[The Prince of Tennis: Reverse Crossing] Hello, You Reckless Fool
[网王反穿]你好，作死君
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 52k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 9y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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Oh hehe~ Come on!
Although I came very late, I still want to say to the author that your writing is very good and the ending is very warm. Come on~~
Author, let me give you some advice: First of all, there are too many language descriptions in your article. You should add some scene descriptions and character descriptions [such as ski resorts, people in maid cafes, and the heroine's friends and the hero] and reduce the language descriptions. In addition, the heroine talks to herself too much and could use less. The writing style is a bit too rough and should be more narrative. However, the article is still good, but there should be more interaction with the male protagonist, otherwise the relationship would be too monotonous, and classmate Mu Heng should have some descriptions about his love for the female protagonist... Regarding the female protagonist's friends, Lou Lan also needs to explain and talk more. Also, this ending must be completed. It does not necessarily mean that the male protagonist will travel back in time. He can also have some thoughts in another world, or hide some things in the photo album [such as letters or notes], or ask others to hand over notes... ╮(╯▽╰)╭In short, the article is good. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you! I seem to talk too much...
If it's an ending, it's a bad ending! Someone will definitely hit you!
If it's an ending, it's a bad ending! Someone will definitely hit you!
Good luck in the college entrance examination, this article has been collected. If you don't update after the exam, I'll whip you!
Good luck in the college entrance examination, this article has been collected. If you don't update after the exam, I'll whip you!
Good luck in the college entrance examination, this article has been collected. If you don't update after the exam, I'll whip you!
Oh oh oh oh oh oh I couldn't help myself when I saw this chapter! Great progress! Author Jun, cheer for the college entrance examination
I remember it, don't give up, wait for the update