爱 Lover 爱人 by Just Woke Up (睡醒了) StatusOngoingLength10k WordsGenreRomanceEraModern EraUpdated13y agoSourceJJWXC Request a translation↗ Save Planned Reading Paused Finished Dropped RemoveRemove Synopsis Everyday family life... Show more Tags ThemeLovePOVFemale LeadAge13+AccessFreeMarriage & RomanceSerious DramaUrban StatsWhat these numbers mean → 7Chapters1Favorites350Clicks per chapter2Comments Reader comments 2 Likes Latest Translated by Google Translate I feel like our narration is okay, but we still lack the grasp of rhythm. We need to take our time and don't rush.Show moreYeah, it's not bad, but you have to pay attention to the male protagonist's tone. Don't be cold and hot for a while. There should be transitions.Show more Load more comments
I feel like our narration is okay, but we still lack the grasp of rhythm. We need to take our time and don't rush.Show more
Yeah, it's not bad, but you have to pay attention to the male protagonist's tone. Don't be cold and hot for a while. There should be transitions.Show more
I feel like our narration is okay, but we still lack the grasp of rhythm. We need to take our time and don't rush.
Yeah, it's not bad, but you have to pay attention to the male protagonist's tone. Don't be cold and hot for a while. There should be transitions.