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Synopsis
Captain Yan thinks the coolest thing he ever said was, "Dr. Nie, I saved your life. You have to listen to me for the rest of yours."
Nie Chengcheng says, "Wasn't that when you proposed to me?"
Yan Kun remembers that moment.
"Dr. Nie, didn't you realize I was pursuing you?"
Nie Chengcheng says, "I did. And then?"
Yan Kun says, "Let's get married."
"..."
Shouldn't they date first?
Yan Kun says, "Life is too short. After we marry, I'll gladly spend the rest of my life dating you."
*Though this is an international military story, none of its military or political elements have anything to do with or allude to our country. It is entirely fictional, so please don't take it as referring to anyone real.
*The story is set against the backdrop of the Syrian War, loosely adapted and made up with Western militaries as its model. It's silly and brainless, so don't scrutinize it.
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It's great after watching it~~! ! ! !
Can I just say that I came in just for the cover? Ahhhh, handsome guy in military uniform *slobber*
Come on, come on, come back later and watch~
Oh oh oh, it's so big, I'm here to keep my claws~
Ha ha. . . . . .
Pros and cons of the copywriting: The big title is actually very literary and feels like a beautiful love story, but looking at the copywriting,
I'm a little surprised. I don't know if I want to cater to Jinjiang's many tastes. "Innocent and fleshy" is indeed a
The highlight, "I got the little baby on" is so clear that some readers are itching to read it. I wonder if it is
Is it an attractive means? The copywriting can't be said to be good or bad. It's a bit too simple. "A young lady was raped."
"The story of being eaten by a wolf" actually doesn't seem like a good story at all. The highlights come later. It's a thousand stories.
It's all the same, even a little vulgar, but maybe it's enough for a fast-food culture like Internet articles.
Text analysis: There are not many military themes in Jinjiang. Regardless of whether it is cold or not, at least it is considered a success in terms of writing style. Gao Heng's
What impressed me deeply was the description in the first chapter, "Gao Heng's skin is very white. In the vast winter snowy day, if he were not wearing a uniform...
Wearing a gray tunic suit, Jian hope must not be able to identify him from the heavy snow." Looking at Gao Heng's brushwork here, it may not be
Not much, but it highlighted Gao Heng's characteristics right away. At least he remembered it right away, and later on he competed with Shen Shaohua for the first time.
Relatively speaking, the impression was more profound. Shen Shaohua's words were sharp and his thoughts were deep. Gao Heng couldn't cope with it at all, but he still
Then he communicated with the male protagonist in his own way, and the nerds really highlighted the loneliness of students of that era.
Chun has a sharp personality contrast with Shen Shaohua, which I think is particularly great.
I think the portrayal of the heroine was okay, not particularly distinctive, but the chapter where she and the second concubine were in tit-for-tat was rather weak.
She is sharp-toothed and even a little aggressive. In comparison, the second aunt seems to be a real paper tiger, but the second aunt is plump.
However, the female protagonist always makes people think that she is not that stupid. In fact, she is quite thoughtful and even good at dealing with people. But when she meets the male protagonist,
She's so stupid... Maybe this is a deliberate arrangement to highlight the heroine's personality and her willingness to not be manipulated by others.
I guess, but I always feel that the contrast between the two personalities is so big when I meet the male protagonist...
Undoubtedly, the beginning of the novel is well designed. Two people with completely different personalities suddenly collide with each other. The male
The protagonist has a different feeling for the heroine inexplicably, but I think this kind of collision can be more, just because the heroine scolded the hero
The master is a scumbag, and then the hero falls in love with her, and then starts to gradually get involved? Isn't it always a bit abrupt? It seems like
It seemed like I couldn't get enough of it, but when I looked at the back part, I thought it might be a big idea, focusing on the two people at the end because of the bet.
A series of passionate collisions unfolded, but I still hope that the front can be more in-depth, so that the article may appear
Fuller.
Shen Wenhua felt aloof, as if everything was expected by him, even though he didn't deliberately
Describe his appearance, but immediately the arrogant and a little frivolous look appeared in my mind, cold and cold.
He looks bad, and he is still quite a successful character, but it seems that his dark side cannot be seen in the front part, like this
I think such a man would go to Paramount to ask others for advice on how to deal with a special woman.
It's strange, and the bet between him and the heroine also seems a little too hasty, maybe not domineering enough.
It's a bit cliche, but overall, it's quite coherent.
Advantages: The story is very coherent, the plot is step-by-step, the writing is not sluggish and natural, and the characters are fully fleshed out.
Disadvantages: The plot is a little vulgar. Although it is the Republic of China period, the storyline is generally the same.
If you read too much, you will inevitably lose interest. Maybe it's because you don't have time to revise the article. Typos still need to be corrected.
It might be better if there were more suspense in the writing, and the plot could be more engaging.
It focuses too much on the characters and ignores a lot of details. I think there are still a lot of details given the historical background at that time.
What is worth writing about is that the language is too modern. Although the Republic of China is indeed not very far away from modern times,
It seems like you can't be too 90-ish.
Finally, I wish Dada's article will be recognized by more people, because it is indeed an article worth reading. Thanks to Dada's control over the article.
The ability to control and control is also very good. If you keep practicing, you will definitely become a god. Jinjiang also needs literature on various themes. I hope the military wind will blow.
Powerful, giving everyone more choices in writing style.
