Shen Changchan: "How long is 'someday'? I'm afraid that by then I'll have white hair, more wrinkles, and no teeth left. I might still be able to call your name with a trembling voice, but I'll have forgotten what you look like."
Wen Sui'an: "She may never know how much I love her."
Feng Luge: "Back then, you promised me three bowls of wine. Now you still owe me one."
Gu Zichong: "I lived my whole life with a smile, laughing as I was born and laughing as I died, laughing as I missed that radiant beauty and laughing as I missed those fleeting years."
Ran Xiu: "If not tomorrow, then four years from now. I'll be in the Ling Kingdom, you'll be in the Jin Kingdom. I'll be dead, and you'll still be alive. How could we ever meet again?"
One lifetime of drifting through the world, a few chapters of mortal life. The bright moon, the endless songs. How many tears and ancient winds does it take to complete the waxing and waning?
(I'm a new writer and welcome advice. Updates are irregular, and this is a massive pit, so enter at your own risk.)
My daughter is. "Shen Changchan lowered her eyes and stared at the hem of her skirt. Hmm, should I add "Your Majesty" before "I am"? But suddenly—can it be deleted? Curved lips - Is it better to curl the corners of your lips? "Jiang" is changed to "Jiang" General Shen Changchan
The double quotation mark at the end is a problem. Besides, she saluted and smiled bitterly before saying: "Where's brother?" I think brother can be changed to brother. Well, the immeasurable number of feet of red wall, repetitive semantics? Shen Jiao was still laughing, patted Chang Chan's hand and said, "Cousin." Maybe it would be better for me to be my cousin. Hmm =w= In addition, the author's detailed descriptions are particularly good!
I was at a loss when I saw this. Watt, uncle? The jump was too big, I didn't have time to react
Was it Ran Xiu or Mo Ran who died?
Let's talk about the details.
The crystal tears fell on the back of her hand and also on her heart. How about changing this sentence to this? Tears flowed across the back of her hands and hit her heart.
We can communicate with each other---Wenwen is very good. Let's discuss some problems together.
I like it so much hahahahaha
Well done to the author! I read your book and thought it was very good. I was very excited after reading the introduction. I like it very much. My number is 1513860804. We can communicate.