A Love We Can't Return To
回不去的爱情
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 25k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 19y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
16Chapters
1Favorites
405Clicks per chapter
8Comments
Reader comments 7
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回不去的爱情
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I think you are so artificial, I don't like your kind of love
Ruah`~~You wrote well~~We can arrange it~~take a photo of him~~~! Let your brother be the number one male~~~haha~!
Well, the writing is good. You are talented. Keep working hard and keep writing.
It's good, but I always feel that something is missing. I have a very pertinent opinion. Come on, come on, write, write more good works, come on.
Nesa, basically I don't like this kind of subject matter. I am the king of supporting roles! After reading it, I feel that there is a little less description of the heroine herself. And I can't feel her characteristics. I never thought she had the charm of being loved by two men at the same time! Then, in the relationship between Hai and the heroine, the change was a bit sudden. I suddenly fell in love with the heroine without any warning. The part about falling in love with the heroine seemed a bit too hasty. Because it seems a bit simple to fall in love with the heroine just because of the cake dumping incident. Then. . My supporting character Wang Daolun is about to appear again~ Where are you? Where did Qingheya go? Why is it so likely to appear before? The next three people disappeared? (Did you torture them all to death by your stepmother?) Let's basically start with these.
Ruru is also at JJ. Hehe, come here to support
I am Zhang Luya~~It turns out that this kid is also hanging out in Jinjiang Haha. I'll definitely vote for you. Throw more. My first score is dedicated to you. . . Haha