Commentator's words: Wochao Changping Digua is here to comment. It's a bit late to comment. I hope you won't mind. Hehe.
[Wochao Changping Shop]
Produced by [Sweet Potato]
Come on↖(^ω^)↗
I moved a small bench, ate small melon seeds, and waited for the big plate of delicious meat - the legendary warm and artistic meat!
Saliva
I have the urge to become my best friend.
I have the urge to become my best friend.
It seems like a small bug. Master Shen is four or five meters taller than Gao. He is in the realm of Sa!
It's great after watching it~~! ! ! ! Can I just say that I came in just for the cover? Ahhhh, handsome guy in military uniform *slobber*
Come on, come on, come back later and watch~
Oh oh oh, it's so big, I'm here to keep my claws~
Ha ha. . . . . .
Pros and cons of the copywriting: The big title is actually very literary and feels like a beautiful love story, but looking at the copywriting, I'm a little surprised. I don't know if I want to cater to Jinjiang's many tastes. "Innocent and fleshy" is indeed a The highlight, "I got the little baby on" is so clear that some readers are itching to read it. I wonder if it is Is it an attractive means? The copywriting can't be said to be good or bad. It's a bit too simple. "A young lady was raped." "The story of being eaten by a wolf" actually doesn't seem like a good story at all. The highlights come later. It's a thousand stories. It's all the same, even a little vulgar, but maybe it's enough for a fast-food culture like Internet articles. Text analysis: There are not many military themes in Jinjiang. Regardless of whether it is cold or not, at least it is considered a success in terms of writing style. Gao Heng's What impressed me deeply was the description in the first chapter, "Gao Heng's skin is very white. In the vast winter snowy day, if he were not wearing a uniform... Wearing a gray tunic suit, Jian hope must not be able to identify him from the heavy snow." Looking at Gao Heng's brushwork here, it may not be Not much, but it highlighted Gao Heng's characteristics right away. At least he remembered it right away, and later on he competed with Shen Shaohua for the first time. Relatively speaking, the impression was more profound. Shen Shaohua's words were sharp and his thoughts were deep. Gao Heng couldn't cope with it at all, but he still Then he communicated with the male protagonist in his own way, and the nerds really highlighted the loneliness of students of that era. Chun has a sharp personality contrast with Shen Shaohua, which I think is particularly great. I think the portrayal of the heroine was okay, not particularly distinctive, but the chapter where she and the second concubine were in tit-for-tat was rather weak. She is sharp-toothed and even a little aggressive. In comparison, the second aunt seems to be a real paper tiger, but the second aunt is plump. However, the female protagonist always makes people think that she is not that stupid. In fact, she is quite thoughtful and even good at dealing with people. But when she meets the male protagonist, She's so stupid... Maybe this is a deliberate arrangement to highlight the heroine's personality and her willingness to not be manipulated by others. I guess, but I always feel that the contrast between the two personalities is so big when I meet the male protagonist... Undoubtedly, the beginning of the novel is well designed. Two people with completely different personalities suddenly collide with each other. The male The protagonist has a different feeling for the heroine inexplicably, but I think this kind of collision can be more, just because the heroine scolded the hero The master is a scumbag, and then the hero falls in love with her, and then starts to gradually get involved? Isn't it always a bit abrupt? It seems like It seemed like I couldn't get enough of it, but when I looked at the back part, I thought it might be a big idea, focusing on the two people at the end because of the bet. A series of passionate collisions unfolded, but I still hope that the front can be more in-depth, so that the article may appear Fuller. Shen Wenhua felt aloof, as if everything was expected by him, even though he didn't deliberately Describe his appearance, but immediately the arrogant and a little frivolous look appeared in my mind, cold and cold. He looks bad, and he is still quite a successful character, but it seems that his dark side cannot be seen in the front part, like this I think such a man would go to Paramount to ask others for advice on how to deal with a special woman. It's strange, and the bet between him and the heroine also seems a little too hasty, maybe not domineering enough. It's a bit cliche, but overall, it's quite coherent. Advantages: The story is very coherent, the plot is step-by-step, the writing is not sluggish and natural, and the characters are fully fleshed out. Disadvantages: The plot is a little vulgar. Although it is the Republic of China period, the storyline is generally the same. If you read too much, you will inevitably lose interest. Maybe it's because you don't have time to revise the article. Typos still need to be corrected. It might be better if there were more suspense in the writing, and the plot could be more engaging. It focuses too much on the characters and ignores a lot of details. I think there are still a lot of details given the historical background at that time. What is worth writing about is that the language is too modern. Although the Republic of China is indeed not very far away from modern times, It seems like you can't be too 90-ish. Finally, I wish Dada's article will be recognized by more people, because it is indeed an article worth reading. Thanks to Dada's control over the article. The ability to control and control is also very good. If you keep practicing, you will definitely become a god. Jinjiang also needs literature on various themes. I hope the military wind will blow. Powerful, giving everyone more choices in writing style. Commentator's words: Wochao Changping Digua is here to comment. It's a bit late to comment. I hope you won't mind. Hehe. [Wochao Changping Shop] Produced by [Sweet Potato]
Come on↖(^ω^)↗
I moved a small bench, ate small melon seeds, and waited for the big plate of delicious meat - the legendary warm and artistic meat! Saliva
I have the urge to become my best friend.
I have the urge to become my best friend.
It seems like a small bug. Master Shen is four or five meters taller than Gao. He is in the realm of Sa!