Until Even Fairy Tales Grow Old
直到童话也老去
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 8k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 13y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
6Chapters
1Favorites
128Clicks per chapter
3Comments
Reader comments 3
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直到童话也老去
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[The tip of the pen is a little sour] ← "The tip of the pen" should be "the tip of the nose"; [The sun shines directly into my eyes] ← It sounds awkward to read, eh, it feels quite strange. Change the "eye sockets"? Hee hee hee, the heroine has a very interesting personality.
[In fact, it is not good to watch too many people talking on the phone] ← "Talking" should be changed to "Fairy Tale". The description of campus life is simple and sincere, and looks really friendly. The last sentence is the rhythm of tragedy.
Finally, it's time to scan for typos and punctuation issues. [He put his hand on my shoulder. For some reason, his proximity made me feel warm. ↑The "he" here must be "she".