Return to Peace

Author, you little goblin, you don't even need a tutor!

Inexplicably, there is an illusion called Xiao Huanyun.

It's so cruel that I don't want it QAQ

Love is a very mysterious thing. Sometimes it comes to you before you know it. Sometimes you may not wait for it in your whole life. Sometimes it is like a burden, and sometimes it is a kind of belief. Love is This illusory thing seems to be indestructible, but in fact it is like a person's life, which is long and short. Sooner or later, it will be worn out slowly, just like Xia Zigui to Ning Xin in the article, and Ning Xin to Xia Ziyan, who is disappointed when he asks but cannot get. . . The author's description is very detailed, and the writing is like a long stream. It is a very good short story.

Sorry for the wait and the delay in commenting. I must say this is a very good short story [angry praise] The characters are portrayed very well. Whether it is Ning Xin, Zi Gui, Zi Yan, or the other supporting characters, everyone has a distinct personality and is so heart-wrenching. Xia Zigui was not wrong, he was undoubtedly the most innocent of all people. His birth was not his choice, falling in love with Ning Xin was not his choice, and ascending to the throne was not his choice. Perhaps his biggest mistake was not fighting for himself. He should tell Ning Xin that I met you so early and gave you gifts for so long. He single-handedly caused the miss between him and Ning Xin. But if this were not the case, he would not be Xia Zigui, the Xia Zigui who had always loved Ning Xin, and the Xia Zigui who was finally loved by Ning Xin. Ning Xin was not wrong, she was a spoiled little girl. She knew nothing, but how could a girl who had always enjoyed boundless pampering and been tolerated by everyone know so much. The person involved never told her that her gullibility when she was young deceived her and the maid beside her betrayed her. By the time she was truly freed from Shao Bu Geng Shi, Xia Zigui had already left her. How she had hurt Xia Zigui before, and how distressed she felt after she understood. There is no better ending than this, he killed you and used our children to blackmail me, so I killed his children and our children killed him. I know you will forgive me, Zigui, just as you have always tolerated my willfulness. Xia Zigui was not wrong. He could not forget his hatred and the pain that the eldest princess had inflicted on him. He would do everything he could to get revenge. He had never owned anything, the warmth of his family had no chance for him, and Ning Xin's tenderness was ruined by his own hands, so he wanted to destroy everything, beauty and happiness. After all, he doesn't understand anything, whether it's love or hate. People always have to pay a price, no matter what they gain. There are not so many bad people in this world, but there are so many irreconcilable contradictory positions. In addition, the structure of this article is also very appropriate. It starts with the scene of Zigui's death, and then leads to memories, first from Ning Xin's perspective, her disgust for Zigui, her pursuit of Ziyan, her disappointment at being betrayed, and her helplessness in desperately trying to redeem herself. Later, Zi Gui's perspective made the entire misunderstanding clear, and the miss between the two became extremely regrettable. Ziyan's perspective is like a thread that connects the entire story, and all previous doubts can be explained clearly. There was so much love in the past, so much hate now. [I want to end a ridiculous mistake that has been made for many years. It was a mistake from beginning to end, and we didn't even know it. So now, I'm taking matters into my own hands. The foreshadowing and hidden lines are well laid out, but if I really want to say it, I think the scenes between Qinghui and Awu can be increased appropriately. I think Qinghui's attitude towards Ning Xin was from never understanding, or even hating, to later being relieved, but it is hard to say whether she can forgive her mother, even if Ning Xin had to compromise for her sake. As well as A Wu's choice, the master-servant scene, she should also have a bit of a struggle to complete Zi Yan's instructions, I think. This addition should make the ending more natural. The language is very fluent and has a melancholic temperament. Although it may seem a bit sour in some cases, it is still more appropriate in the context of such a story. As for the bloody stuff... Just liking it is enough! I hope the author can write more equally excellent works~

I like this! It's really my thing! I finally wrote about this ancient style, keep writing, and enjoy this article! ! !