Chasing the Phoenix

Although I don't know what it is, but I passed by 8 and it seems that I have a little more creativity than me. Please encourage me. I want to remind you that the nine-tailed demon fox originated from China. The Japanese and American versions are all copied from China! The earliest legend about the nine-tailed fox in China dates back to the Shang Dynasty. They just imagined something based on China! Patriotic~Patriotic~

Eleven people, twenty-two pairs of eyes Does everyone have four eyes? Horrible~ Sir, please keep updating, the story is good, I look forward to the next one~

The writing is pretty good, but... Why does it become more and more confusing the more I read it?

Gone~ Come on, come on~

Oh oh The writing is quite interesting, but the language needs to be improved.

Sir, um, your hair reaches your calves, isn't it a bit too long... It's so long that it's hard to comb...

Situ Yiling stared at the speaker with her beautiful eyes, wide open in disbelief. There is something wrong with this sentence... It would be better to change it so that it is inconsistent...

What the adults wrote is quite interesting. It's almost finished. People are waiting to see it.

Not bad, come on! I'm looking forward to it!!