[Reborn!] Picking Up Hibari-Kun Wherever I Go

Hello author! The author has been waiting for a long time, so I read the full text and let me share my opinions. If there is anything wrong, please forgive me. First of all, I have to catch some chicken for my IQ. QAQ Luo Tianqin is a Chinese girl, right? Is she not in Japan? Then why did Mao need to borrow two dictionaries, one of which was a Japanese dictionary? This is not scientific! It is much more convenient to borrow an English-Chinese dictionary now! That's right, I've been struggling with this issue... They have clearly communicated in English on QAQ for so long, so the Japanese dictionary is actually of no use. [Ah hey] So, the author, can you tell me why? QAQ I checked the time when the author wrote the article. The part about writing the dictionary and the later part about using Chinese were in the morning and afternoon of the same day, so it shouldn't be that the author forgot the settings or something. QAQ Next, I will talk about the entire article. In fact, the whole article is really interesting... Why didn't Mao write a long novel? It must be more interesting! After all, it is a short story, so a lot of the plot is not acted out! [Ah hey] It would be so beautiful if there were more adultery and things like that! Quick EnoughActually, author, your sincerity in writing emotional dramas is quite beautiful! I especially like when the heroine and the hero are entangled. Although it is quite disturbing to watch, it is quite real... I like it very much! [Thumb As for the male protagonist, he is an original character, but the author does not have too much OOC in his portrayal. On the contrary, the author wrote that Dino's embarrassment is quite cute. But in the first scene, QAQ Dino was pitiful. The author must be his stepmother... So, is it really a miracle that Dino still dares to face the heroine in the future? If Dino knew that the girl in front of him would become the mother of his child... I wonder if he would be really calm. Dino is so miserable. Faced with his future wife, his face is covered in blood and hissing... It's really so melancholy! Author, I think you are a stepmother QAQ, otherwise why would you do this to our Dino! Although he was a little dazed, a little stupid, and a little fleshy [Ah hey! These are not good words! But it's not like... He peed in front of his future wife! [Ah, hey, you're still fussing over this! Well, the author is so cruel~ He also has a little H... He either pees or something... With such an impression, the heroine still doesn't dislike him and is still with him... It's really great! Ah hey Finally, let me complain about Wei Mao. If this article was not a long QAQ but a long one, the whole article would definitely be cuter! >_< Generally speaking, I personally like this article by the author very much. You can tell by reading my comments throughout the article... [Ah, hello, that's enough] I suggest that when the author writes the article, the short story should get into the topic as early as possible. If you want to write a tangled article, it is better to write a longer article... In this case, it may be better. The whole article is actually very cute. I personally like this feeling, it is joyful and a little sad [Ah hey! Are you sure? ! In short, the author doesn't need to lose confidence in writing homologues! The author's writing style is very cute! Above! I wish the author will write better and better~

Flames coming out of your head? Isn't this the tradition of Pongolie?

... Incontinence or something...

Poof, Dino hissed...