Case-Cracking Star, The Villain Has a Crush on Me
Hua Xiaoai is a tough policewoman with an impeccable record and an utterly aboveboard approach to her work.
There's only one person who's been the biggest failure of her career.
Whenever she stakes out a place, investigates a case, or sets up surveillance, he appears with uncanny precision, haunting her every step.
He knows everything about her.
She knows nothing about him.
They've clashed countless times, but she can't find a shred of evidence against him.
She can't beat him, talk him down, or get away from him. He has her completely under his thumb.
At last, she can't take it anymore. "What do you want from me?"
The next second, the cold and ruthless man turns red at the tips of his ears and says, shyly but earnestly, "Actually... I just wanted you to know that I like you."
Hua Xiaoai: ???
Weren't they supposed to be mortal enemies?
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This article is also well written. I like Alan Dada's writing style.
The copywriting struck a chord in me, such as scumbags, reunions, etc. I like bloody stories, even though I don't write them myself. Haha, dear, I'm here to keep my claws!
Sprinkle flowers~ collect them and watch slowly~
Review of "The Complete Captivity Manual" I like to comment on the final article the most. 1. It can have a complete story, 2. It also saves the author trouble - you are so right when you say it, well, even if you are right, if you change it, you are afraid that readers will think it is fake. The final article is different. You can completely follow the principle of "if there is something, correct it and if it doesn't exist, then encourage it. If it doesn't exist, just treat it like air." No nonsense, just comment directly. 1. Title The title is impeccable, it makes people think a lot as soon as they see it, the advantages are ignored, and the disadvantages are not there. 2. Introduction It basically meets the requirements, just a little bit too much. Original text: Everyone says that people get married only after they have children, and the people around me basically get married after they have children. Gu Jiajia thought beautifully: As long as she has children, she can marry the man she loves. However, when she happily showed the pregnancy test sheet to the man. But the man said scumbag: "Marry? Don't even think about it! Abort him!" Then, the man threw down a stack of RMB, hugged the sexy and hot girl and left! Her dream shattered????! Should I abort the child in my belly or not? Seven years later, when she was about to marry a second-generation rich man, the scumbag once again shattered her dream! When can she get married in such a miserable life? The poisonous tongue thinks so: Everyone talks about marrying after having children, and most of the people around me get married after having children. However, when she happily showed the pregnancy test sheet to the man. But the man threw down a stack of RMB, hugged the sexy and hot girl and left! Seven years later, when she was about to marry a second-generation rich man, the scumbag once again shattered her dream! When can she get married in such a miserable life? Would this be better? For reference only. 2. Pictures I don't know if there are any requirements when asking for pictures, but at first glance, this picture will make people sigh--is this what Mao means? The article is completely wrong!!! However, if you have the patience to think about it carefully, it's pretty good! Look at the road, look at the fog ahead——Complete Captivity Manual? The future is unclear! Moreover, the color tone is also a hopeful blue-green! There must be countless uncertainties and all kinds of cuteness, so it's not a sin to order it... Tutu, close to perfect score! 3. Text Too thunderous (fake)! There is no foreshadowing when a man and a woman kiss. "Tang Qifeng smiled nonchalantly. Because he could no longer be a policeman, the old man in his family forced him to go back and inherit his father's business every day..." My dear heroine wasn't described as stunning, right? For a man with such financial conditions, the number of women he has seen is not 1,000 but 8,000 (including movies, TV magazines, and passers-by)... If Tang Qifeng is an open-minded man, at least he can give me some hints. If you meet a nice woman and have a deep French kiss, are you not afraid of getting hepatitis??? Okay, there was a direct kiss in the first chapter, and in the second chapter, they met and kissed again ----- If it is a rebirth, meeting the love of the past life is acceptable, but this kiss, it seems not... Everyone likes their protagonist to be Snow White, but don't forget that Snow White is a princess herself! Okay, okay, let's count Cinderella, then Cinderella also grew up little by little. For example, if the heroine is forcibly kissed by a handsome guy whom she meets for the first time, is there no deeper suspicion? Or does the heroine think she is the kind of person who loves cars and gets flat tires when everyone sees her? What Aijia means is that it's okay to meet for the first time, or even have sex. But there has to be a reason, right? Either it has a secret purpose, or the heroine is so stunningly beautiful that people cannot restrain themselves (if this is the case, it must be foreshadowed, otherwise it will be just a little bit of red lips that thousands of people will taste)... Balabala… 1. The protagonist's character is not outstanding enough! "..." Now, she couldn't bear it anymore! No matter what his contract or job, she wouldn't call him Hua Xiaoai if he didn't give this owed man a beating. . 67D96d458abdef21792e6d8e590244e7 @ Copyright of Jinjiang Original Network @ And There is also the action of the heroine brushing her teeth while confessing. It makes readers feel that the heroine is actually a stubborn and self-respecting girl. If she encounters these, the heroine's external reaction and inner changes are not described enough, especially when she meets a woman who is exactly like herself (after plastic surgery), she is too calm! . Well, that's almost it. Summary: The storyline is good and there are many highlights but the author did not capture it well. The writing is smooth and the end of the chapter can lead to the next chapter well. Suggestion: Search for Zhang Dingding's articles. The stories she writes have clear lines and no complicated structures, but the characters are outstanding. She is good at writing a simple thing in a fresh and moving way.
Come to collect the article, come on, adults~
Very interesting article, so beautiful, I took it away
Come and check it out~ Come on, the author will update more. Taken away
Alas, it's a bit long, so I'll accept it first and read slowly~
I'm back for a visit. My writing style is very good. I'm a contracted author. It's amazing~~ And the heroine and my Wenwen have the same last name, Hua. Did they belong to the same family 500 years ago? Hahaha●▽●
Ruolanjiang~A certain demon came to collect the article~ The article has been collected~, By the way, I saw a rather special name again~, Hua Xiaoai~hahaha~