Ever since they parted at the orphanage, Qin Yu has thought constantly of the "Brother Xiao Yi" from his childhood. By the time he finally grew up and was able to protect him, he learned from someone else that the person he had longed for was already dead. He nearly fell apart, until he happened to meet Pei Mingxuan, whose air reminded him of the person he'd lost. But the truth the world brought to light was something he couldn't accept. After all the twists and turns, he finally discovered that the person he'd been searching for had been right by his side all along.
After knowing Lu Haodong for ten years, an accident made her his secret lover, the little vixen he called her. She loved him so much that she lost herself, yet she could never win his heart. Years later, the two meet again amid the glittering lights. Can Xia Yifan find the love she longs for?
This story follows the love stories of two couples. At first, Mingxuan and Shaoqin are in the open, while Yifan and Haodong are in secret. Since the main text doesn't make this clear, Shui would like to explain to avoid confusing readers: before the relationship between Xia and Lu is revealed, their story appears in Chapters 3, 5, 10, 15, 17, 21, and 40.
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So well written! Huahua!!
Looking back and watching it again, it suddenly dawned on me. The story unfolds in a very long space, not only about the relationship, but also about their life experience, work, and life. This also shows that the article is not a showbiz novel. It describes the protagonist's entire life in great detail (although their main life is work). First of all, applause. O(∩_∩)O When I first watched the movie, it was very foggy. It gave me the feeling that each of the four protagonists had a huge story. This is also true. It was not until later, when Shuiyou recalled their deeds step by step, that I could think about it bit by bit (you interpreted the story in a dark way...). The plot became very clear when I watched it the second time, because I understood their respective stories after watching it the first time... The plot of the article is very attractive. The first paragraph when Xiaoyi and Qin Yu separated was superbly written. I watched it for the first time on TY. At that time, I was looking forward to what it would be like for them to meet again when they grow up. This was very successful because it whetted the reader's appetite (actually, I am also a bit picky...). The second paragraph and the first paragraph are both about their childhood, but there is no connection. In fact, I think, Shui, if you focus on a couple, it will definitely be easier to write. As for which pair to write? I also hope to write about Xiao Xia and Lu Haodong. Xiao Xia moved me. The charming little goblin is only charming in front of Lu Haodong. The little goblin knows that she cannot restrain the man but still wants to stay silently by his side. The little goblin understands her own heart very well. He loves Lu Haodong. This seemingly humble love is really heartbreaking. Although Lu Haodong broke his heart again and again, he was sad but also forgiving. He was very strong at heart, but extremely fragile when it came to matters involving Lu Haodong (I like this kind of character, but I don't like being indecisive.). Lu Haodong may not be able to help himself, but every time Xiao Xia is hurt, he becomes disheartened and sheds tears. I am quite angry here. If Lu Haodong wants to love, he should love with all his heart. Why would he look for something else when he has Xiao Xia in his heart? If work requires it, just hide it and don't let Xiaoxia know about it and feel sad. I don't know why I like the part about Haonan drugging his brother (the part that Xiao Shui thinks is ridiculous). I don't know why (this taste...). I think it's very exciting. I even hope you can write more details, haha. But the ending, hey, let's not talk about the ending yet. I think Xiaoxia would be much happier with Shao Yun, or Mo Ran? (I know you feel the same way, but feelings cannot be forced.) I like Lin Moran, this sunny boy. Sometimes he is careless when facing Xiaoxia, but sometimes he is very attentive. I don't think it's unexpected that he falls in love with Xiaoxia. But, unfortunately, he is young and impulsive, and he always fails to show his feelings to Xiaoxia in the right way (when his sperm gets into his head, I feel anxious for this child...). As a result, it may be awkward to get along with Xiaoxia in the future... As for Qi Shaoqin and Pei Pei, they got together so quickly that I didn't even react before. It was really unexpected that they got them so quickly... Pei Pei and Qi Shaoqin have been related since childhood. Although they didn't even know it before, when Qi Shaoqin ignored the current Pei Pei because of the Xiaoyi incident when he was a child, I was still confused about what he was thinking. Is it because I have been pretending to be Xiaoyi in my heart? No matter what Pei Pei does, he is still Young Master Qi's current boyfriend! He ignored Pei Pei without even giving an explanation. Later, when he found out that Pei Pei was his childhood brother Xiao Yi, he rushed over to him. I despise him here. I didn't describe them too much after that. The ending mainly talked about Xiaoxia, so I have to talk about the ending. In fact, this can be understood as what you said about Xiaoxia going to abuse Lu Haodong, but looking at Xiaoxia like this, I feel that both of them are being abused. It shouldn't be like this!!! My heart feels sour, why are you such a stepmother!!! The ending is complete and cannot be changed, as it is too unfinished (I advise you to change the completed version to ongoing! → → I'm just kidding, don't pay attention to me). I hope that when Shui is free, he will make a side story about their sweet life together. Don't regret it, just make it sweet. (Please ignore the annoying XXX) Or open a new pit early? Anyway, wait until you have some free time and have time to calm down and write the article before you think about it~ The above words about beard only represent personal opinions and are just my own feelings after reading the article~ Finally, hehe, let me give you a smile~ Shui is happy every day!
Come on, come on~~~O(∩_∩)O~~
Do you want to write a side story? After so many years of waiting, there is only one sentence left: "Who are you?" It's quite embarrassing. Right or wrong, it's great that they have the courage to continue.
In fact, I think the whole thing is pretty good. The ending is a bit unexpected, but in the end it gives people unlimited fantasy. == I have the urge to write a second part.
Shui, I know you are very busy with your studies, and you told me that the essay is almost finished, but I still feel that it is too hasty to finish it like this. Qi Shaoqin and Pei showed their heads for a moment, and then they knew that Pei was red, and they didn't say much about their next days. And what about Xiao Mo who made mistakes? From reading ten chapters in one breath at the beginning, to reading chapter by chapter every day, the more I read, the more interesting it becomes, especially the emotional entanglement between Lu Haodong and Xiao Xia. I keep wondering how Xiao Xia will forgive Lu Haodong in the end? The ending was beyond my expectations. I even felt that it was not the finale at all. The feeling of unfinished content was too strong, as if there were still many things that had not been written. Also, Lu Haodong took care of Xiao Xia like this for five years. Although he owed Xiao Xia a lot, such a punishment was too heavy, especially the last part, which was too sad for both Xiao Xia and Lu Haodong. I have forgotten some of the previous parts after seeing it, so I will read it again carefully and then write down my inner thoughts. These are just what I want to say to you after reading this last chapter. In addition, Xiaoshui has worked hard to code. So many words are not fun, and his brain cells must have been damaged a lot. Now you should concentrate on your paper. I hope you can code more of your own works when you have time. Beard will always support you! (Grip)
╮(￣▽￣\")╭ Why is my Xiaoxia so miserable...
Little water. . . . . . You just want to torture him anyway, right? Read it first and wait for the happy ending.
Xiaoshui, you wrote Xiaoxia as a mummy and you don't know if she can wake up? You actually asked if I was tortured? Looking at my ferocious face, my eyes are bloodshot and I tell you, no abuse. T T
Hey~ It seems that my Xiaoxia is going to be injured again. . ┭┮┭┮I was injured by a bad guy.