Happiness is like a showerhead, sprinkling fine droplets over you and filling the room with warm, steamy air. It is an indescribable comfort. Kakashi's eldest son went missing at the age of three. After years of searching with no results, he was brought back to the village at ten, during a battle with Konoha Ninja arranged by Itachi. Facing Konoha, facing criticism, facing friends, facing brothers, facing his parents: our young boy is doing his best to grow up. Speaking of happiness, it comes with all kinds of good things. Sometimes the story takes a comedic turn, so please don't mind, everyone, wwww
Note: Itachi, Minato, Kushina, Asuma, Jiraiya, and Obito are all still alive. The story begins after the Sasuke-Itachi battle at Tenchi Bridge, in the chapter known as the Tenchi Bridge arc. Its original title was "The Showerhead." This is the happy version of "Hatake Chisato," with a serious, canon-oriented approach and a focus on parent-child relationships. It's still the story of Kakashi's unlucky son, w. May everyone find happiness. Well, let's see about that...
Thanks to my friend Qing Feng Ruo Zhu for helping with the new cover, wwww
Homecoming Arc: The Hatake Family
Hidden in the Snow Arc: Life with the Companions of the Anbu
Tailed Beast Arc: The Three-Tails and Five-Tails appear one after another
Destruction of Konoha Arc: Pain is here
Shinobi World War Arc: Battles, proper battles without slacking off
Thanks for adding this to your collections~ I had a brain blip and changed the title... The new version's no-CP option is such a blessing! The romantic orientation is toward romance, but there really isn't much of it...
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20190312: I read through it again a couple of days ago and had a lot of thoughts. There were quite a few typos and awkward sentences, so I revised the wording, changed a few minor plot details, and wrote a new extra. New and returning readers are welcome to read or revisit it.
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It's a very good read. I quite like the part where the protagonist is tortured a little bit. But Qianli's growth, transformation and character building are handled very well by the author, and I like it very much. I thought it was a bit vague at the beginning and didn't explain much, but then it got better. Kakashi is also one of my favorite characters. I sincerely hope that he can have such a family, apprentices, friends and prestige, instead of being a "lonely scarecrow" like the original text. Do you want to write more about the exchange between Chisato and Wuwei? Or fireworks? Hahaha, maybe there will be another extra chapter six or seven years after the end?
I really like fan fiction. Each author describes each character in his mind word for word. Sometimes if you read it carefully, you will also feel sad and happy according to the characters. Whether it's "Shower" or "Hatake Chisato", it really pokes me! Originally, I liked Kakashi very much, he is really a very gentle person, and then there was the Yondaime Minato, and then there was Itachi-san. After reading the author's article, I declared that Kakashi is my destiny! The author's writing fulfilled the regrets I cared about and created a very similar Kakashi in my heart. Qianli Xiaobaimao is so gentle. They both have a kind of courage and sunshine that I don't have. They are the kind of people I want to be. (By the way, I read this article elsewhere and found jj |?ω?`) The author may have been pirated.) It can be said that I have read quite a few Naruto articles, but this one is really one of my favorite Naruto articles! It's hard to find such high-quality articles. Good luck to the author~
It's so fast! HE is so awesome!
, It's really great! He was so happy that I wondered several times if we had collectively won the Infinite Tsukuyomi. Thank you, Bamboo! !
In fact, I haven't realized that five years have passed since "Shower" ended.
I have never been able to write about boys, so I am very envious of Qi Jun's sons (laughs).
Among Weijun's sons, Qianli still felt that Qianli was the cutest, so he captured Weijun when he returned to the Hokage Pit (proud).
I am honored to witness his growth, whether it is the confused and painful young boy in "Hatake Senri" or the sharp, sharp and gentle young boy in "Shower".
Chisato really has a genius, which is very Kakashi.
When he first appeared, he didn't know how to hide his sharp edge, which really made him look like Kaka. When he got older, it was suddenly clear that he and Kakashi looked different - no matter how similar they looked, they were still two different people.
