[Detective Conan] Four-Leaf Clover

No cp, I feel like the atmosphere of Shinichi and Luo is very good!

Qwq actually has no cp

I just read the article from beginning to end yesterday and felt that I was awesome at [Mud Roll], so I gave myself a long review to express my admiration for myself [Mud Roll]. Well, I just made a summary and review, checked for any gaps, and prepared for the next customized overhaul. The stupid author has tried his best to look at this article from an objective perspective. Readers, please don't laugh at me QAQ After writing reasoning for so many years, it seems that I have finally gotten a handle on reasoning. The essence of mystery writing is not so much "solving a mystery" as it is a "puzzle", where the detective puts together the scattered clues to arrive at the only truth. Although it is difficult for readers to put together the puzzle, it is easy for the author to break the complete picture into pieces. Therefore, the most important thing for a reasoning article is to provide enough "pieces" that can be put together, that is, clues, or a large number of details. Yes, in a mystery essay, the most important thing is the details. In this article, from Chapter 1, Chen Luo's reaction when he first meets Xinyi, to Chapter 11, until Chen Luo discovers the truth about the living room, all eleven chapters are given in secret. There are enough details to piece together a complete puzzle, so that when the truth is revealed, it won't feel too abrupt. In the reasoning stage, Shinichi's reasoning was indeed completely based on those details. There was no such thing as "God's foreknowledge" by the detective or the author's malicious concealment of important clues that was inconsistent with his original reasoning. And the truth is reasonable enough. In this regard, purely as a case-based reasoning, this article is relatively successful. And the structure of the article is also very complete. From Chapter 1 to Chapter 11 is the foreshadowing stage. The author spends a lot of space to give various clues to hint at the real murderer. From Chapter 12 to Chapter 15 is the real reasoning stage. The secondary reasoning has two climaxes, and the final big reversal and the discovery of the real murderer. Network, expose the distortions of human nature, elevate ordinary reasoning literature to a certain height (of course, it is not actually too high), and then end it hastily, without giving the exact scene of the real murderer being arrested, but using dawn as the ending, leaving a blank space to make people feel meaningful. Although the article is not long, it is indeed perfect from beginning to end, and everything that needs to be written has been written. The structure of this article is complete and complete, which is in line with what Xipi said, "A sparrow is small but has all the internal organs." The author is a reversal star. I loved the reversal and reversal of "Destined" back then, so this article also uses the final reversal method [proud face]. When I was writing this article, I suddenly thought of the skull in the Kindaichi School Murder Incident and the Castle Murder Incident in Conan, and I silently borrowed them. But for now, it's considered a success, and I'm silently narcissistic. Next comes the shortcomings. If this article is compared to a strong small house, then the structure is equivalent to the load-bearing structures such as beams, slabs and columns, which form the basic framework of the house; the plot is equivalent to the bricks, and the characters are equivalent to the plaster. The high-viscosity ash sticks each brick together and is arranged closely against the beams, slabs and columns; and the text represents the internal and external decoration, that is, the exquisiteness of the house. If the house is to be strong enough, in addition to ensuring that the structure is intact and the stress is reasonable so that it will not collapse, it is also necessary to ensure that every brick is a complete and good brick, and that the walls are built without cracks that would bring hidden dangers to the house. But for this article, the hidden dangers do exist. To make this house collapse, you must attack the thinnest and most vulnerable wall. And corresponding to this article, the weakest wall is the link of "connection with the outside world". Although the setting of the phone being stolen is given a clear explanation later in the article, it is still reasonable; and the setting of everyone being trapped because the doors and windows are locked is extremely far-fetched. If it is more drastic, it is not impossible to just smash the window and escape; in the end, the plot of Shinichi jumping out of the window to ask for help is simply a stroke of genius, full of loopholes, and Madoka will never come back [with a bloody face]. It can be seen from this that the content of "contacting with the outside world" needs to be reset and improved. Even the cliffs in the deep mountains are more reliable than this, right? Then, the description of the "character's first reaction" such as everyone's reaction when they learned that someone was killed, and the interaction between Chen Luo and Shinichi (such as the plot where Chen Luo pretended that someone had broken into the house) were very poorly done. The character's conditioned response didn't seem natural enough, which was a big flaw, because at that time, he was describing other information, trying to intersperse complicated information, but forgetting the priority, and it also seemed a bit messy and not organized enough. Therefore, the tension of the scene was not shown. For example, when Shinichi informed everyone that Ikeda was killed, it took a long time for everyone to react. QAQ, these areas still need to enhance the atmosphere, sort out the order of description, and try to write in a different way. The processing will be better. Finally, there is the text. This article uses a no-nonsense way to write about the case, without unnecessary supplements. This can indeed make the plot compact and the rhythm easy to grasp, but if it is overdone, it will seem to be too much. The text is dry and less interesting to read. Moreover, in the middle part of the dialogue, in order to highlight the tension during the confrontation between the two sides, no additional words from the speaker outside the double quotation marks were added. It would feel better to use some character movements and expressions interspersed from time to time as an adjustment. Then, the atmosphere is not done well enough. Although I consciously want to enhance the atmosphere, it is just that the thought of writing is far-fetched, and the atmosphere is not natural enough. If you want to modify it, just add some descriptions of characters' movements, expressions, and environment descriptions to make the text come alive. At least this is an artistic novel, not a cold statement. I don't seem to see any other problems, that's about it. In fact, I didn't think about the case and the murderer at all at the beginning of this article, only the setting of a female protagonist, and then I rushed [face covering] The number and names of the tenants were all imagined in real time. When I wrote the murder, I just thought, kill one first and then talk about it. [Hey] With my continuous brainstorming, I finally came around. I completed all the settings in the middle of the article. The murderer gets√, the motivation gets√, how many brain cells were consumed during it... You all know. But even so, you can't tell that I didn't have an outline from the beginning, not even a setting! So I am indeed a genius! So awesome! Dirt That's it for the summary and review. The next step is to think about how to modify it. The author's bacteria crawled away silently~

Good, the plot is very good. If you pay more attention to the thinking logic and so on, there will be a lot of room for improvement.

Sure enough, I knew that A Luo liked Kudou Shinichi, haha

Hahaha, the murderer is indeed Honda, that's right. Although it's quite sad, it turns out that old man Miyagi is not a good guy. The old lady was wrong. It turned out that she was really weak. She guessed wrong, but it was excusable. I give myself a pat on the back.

As a New Orchid Party member, I actually want to become a New Orchid Party member. Oh, this idea is really enough.

Four-leaf clover, Japan symbolizes happiness (????????????) Not only Japan

This article is really good...

Shinichi... My male god