[Harry Potter] The Treasure of the Heart: SS/HP

It's very beautiful. The author forgot his number or...

Oh, I can't like Lily anymore... Personally, I don't think Harry's mentality will be like this after going through so many twists and turns. He will feel pain and sorrow for the people who died in the war, but he will never be defeated by these feelings. Love cannot capture him, nor can it become the whole of his life. His optimism and vitality will not be lost when the disaster subsides, and his emotions will not become a fetter for him. He may choose to withdraw from the public eye and live a quiet and leisurely life, but he will never stand still. He will look at everything with the most impartial eye, and prejudice will not sway him, because he will no longer look at people through colored glasses. Although he will have negative emotions, he will break free from them and it will not bother him for long. The war made him calm, and the war also forced him to grow up. His character would become gentle, like a piece of jade. Even though he would still sigh for love, he would never look at his mother with such an attitude. What's more, without Lily's sacrifice, blood magic cannot continue. He was grateful. Therefore, Harry's attitude towards Lily in the article is a bit difficult to understand and accept personally.

Madam, it's T_T2023! I want a second meal ( ??? ? ??? )

Abandoned article... If it is a secondary creation with major changes, there are no innovative changes to the original character, except for Harry's elf ancestry. And this part of the description makes me feel a bit middle-aged (? I don't know how to describe it. If it is based on the original character, it does not create an independent character image, and the parts that follow the original work are not translated well... For example, Snape's "venomous tongue" only uses a few words such as "great savior", and even the expressions of some single sentences are strange. In terms of text expression, although many wives who write well do not pay too much attention to some details. The expression is subtle, but at least there are no parts that make people uncomfortable to read... Periods are used too frequently in some places, some sentences are not very smooth, and there are no interesting innovations in the plot; I really like sshp articles, and most of the time I can find good articles if I avoid the highlights, but this article is really painful to read. I don't mean to blame the author, I just express my opinion on this article.

Does it look good? When will the author update it again?

Draco definitely likes Xiao Ha, right?

Oh. Parentheses are fun. There was no atmosphere for a second.

... The professor's attitude ummm... The conciseness doesn't mention whether the professor is wearing it or not. Why does the emotional span be so wide...

Like this book very much. But, is this the rhythm of giving up?

From Yinqing. . . Will that extra episode be supplemented in Yinqing? . .