A Bewitching Smile, A Love Begins

1. The suspense is well set up. In the wedge, the author chooses a time point. The reader does not know what happened before that, and the consequence it caused is that the master and the apprentice are now in an embarrassing situation. The master regrets it too much, and the apprentice is despairing. My personal guess is that the master married the disciple to someone, but where would this person be if he were not with the disciple? What is Yan Youchen's identity? If he was just a guard, why would Liangliang care so much about him? With these doubts, readers who like this genre will be like a kitten scratching their heart, eager to know the answer. However, when you turn to the first chapter, readers will find that a wedge is just a wedge and cannot be read as the main text. 2 The plot direction is a bit unexpected... Mary Sue? Huayu is young (presumably already many years younger), beautiful, powerful, gentle to Liangliang like a spring breeze, ruthless to his enemies, and more importantly, the wedge mentions that he has fallen in love with Liangliang. Xia Liangliang has a noble status, a weak personality but is firm and tough, gentle and kind, and her beauty is naturally unyielding. The theater in my mind is already playing a TV series similar to one currently being broadcast on Mango Channel. The mood is a bit strange... It may be palatable to some readers, but for readers like me who have been immersed in this topic for several years, it is a bit boring. 3. The plot is too mediocre. I reviewed the author's "Miss Lan" before, and one suggestion was that it was "insufficient in sequels." This article is the same, but I am glad to see that the author is also growing. In other words, the plot of this article is more bland, and the wedge part is okay. The first and second chapters have outstanding problems. If it weren't for the author's writing, it would be difficult for me to continue reading. The control over the development of things is still weak, and it is difficult to express the sense of speed of time.

Received article confirmed, author, come on, your character will be taken away

Sir, please change Miss Lan! So looking forward to it!

Isn't your father the meaning of your father? How can you call someone your father?

Into my arms~~(づ￣3￣)づ╭

First of all, the copywriting is very well written and makes you want to continue. However, the shemale romance that the copywriter promised has not arrived yet?

Rich content and great imagination hahahaha

I'm so looking forward to Miss Lan! When will it be updated?

Received the article ~ Finished spreading flowers ~

After reading it Master didn't torture me at all_(:з∠)_You can guess the purpose of sending me to the palace or something. But the ending is great Come on Erhua, collect the collection as soon as possible