The Pronunciation Corner Beneath the Pagoda Tree

What, Momo, isn't there someone watching? Yoxi, not bad~ Let's continue to support or something~

Some words are a bit inappropriate. It's a little wordy in places. It's quite cute. It's too late, I'm going to bed, Xiao Mo, come on. Practice more and things will change! I will continue to follow you

Now, I think the silent writing is okay, but there is always a sense of immaturity between the lines. Liang Xiaohuan is obviously a college student, but it gives me the feeling of being a high school student or even a junior high school student. By the way, how does Mo Mo plan to unfold the plot? I feel that this kind of progress is a bit fast. Ordinarily, such a relaxed campus novel should be composed of various small things in daily life. The protagonists are subtly influenced by each other and discover each other's shortcomings or advantages, and then accept each other's existence in their own lives. After experiencing some difficulties together, everyone ends up happy... I personally hope that Momo can speed up the pace in some places and the narrative techniques are more mature. Hey, come on.

I looked at it a little bit and said that it would be better to have fewer brackets like "(Emma finally used this word =T△T=...)", Which generally looks a little childish. The author should try to make complaints in the article as little as possible. Unless you are like lililicat, the story is so exciting that even though the writing style is a bit rough, but readers don't want to give up, few readers will tolerate this. There are many exclamation mark expressions and wavy lines appearing at the same time, which can be seen silently. The writing style needs to be improved. But I feel it still has potential. If you want to read an author who is not good at writing but has good stories and is very popular, you can learn from lililicat. For a happy-go-lucky style, you can read Taobaojuan. The articles in Taobaojuan are very humorous and joyful, but they make people laugh naturally. Touch it and come on. You still have room to grow. It's much better than before, when I was just a novice when I first started writing. You're much better than I was at the beginning.

Forgot to give a score, please add one... Also, being short and concise is a compliment, dear... Unless you want to brag... I don't like little girls who are coy, and I don't like guys who pretend to be aloof, but this author has something to say... It's a bit coy, at least I can't stand it. (He is just a child!) The author's cuteness helps to win the love of readers, but... This way of speaking will never win the favor of those who are more powerful! Of course, I seem to be overdoing it. Anyway, in the end it's up to you, I'm just expressing my personal opinion orz By the way, I remembered one more thing... That is... A sick sentence. Girls will be particularly sensitive to these things when you are in the second or third year of high school, and you will feel uncomfortable when you see them... So I saw that the obsessive-compulsive disorder has flared up again... Pay more attention in the future. After you finish writing the article, look back and make corrections.

After reading the first chapter, I feel like this is pretty good for a newcomer. But readers will not lower their reading standards just because you are a newcomer. Everyone still likes to pursue high-standard things, so I will give you some suggestions and please be strict with yourself w First, there should be no such thing as "(Emma finally used this word =T△T=...)"! How does this kind of thing make people feel? Junior high school students will find it "so friendly and cute", high school students will find it "childish and informal", and college students will find it "a bit intolerable". Because this thing will affect the style of the article, people can't help but think: Playing house... Second, when it comes to dialogue sections, do not stack them together, but alternate lines. Third, I want to nag a question... Many people think that happy articles just abuse exclamation marks, modal particles, and Internet language, and everyone makes exaggerated movements like chicken blood. In fact, this view is very superficial. Momoji can go and see some real masters (red literature does not mean good writing skills, so be cautious). Really good humor is humorous without being frivolous, but most online fun articles are quite frivolous. It would be better to bring some black humor, but this kind of thing needs to be understood slowly, and it cannot be achieved in one or two attempts. The ancients said that if you succeed quickly, you will die quickly. For example, the female supporting character's way of speaking is too... While I suppose she did it on purpose, to be honest, it was too much. This kind of... Language style only needs to appear occasionally, but if it appears in a complete film, it will make people abandon the article. That's all for now, come on, Momobacteria. Www