Dream of the Red Chamber: Becoming Lin Daiyu

I have been reading this until now, and I really can't stand it anymore. The author's Lin Daiyu and the original Daiyu are two completely different people. The original Daiyu is a fairy, and the author's Lin Daiyu is the heartthrob of Mary Sue who cheated and had a golden finger. The fairy feeling that the original Daiyu should have is not depicted at all. The author wrote Lin Daiyu just to use this person and the story to have sex. As a Daiyu fan, this kind of article is not worth reading, because it completely ruins the original work and the goddess Daiyu. If the author wants to write about cultivating immortals, he should understand the theory of cause and effect. I have read many immortal cultivating novels [not the kind of short stories about one woman and multiple men]. Even if the heroine is involved with the royal family, she will not be with the prince or emperor, because the royal family, especially the emperor or prince, or the princes and princes who want to compete for the throne, do not know how to cultivate immortality. Don't ask why, you can know "cause and effect" and "the way of heaven" by reading more in-depth immortal cultivating novels. If the heroine cultivates immortality, she will live forever, but the emperor will not. If he wants to cultivate immortality, he cannot be a good emperor. The change of dynasties is inevitable. If the emperor cultivates immortality and continues to be the emperor, it violates the rules and will not end well. The author has determined that Lin Daiyu and the male protagonist in his novel will be together. I don't know how the author handles the issue of Daiyu's immortality, but it must be very unnatural. If you look closely, there are many things that are criticized about the rules of Lin Daiyu in the author's writing. The author had a dispensable thought when writing, and felt that it was not that serious. The author used his own thinking, not the feudal ethical thinking described in the book, which added a bit of unnaturalness to the Lin Daiyu in the author's writing. Writing a story similar to his own It is difficult to tell a story from a different era, especially the issues of thinking and stance. The author did not think about it carefully at all. Just like in this chapter, he knew that a distinguished guest was visiting and was being received by his father. He must be a foreigner. His father did not introduce Lin Daiyu, but he took the lead in asking questions. Daiyu did not know who was there when he asked, and there would be an ungraceful feeling, like reading the original work. Shi Xiangyun's feeling, and the author never mentioned Lin Daiyu's age in writing, but from reading the original work, we know that Daiyu was 6 years old when she entered Jia's house. In this article, Lin Daiyu stayed with her father for a year, that is, after she was 7 years old. At that time, there was a saying that "men and women did not sit at the same table at seven years old." Like the behavior of giving jade unicorns in this chapter, because the author did not describe it in detail, people thought it was If Daiyu gave it to her herself, it would be a violation of "private giving and receiving", which would be harmful to a woman's reputation. If others knew, Lin Daiyu could not marry a non-hero, and could not be a wife because of her bad reputation. Don't think I am exaggerating. This is a society with feudal ethics. Even the royal family would be stained by this. No matter how powerful the royal power is, they will not use it for such things. Only if you are engaged, you and your partner can give gifts to each other, and they cannot be given directly. The elders or brothers in the woman's family or the female elders and sisters in the man's family can serve as bridges. Dream of Red Mansions is an era, and it cannot be changed by future generations however they want. The author's article is just a short essay. He has replaced all the names related to the protagonist, including the names of the four princes and the eight princes, and it is completely in a line of its own. The author calls the Dream of Red Mansions a fan, which Daiyu fans disagree with. The author named this article "Becoming Lin Daiyu". In fact, in the eyes of Daiyu fans, this is simply "replacing Lin Daiyu". Daiyu fans should be cautious. I don't know whether the author's label is original or fanfic. If possible, the author should label it original.

They always say that the girls of the Jia family are innocent. I really can't figure out how they are innocent. They were born in the Jia family. Didn't they eat the food of the Jia family? Didn't they wear the food of the Jia family? They were useless or did not let the maids of the Jia family serve. Could it be that all the money was clean? After enjoying the glory and wealth of the Jia family, Jia was innocent after shouldering the blame of the Jia family. I regret that I was born in the Jia family. Why should I be so disgusting? What a fool!

The elder's gift is indispensable! There are too many loopholes in the author's writing. You cannot refuse the maid given by your grandmother, otherwise it will be unfilial! In ancient times this was a very serious mistake! Many people write time travel stories about the male protagonist rejecting the woman given by his elders. In ancient times, it was simply impossible. Juniors were not qualified to reject things given by their elders!

Just wait, Eighth Prince, there is still a long way to go.

How are you going to update the article when you shut down the Internet? Are you sending out brainwaves? Doesn't the letter say that Sister Lin is coming?

The update is a bit slow, come on

Why is no one coming to speak? Am I the first? The war has begun

It is estimated that there is either danger or someone will be encountered.

Will Xue Biao still mate with Xing Xiuyan? Will he still be seduced by Xia Jingui?

I agree with adding more scenes! By the way, Xue Biao's room in the original work is pretty good, and Bao Qin and Sister Lin have a very good relationship (even better than Xue Baochai). Although Xing Zhu Yan is good, he still can't help too much. Find a good match!