Every time I wake from a dream, I feel a strange sadness in my heart. I listen to other people's stories of their past lives and watch the dead journey to the Yellow Springs. I cannot join the grieving families in their wails, so I can only watch coldly from the sidelines.
Dominate the government and the public? What does this have to do with this article? This is not a court. Although you brought back the topic at the end, I also saw it. It's a pity that the framework of this article has been destroyed by you. You need to lay out the future well. I think your articles are very strange. They look very attractive but are not substantive. There is no explosive effect.
And you have to be more diligent! Don't always stay at home like a dead pig doing nothing. Update your posts frequently. If you don't be more careful, I will post reminder posts. The ones you have seen are in the post bar.
As for the rest! We were talking when we met! (Conversation between the author and the author) I hope you can make my eyes shine tomorrow. You won't be wearing pajamas again, your hair is uncombed, and you look like hemiplegia.
Although there are few words, there is enough information. It quotes songs and poems, which is good, but what is the point of this article? Is it just to show off songs and poems? You know that one chapter is rich in content, so pay close attention to the others.
And don't be lazy! Create well and don't let the readers be sorry. Each chapter must have a center. This chapter is too scattered. I can't see the center. I only know that he is going to hell. What you do is a waste. By the way, do you want to end it early or continue writing a long story?
That's definitely a digression. The dream of memories sounds like the memories of a deceased person. In your article, it can be understood as the memories of a ghost. You did not fully express this. You can make improvements in the later stage. A little more life inspiration and a little more emotion will be a highlight of the article and the number can be increased. This is what I did.
Both you and I have used Manzhushahua. In my case, Manzhushahua is a flower used to record stories. It sends their memories to the dead but does not have any memories or stories. In my article, I used "Mute House", "Floating Creatures", "Seven Deadly Sins" and "Qin Shi Mingyue". You can also try to make the article more charming. Just grasp the center of the article and wrap up the overall frame of the article.
I think highly of you because this article is very creative and thoughtful. This shows that your writing is flexible and different from those who are rigid. Moreover, the scope of your article can be very wide, involving time and space travel, soul travel, and more other ideas. Your article will be more dynamic and will not become a dead article. Also, since you quoted so many ancient sayings, why can't you increase the number? This article can be passed by at a glance, because most people cannot understand the ancient sentences.
Note that every article must have a soul, and by the way, you have got the basic Zhiyin Manke ^^
Was he hit by a car on the way to buy soy sauce? What a cheating reason that is! He was unlucky, too. The title of "The Tribulation of Ten Lives" is a good one. What delayed you? It's none of my business, right? Novels about ghosts and ghosts focus on the emotional entanglement of human beings. They focus on maintaining a sense of mystery and not always letting too many people know about hell. It is best to express the psychological state of the characters and to be multi-faceted. .
I still want to write the story about the Return of the King of Super Beast Arms. If you want to read it, please search fandom, romance, fantasy future, anime, drama, keywords: Romance of the Ages, Fantasy Space, Super Power. Then type in the name of the protagonist of Super Beast Arms. Remember to search on the Tongren website!
Shen Danli, come on, although typing is very troublesome, you can't let down the readers. I'm optimistic about you, and I will always pay attention to you, my good sister.
The story is very good... Very suspenseful, and the writing style is also very good. Come on^o^
Dominate the government and the public? What does this have to do with this article? This is not a court. Although you brought back the topic at the end, I also saw it. It's a pity that the framework of this article has been destroyed by you. You need to lay out the future well. I think your articles are very strange. They look very attractive but are not substantive. There is no explosive effect. And you have to be more diligent! Don't always stay at home like a dead pig doing nothing. Update your posts frequently. If you don't be more careful, I will post reminder posts. The ones you have seen are in the post bar. As for the rest! We were talking when we met! (Conversation between the author and the author) I hope you can make my eyes shine tomorrow. You won't be wearing pajamas again, your hair is uncombed, and you look like hemiplegia.
Although there are few words, there is enough information. It quotes songs and poems, which is good, but what is the point of this article? Is it just to show off songs and poems? You know that one chapter is rich in content, so pay close attention to the others. And don't be lazy! Create well and don't let the readers be sorry. Each chapter must have a center. This chapter is too scattered. I can't see the center. I only know that he is going to hell. What you do is a waste. By the way, do you want to end it early or continue writing a long story? That's definitely a digression. The dream of memories sounds like the memories of a deceased person. In your article, it can be understood as the memories of a ghost. You did not fully express this. You can make improvements in the later stage. A little more life inspiration and a little more emotion will be a highlight of the article and the number can be increased. This is what I did. Both you and I have used Manzhushahua. In my case, Manzhushahua is a flower used to record stories. It sends their memories to the dead but does not have any memories or stories. In my article, I used "Mute House", "Floating Creatures", "Seven Deadly Sins" and "Qin Shi Mingyue". You can also try to make the article more charming. Just grasp the center of the article and wrap up the overall frame of the article. I think highly of you because this article is very creative and thoughtful. This shows that your writing is flexible and different from those who are rigid. Moreover, the scope of your article can be very wide, involving time and space travel, soul travel, and more other ideas. Your article will be more dynamic and will not become a dead article. Also, since you quoted so many ancient sayings, why can't you increase the number? This article can be passed by at a glance, because most people cannot understand the ancient sentences. Note that every article must have a soul, and by the way, you have got the basic Zhiyin Manke ^^
Was he hit by a car on the way to buy soy sauce? What a cheating reason that is! He was unlucky, too. The title of "The Tribulation of Ten Lives" is a good one. What delayed you? It's none of my business, right? Novels about ghosts and ghosts focus on the emotional entanglement of human beings. They focus on maintaining a sense of mystery and not always letting too many people know about hell. It is best to express the psychological state of the characters and to be multi-faceted. .
I still want to write the story about the Return of the King of Super Beast Arms. If you want to read it, please search fandom, romance, fantasy future, anime, drama, keywords: Romance of the Ages, Fantasy Space, Super Power. Then type in the name of the protagonist of Super Beast Arms. Remember to search on the Tongren website!
Shen Danli, come on, although typing is very troublesome, you can't let down the readers. I'm optimistic about you, and I will always pay attention to you, my good sister.
The story is very good... Very suspenseful, and the writing style is also very good. Come on^o^