[Free!] Trajectory

Before love This is the long review promised to be sent to my king! Give it to your favorite Free! The fan author——Jinji=3= The first time I saw an article written by Jinji was late at night during the summer vacation last year. It was also because of this fanfic that I couldn't help but start writing my favorite story. OTZ, my writing skills are limited, so I will just tell you my thoughts—— This is a story about being lonely, pursuing water and other people's feelings before love. The heroine Shiina Ao is a confused, cold and lonely girl. Her facial paralysis is one of her cute features, and it also lays the foundation for the unobstructed communication between her and Nanase Haruka. In addition, they both like mackerel (fairy), which naturally allows the two to put down their guard and show their true side when they get along. Shiina Ao is lonely. The influence of her family environment makes her character detached and calm, and to a certain extent, she is a bit natural. Whether it's the water droplets falling from her cheeks and making tiny ripples on the water, her dejected expression because she couldn't get into the water, or her murmuring "I can't find her", these are the basic undertones of her loneliness. The visual language of incandescent lamps with uncertain brightness and large expanses of floating clouds falling apart are symbolic techniques for expressing this emotion. Then she met Nanase Haruka, and through Nanase Haruka she met many people. "Love" is the highlight of "Trajectory". However, before love, this kind of love is not just the love between men and women, but also includes Shiina Ao's love for everyone. "She has fallen in love with this group of people unknowingly, and in the days to come, she will only fall in love more and more, until her love is deep in her bones," "As long as she can swim with them," and other such words. Both Shiina Ao and Nanase Haruka, although they seem to be independent from the world, are full of praise for everyone and the life they bring. Everyone was by her side, laughing and moving together. For Nanase Haruka and Shiina Ao, the intersection of two similar life trajectories lived meekly in front of everyone. Shiina Ao seems to give people a feeling of weakness, weakness, and indifference at all times. Although she envied Nanase Haruka for being able to fight for the water she loved, she had lost all the courage to swim again after being alone for many years. Then she met Nanase Haruka. He did not forget her, but stayed with her as if there was no presence, and tactfully prevented her from being alone. When she was discouraged and depressed, he gave Nanase Haruka's unique encouragement and care. Therefore, in the final chapter of "Trajectory", the sentence "I seem to - I kind of want to see you." - Such a simple but sincere inner confession, and the rather literary ending naturally fit the two characters' personalities. There is no need for intense love words that scream to heaven and earth. Just the inner words of "I want to see you" derived from caring about each other can lay a lot of foreshadowing for the subsequent story of the two people. Next comes "Trajectory." As the text says, Shiina Ao is not strong enough, so she does not dare to follow the trajectory of water; but Nanase Haruka is the one who can lead her to pursue the trajectory. Whether it is "loneliness" or "love", they are all paving the way for "trajectories". When the distance between the heart and the heart is widened, and the trajectories do not intersect, that is loneliness; when the distance between the heart and the heart is shortened, and the trajectories overlap in pairs, there is love. Shiina Aoi is running to shorten the distance - shorten the distance between her and Shiina Jin, shorten the distance between her and her mother, shorten the distance with Nanase Haruka. She worked hard, but didn't know whether the direction she chose was correct, until she met Nanase Haruka and got to know each other, and he led her to pursue it. The growth of her inner experience has given her the strength to face the future, and at the same time, the love and bond between her and Nanase Haruka have become clearer. ↑I feel like I'm thinking too much... QAQ Why does the apparently light-hearted writing style of "Trajectory" make me feel so heavy when I think about it, bastard! Lie When I write this long review, it is raining in the city where I live. Although he is a BG fan of Nanase Haruka, what impressed me deeply was the meeting between Shiina Ao and Matsuoka Rin. The first meeting between the two was an unpromised meeting. The season was early spring and it was raining that day. Her azure hair and his body were soaked. The surroundings were enveloped by the fragrance of rain, and his pupils were reflected in the girl's calm eyes - so Matsuoka Rin must have fallen in love with Ao Shiina at first sight! "Sir, I wanted to tell you from the beginning. It seems that your pants are not zipped properly." 2333333 From now on, every time Little Shark sees Shiina, these words will echo in his mind like a spell! Then as the plot progresses, although it is not clearly stated how Little Shark feels about the girl, I think he should also like it... After all, there is no one else but Shiina Aoi who can say it with a straight face [What's wrong] What I like most about "Trajectory" is the literary and artistic tone that is not pretentious. I had read some Black Basket and other comics intermittently before. Some of them were ordinary sugar-filled narratives, and some were full of literary and artistic accents. The sugar-spreading article is okay, as it has the jumpiness and plot of the story as a basis; however, I cannot accept the latter. Paying too much attention to the modification of language and the arrangement of rhetoric will only make the article seem empty and boring without content - not to mention, it is a competitive fan. However, "Trajectory" achieves equal emphasis on plot and literature, neutralizing the two. The plot follows the main line, and the beautiful metaphors that appear from time to time to suit the psychological activities of the characters are just right. There is no deliberate sense of violation, and everything is natural and comfortable. Delicate but not pretentious, sad but not resentful. But my lord, some sentences in the article need to be rethought QWQ By the way, although the plot of "Trajectory" is very natural, it is not particularly outstanding, and there is a feeling of "cannot escape the original setting of Free". It's a common old plot of "getting out of the shadow of the family and growing up", but it doesn't affect the praise given to me by the whole fan. I don't know what my next fan article will be... And the extras should be written quickly, I say! I hope I will have the opportunity to experience the story between Shiina Ao and Nanase Haruka again, and the laughter, passion and touch it brings! After a year, you finally came back to update - the whole universe cried with joy. This is the return of literature and art during the rainy season. In this season where summer has arrived, this sudden first rain is just right. Ghost Record 2014-7-25

In fact, it's really good to marry a brother. Nissan is so good. It's so cruel. Q_Q

Maybe it feels like Little Shark likes girls, right? It's been a while since I've seen Shark Dabenming come out. Now I feel like Nanase needs to work harder 2333333

After reading this chapter, I feel that Cang and Yao are a good match

Brother, marry my love o(*////▽////*)q

Brother, marry my love o(*////▽////*)q

... I finally understand, the so-called extra, even if I ask you to torture all the people who are cute to me but you didn't torture enough in the main text... Are you fucking kidding me? ! ! ! ! →_→

I love-Nissan-Nissan-! ! ! ! [Cheering with both hands]

. . . In fact, it's not bad to marry a brother [live your brain]

∑Brother Sang really has bad intentions towards Cang Jiang