Know where the problem lies...
The larger text looks more like prose, which is a taboo in novels. Ah Chi once had this problem. Although he is trying to change it now, he keeps reminding himself of this.
I looked at the large copy again and found that the label was more attractive.
The girl's writing is okay, but she needs polishing. Jade cannot be used without polishing.
Let me make some comments:
①In fact, for JJ, the ideal chapter word count is 3,000+. I have seen a lot of articles with a word count of around 1,000 these days. I don't know if it's a matter of personal habits, but I feel a little uncomfortable reading them anyway. I have discussed this issue before. Most girls would not click on something with such a small number of words unless it is really attractive. Regarding this point, you can ask others to verify it.
② Judging from the previous paragraphs, the broad language is good, but in terms of description, it feels a bit empty. It just makes people unable to grasp the essence.
③The narration and description of events are relatively orthodox. As the 1L girl said, the plot tends to be bland. In terms of description, if you change the order, or mention a few cute points, the whole chapter will be completely different.
According to the girl's current skills, her mastery of skills will reach a very high level. Come on!
The copywriting is not attractive enough, the plot tends to be bland, but the writing is concise. Could work more on the plot.
In fact, I have found a pattern, that is, the first chapter of your article is not very attractive, so there may be relatively fewer readers.
It would be better to find a way to be more attractive, or to have a very exciting wedge.
The last sentence starts to get exciting.
Know where the problem lies... The larger text looks more like prose, which is a taboo in novels. Ah Chi once had this problem. Although he is trying to change it now, he keeps reminding himself of this. I looked at the large copy again and found that the label was more attractive.
The girl's writing is okay, but she needs polishing. Jade cannot be used without polishing. Let me make some comments: ①In fact, for JJ, the ideal chapter word count is 3,000+. I have seen a lot of articles with a word count of around 1,000 these days. I don't know if it's a matter of personal habits, but I feel a little uncomfortable reading them anyway. I have discussed this issue before. Most girls would not click on something with such a small number of words unless it is really attractive. Regarding this point, you can ask others to verify it. ② Judging from the previous paragraphs, the broad language is good, but in terms of description, it feels a bit empty. It just makes people unable to grasp the essence. ③The narration and description of events are relatively orthodox. As the 1L girl said, the plot tends to be bland. In terms of description, if you change the order, or mention a few cute points, the whole chapter will be completely different. According to the girl's current skills, her mastery of skills will reach a very high level. Come on!
The copywriting is not attractive enough, the plot tends to be bland, but the writing is concise. Could work more on the plot.
In fact, I have found a pattern, that is, the first chapter of your article is not very attractive, so there may be relatively fewer readers. It would be better to find a way to be more attractive, or to have a very exciting wedge.