Onionhead, Long Time No See

My child, don't you separate yourself into segments? Feeling dizzy... This person has trypophobia and has been frightened...

The title of the book is so lovely. I think it's better to divide this article into paragraphs, otherwise it will be tiring to read. I'm a newbie too, please come back and give me some advice.

There is a problem with the layout. It looks... A bit tired. I can write more maturely. I don't have a strong sense of immersion. I need to write more and practice. Come on~

It's directed at the author, but it feels like it's a bit cliche, but it seems that romance novels are roughly the same. Anyway, please come on. I like talking to you the most. I like your positivity, like a sunflower. Looking forward to your next chapter and, in the future, more works. Come on, Moon Goddess,

Dear, you probably still don't know how to change punctuation marks to half-width, right? I used to do the same thing before, haha, I used word to write, first select the full text, in the format, click on the upper and lower case, and half-width and full-width will be interchanged, which makes it look much more convenient. Come on, we are all newbies, we must come on even more!

Dear~~~ Please be more detailed. By the way, I really like copywriting introductions~ Newcomers hook up ~ spread flowers!

The layout is too dense. I think the text is pretty good, but I am also very bleak. Please take a look when you have time.

You can ask for a cover

This long article looks very tiring.

The psychology of the characters can be written in more depth, but the psychological description of the heroine seems not enough.