[Naruto] Always So Quiet

After many years, I have already regarded this extra chapter as the ending.

Please update it! It looks great!

First of all, I would like to thank Jiang Tangjiang who helped me with the coding~ It's really, really rare for a secretary to do this =v= What a great person~ (Jiang Tang: Kiss~ I'm so happy, I love you~) After being hidden for a month, I went to the shop to look through the shopping list due to itching hands. I was stunned for a second when I saw Axiang's shopping list. It turned out to be from Hokage... It was in my favorites early in the morning... But I won't say such a trivial thing, pfft... This article is very good. This is the conclusion I came to after reading the entire article. Because your cover, copy, and first chapter are all so misleading. Is that the second young master on the cover?! I won't tell you that I accepted the article because I mistakenly thought the male protagonist was the second young master =A=. Since the male protagonist of the article is Naruto and he will never change it, then let's get a picture of Naruto as the cover! Since you are so determined to attack Naruto, then write something like "Naruto, the male protagonist" in the copy. I have a gay friend who is madly in love with Naruto. Basically, all the articles about whoring the prince have her messages. One time I complained about Naruto in an article, and she left me a 0 rating without hesitation... Such a guy, she didn't even notice you... This shows how misleading your cover is... After reading the first chapter, I immediately felt that Axiang was writing a short story. Even if it is a short story, many places seem a bit streamlined. For example, the heroine's life experience can be left unexplained. The interaction between Yin and Naruto when they were young can also be shown in the form of interludes. Putting them all together seems very unnatural. Because it cannot be written in detail, Naruto's feelings for Yin will not be profound when written later. The sweeter they are when they are together, the more painful they will be when they are separated. That kind of cruelty can make people cry without using words to illustrate it. Therefore, I suggest that Axiang devote more space to their childhood days, and the subsequent effect will be better. Ah Xiang's writing is good! I do feel the slightest abuse! It can be seen from between the lines that Axiang thought deeply about the details of Naruto's character and plot, and indeed started the trap with true love. Compared with those articles that seem to be impetuous and blindly following trends at first glance, just the word "true love" can make people's eyes shine, and the writing is getting better and better. Let me talk about her voice first. From the article, we can determine that she is a girl who is a bit middle-aged and a bit impulsive. She is bright and sad in the corner where Naruto can't see. She went out for three years because of Naruto's broken appointment... But her sharp complaints about the second young master and Xiao Aili really made me unable to resist. For a person who loves to complain, her life will not be clouded for long. Oto always becomes inexplicably gloomy when he thinks about Naruto, and when he meets other people, he transforms into a complaining emperor. This attribute is really annoying... If it could be reversed, this sad story would be complete. =V= "Just like that, marrying an anime character? Really, is that okay?" When I read this, I suddenly felt that the heroine was being pretentious. She had liked Naruto for so long, and finally her merits were fulfilled, and she was about to fall over. She actually started to consider such a strange problem at a critical moment. If Naruto has always been an unreal anime character in Yin's heart, then what kind of existence is their love...? Besides, Yin has lived in Hokage for decades, so this unreality should have disappeared long ago, right? Now let's talk about Naruto. Although Naruto's body is full of the smell of sunshine, this kind of natural stupidity is used to write abuse, and the effect is surprisingly good. The emotions in the heroine's heart are ups and downs, but he pats her shoulder like a brother: "I like Sakura the most! Anosa, Xiaoyin, can you help me ask Sakura when she is willing to date me?..." Therefore, natural stupidity is the most hurtful. When writing about Naruto, as long as you grasp the characteristics of nature, you can be shockingly tortured. Naruto in Axiang's novel seems a bit sensitive? He doesn't know anything about romance, so he yells "Bagaya Road" when he gets angry... He always feels that he should escape the heroine, pfft. He is a prince with an aura that shines endlessly. Literature and art should not appear too much in him. Finally, let's talk about the article as a whole. Although it can attract resonance, it is a bit... Messy. It seems that I wanted to write a short story at first, but then I decided to write a longer one. If this is the case, I suggest revising the first chapter. It's not appropriate to put an extra chapter in the second chapter... The two extra chapters are like the last two endings of the article. When I read the following, I feel confused. The article reads like there is no outline, or the outline keeps changing. Coupled with the unclear direction of the extra chapters, I suddenly feel that the plot is very confusing. Axiang finally smoothed the article out from the beginning, and then decided on an outline, even if there is only one main line. Then this chaotic feeling will disappear automatically. Anyone who writes fan fiction with a true love for the original work will become a god. Moreover, Axiang's writing style is fine, but he is still a bit unsophisticated in some writing skills. I believe Axiang can write good articles as long as he perseveres~ PS I will recommend Wenwen to that idiot fan of Naruto ~ I wish you harvest all kinds of tiger oil ~ [Wochao Changping Shop] Produced by French fries

Author, how many of your articles are ours? Can you take on your responsibilities as an author? I keep giving up, and I keep saying I won't give up, and I definitely won't give up! Like this. This is deceiving our feelings and time!

I'm very happy that I didn't portray Ying Ying in a bad light in the article, but just treated her as an ordinary girl who makes mistakes! In fact, I came here from the electric shock article. Please work hard for every article!

It's so hard to wait, come back soon~~~T^T

Shower, shower, shower

I wonder if I will write a Bleach fanfic after watching Bleach...

Sigh... I haven't read any of Ying's novels, so I just left... I regret it, so sad... If I had known that the author liked Ying, I would have only read the first episode... I feel resentful...

Sigh... I haven't read any of Ying's novels, so I just left... If I didn't support the author at the beginning, I wouldn't have written a follow-up. If I didn't write it down, that episode would definitely be a classic!