Lao Ka's gentleness comes from carrying the despair given by the past and still moving forward towards the hope that does not exist in the future;
And Xiao Qianli's gentleness... Is probably because that's the kind of person he is. Whether it was the awkward kid who just returned to Konoha when he was ten years old and went to Gai's house because "ninjas must learn to assess the situation" or the gentle boy who asked Kakashi in a drawl voice when he was seventeen, "Dad, are you unable to bear it anymore?"
Have you ever thought about what would happen if he never left Kakashi's side? Would he become more frank earlier?
Maybe not? After all, he is Lao Ka's silly son!
The most impressive episode is probably this:
Half a year after Ochisato Chakra went berserk and joined ANBU, Yamato sat with him for a night, and then he spoke for the first time - "Although I can't talk to them, looking at other people's lives like this, it seems that my own life is no longer so difficult."
Obviously he himself was also a victim. If it weren't for Obito's technique, he would have spent more time smoothly instead of living in the shadows.
It is really rare for a ten-year-old child to have no dissatisfaction or resentment.
Fortunately, he later grew up to be such a sunny person.
Or, fortunately, it was the soft and firm young man who went through these hardships.
He could endure it, accepted all the hardships, and turned all the setbacks into steps in his growth.
How does Kakashi feel when he sees Chisato growing up?
Another favorite part is the exchange between the big and small thousands of miles, it is really interesting.
Wei Jun's characters always have a rare sense of youth, which is probably the author's own temperament.
And what is the so-called "youthful feeling"... Maybe it is always full of yearning for the future.
In the face of adversity, persevere in order to do what you want to do and become the person you want to be.
Even though he knew that what he was doing was not the right path, he never felt upset.
In the end, he grew up in his own way and gained precious courage.
It has nothing to do with victory or defeat, he has never lost to himself.
The soul sentence of the full text: Lao Ka is still as good as before...
It must be Chisato's fault that I call him Kakashi and call him Kakashi so smoothly 23333~
Hahahaha, so Qianli who called me "Lao Ka" was finally dealt with by Kakashi!
This 14-year-old novel will be completed in my lifetime.
When will you publish a new article?
What am I missing! ! Finished? ! ! !
In the extra story, I want to see Lao Ka being bullied by his two sons, the interaction between the father and son after their memory is restored, Chisato's various attempts to silence him, Chisato taking Hanabi, Chisato teasing Chimori's little girlfriend, Mrs. Hatake's abuse of the Hatake clan leader, etc…
Congratulations on the completion!
That sentence about Qianli's stupid son is your true voice, right? 233333~
So happy!
So warm and touching! ! Qian Shou threw herself into Qian Li's arms and was instantly moved! ! I didn't expect Senri and Hanabi to be together... Wow, I thought it was Hei Xi's... Sure enough, his first love is dead... Does Hei Xiu like Qianli or give in?
It's a very good read. I quite like the part where the protagonist is tortured a little bit. But Qianli's growth, transformation and character building are handled very well by the author, and I like it very much. I thought it was a bit vague at the beginning and didn't explain much, but then it got better. Kakashi is also one of my favorite characters. I sincerely hope that he can have such a family, apprentices, friends and prestige, instead of being a "lonely scarecrow" like the original text. Do you want to write more about the exchange between Chisato and Wuwei? Or fireworks? Hahaha, maybe there will be another extra chapter six or seven years after the end?
I really like fan fiction. Each author describes each character in his mind word for word. Sometimes if you read it carefully, you will also feel sad and happy according to the characters. Whether it's "Shower" or "Hatake Chisato", it really pokes me! Originally, I liked Kakashi very much, he is really a very gentle person, and then there was the Yondaime Minato, and then there was Itachi-san. After reading the author's article, I declared that Kakashi is my destiny! The author's writing fulfilled the regrets I cared about and created a very similar Kakashi in my heart. Qianli Xiaobaimao is so gentle. They both have a kind of courage and sunshine that I don't have. They are the kind of people I want to be. (By the way, I read this article elsewhere and found jj |?ω?`) The author may have been pirated.) It can be said that I have read quite a few Naruto articles, but this one is really one of my favorite Naruto articles! It's hard to find such high-quality articles. Good luck to the author~
It's so fast! HE is so awesome!
