't feel sad at all, okay, it's very sad, but it feels very refreshing. There is no third or fourth party, and there is no non-consensual sexual relationship. Relatively speaking, this article is actually quite sweet, sadistic and sweet.
By the way, that deal was a total betrayal. There was no necessary reason to kill Lupine. Isn't this behavior not enough to convict Ron and others of the death penalty? Why did Harry Mao still want to help them, and Hermione didn't think anything was wrong? Lu Ping was killed silently by his own people. Why didn't Mao even react?
Is this the end? I still hope to give Ron and the others a hard blow...