, It's really great! He was so happy that I wondered several times if we had collectively won the Infinite Tsukuyomi. Thank you, Bamboo! !
In fact, I haven't realized that five years have passed since "Shower" ended. I have never been able to write about boys, so I am very envious of Qi Jun's sons (laughs). Among Weijun's sons, Qianli still felt that Qianli was the cutest, so he captured Weijun when he returned to the Hokage Pit (proud). I am honored to witness his growth, whether it is the confused and painful young boy in "Hatake Senri" or the sharp, sharp and gentle young boy in "Shower". Chisato really has a genius, which is very Kakashi. When he first appeared, he didn't know how to hide his sharp edge, which really made him look like Kaka. When he got older, it was suddenly clear that he and Kakashi looked different - no matter how similar they looked, they were still two different people. Lao Ka's gentleness comes from carrying the despair given by the past and still moving forward towards the hope that does not exist in the future; And Xiao Qianli's gentleness... Is probably because that's the kind of person he is. Whether it was the awkward kid who just returned to Konoha when he was ten years old and went to Gai's house because "ninjas must learn to assess the situation" or the gentle boy who asked Kakashi in a drawl voice when he was seventeen, "Dad, are you unable to bear it anymore?" Have you ever thought about what would happen if he never left Kakashi's side? Would he become more frank earlier? Maybe not? After all, he is Lao Ka's silly son! The most impressive episode is probably this: Half a year after Ochisato Chakra went berserk and joined ANBU, Yamato sat with him for a night, and then he spoke for the first time - "Although I can't talk to them, looking at other people's lives like this, it seems that my own life is no longer so difficult." Obviously he himself was also a victim. If it weren't for Obito's technique, he would have spent more time smoothly instead of living in the shadows. It is really rare for a ten-year-old child to have no dissatisfaction or resentment. Fortunately, he later grew up to be such a sunny person. Or, fortunately, it was the soft and firm young man who went through these hardships. He could endure it, accepted all the hardships, and turned all the setbacks into steps in his growth. How does Kakashi feel when he sees Chisato growing up? Another favorite part is the exchange between the big and small thousands of miles, it is really interesting. Wei Jun's characters always have a rare sense of youth, which is probably the author's own temperament. And what is the so-called "youthful feeling"... Maybe it is always full of yearning for the future. In the face of adversity, persevere in order to do what you want to do and become the person you want to be. Even though he knew that what he was doing was not the right path, he never felt upset. In the end, he grew up in his own way and gained precious courage. It has nothing to do with victory or defeat, he has never lost to himself. The soul sentence of the full text: Lao Ka is still as good as before... It must be Chisato's fault that I call him Kakashi and call him Kakashi so smoothly 23333~ Hahahaha, so Qianli who called me "Lao Ka" was finally dealt with by Kakashi!
This 14-year-old novel will be completed in my lifetime.
When will you publish a new article?
What am I missing! ! Finished? ! ! ! In the extra story, I want to see Lao Ka being bullied by his two sons, the interaction between the father and son after their memory is restored, Chisato's various attempts to silence him, Chisato taking Hanabi, Chisato teasing Chimori's little girlfriend, Mrs. Hatake's abuse of the Hatake clan leader, etc…
Congratulations on the completion! That sentence about Qianli's stupid son is your true voice, right? 233333~ So happy!
So warm and touching! ! Qian Shou threw herself into Qian Li's arms and was instantly moved! ! I didn't expect Senri and Hanabi to be together... Wow, I thought it was Hei Xi's... Sure enough, his first love is dead... Does Hei Xiu like Qianli or give in?