
Lonely Sandbar, Cold
寂寞沙洲冷
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 22k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 19y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
14Chapters
797Favorites
8.7Score
10Nutrient gifts
19.9kClicks per chapter
408Comments
More by this author
Everyday Life
A Collection of Short Stories from the Mortal Realm
Heaven and Earth: My Youth Began with Loving You
[The Captain/Line of Life and Death Fanfiction] The Dragon's Story
Spring River, Flowers, Moonlit Night
The Tale of the Demon Cat
The Palace of Eternal Life
Yao: Childhood Friends, A Pair of Demons
Engraved
Apocalypse
Luxury Man
Passing Light
Reader comments 37
Translated by Google Translate
It's so well written that I dare not read it.
After reading so many books, when it comes to writing about love, no one can compare with Ju Da. It not only writes in my heart, it seems to penetrate into the bone marrow and soak into the blood.
Very touching! Maybe it will be a lifetime to cross over! And as long as the other person turns around, he will still be a handsome young man in a troubled world!
Juzi's ancient text really can't afford to be hurt, just like the other person's modern text can't afford to be hurt either. Sure enough, Juzi's writing style is more suitable for someone like Qilin.
Original introduction: Wang Jingche, who comes from a distinguished family and is extremely talented. He Zhiqian comes from a poor family and is lonely and arrogant at heart. How can two equally proud men be together? He Zhiqian left Wang Jingche to marry his wife. When the two meet again, will their hearts rekindle at that moment? Wang Jingche, who was terminally ill, had no choice. In the end, the two died relying on each other. [Are you and her okay? With your children! Want to see you...] Just these three words "I want to see you" made me inevitably feel sorry for Wang Jingche. I have a wife and a son, but I still miss you and want to see you. How important is friendship? Wang Jingche fell ill and went south. He was covered in rain. He said that I was not cold. After all, all the blood in his body had been frozen. This small amount of rain is nothing, why is it so cold? The most painful thing is the coldness inside. It turns out that Wang Jingche is such a cold person. The author arranges him in this way, cold and proud. Soft and gentle. His arrogant talent and background, these things that he didn't care about, made him see clearly the flattery of the world. He looked at the world indifferently. His softness is only given to one person. The He Zhiqian who left him. At this moment, I have never seen his warmth or He Zhiqian's figure. Already deeply moved by Wang Jingche's softness beneath his aloofness. [He is a heartless person. Qingqing feels so clearly that his heart is lost somewhere far away. Even though he is gentle, humble and polite, even though his features are as beautiful as picturesque, they are just a shell. He Zhiqian appeared with his wife. These words came out of his wife's wishes. You see, even his wife of one year knows that he has no heart. How can I still not know where his heart is left? I'm afraid it's Wang Jingche who misses him deeply. If two people love each other, why are they separated? He sighed, as his character dictates. He Zhiqian. Cold jade. Suave. Cold jade, cold jade, a chilling heart. But that warm heart was given to Wang Jingche. It had already been given to others, so how could it be given to his wife again. See He Zhiqian's pride. Man, who has never dreamed of cultivating himself, managing his family, governing the country, and bringing peace to the world? It was already clear, how could such a man be with Wang Jingche. Although he has never been able to match the tenderness in the heart of the indifferent Wang Jingche, He Zhiqian has longed for a man like him. At this moment, he showed his kindness again, "I like you, let's be together." He Zhiqian's heart collapsed. You can't escape your own heart. How could He Zhiqian let the world say that he was in love with a man? He is not like Wang Jingche who can escape and still be alone. He is different. Once he takes a step, he sacrifices his pride and his dream. He, He Zhiqian, had never thought that relying on a man's existence would make the world laugh at him. The two met at a poetry meeting. He Zhiqian bowed his head abruptly to avoid Wang Jingche's gaze. He knew that the weight of this gaze on his body made him unable to breathe. However, who knew that his palms were trembling. Wang Jingche looked at He Zhiqian, forgot his words for a moment, and said the mantra from the heart, your eyes are beautiful. He still clearly remembered how he couldn't help but fall into such a pair of beautiful eyes when he first met them. He fell into the water, and Wang Jingche rushed into the water to save him. He is a bit harsh and critical, and he can't swim yet. Who knew that beneath this censure, there was a deep sense of worry and love. He coughed up blood, and He Zhiqian was so surprised that he couldn't move. He looked at his thin face and wondered why the man he once was was so full of depression today. He couldn't think, and he asked himself if it was his fault. [There was blood oozing out from between his fingers. When he opened it with force, he saw that the palm of his hand had been pricked with nails and was bloody and bloody. His wife asked him what was wrong and he said he didn't know. Zhiqian, Zhiqian, how can I not be moved by your sorrow? After all, he wanted to see Wang Jingche. The hemoptysis in that scene, the longing day and night, the clear feelings. He watched Wang Jingche crash into the peach tree, unable to stop him. He was really angry. His body was like this, he didn't take good care of himself, and it was so heart-wrenching. He said you did it on purpose, hurting two people so cruelly. Until he got Wang Jingche's prescription, a line of clear tears silently ran down his cheeks. He never expected that Wang Jingche's body and bones would be so hopeless at this moment. He wondered if it would still be like this if he stayed with him. He had already looked past the past between the two of them. Already a dying person. [Those eyes seemed to have melted the light of the entire galaxy, dark and brilliant, carrying a trace of confusion, a trace of sadness, a kind of desperate exhaustion, and a pale and helpless calmness after giving up. He Zhiqian. Are you regretting that you were not by his side to make him so ill? He Zhiqian. Are you feeling distressed? Why has he been here all these years? He coughs up blood every day. I really like how this sentence portrays He Zhiqian's heart. At this moment, he has made a decision. He Zhiqian had long since lost his heart, and that heart was left behind on Wang Jingche. Heartbroken. In the end, the two died relying on each other. Suddenly looking back, I realized that I actually liked He Zhiqian better than Wang Jingche. He thinks more than Wang Jingche. It was his poor family and his aloofness that made him have to think more. Unlike Wang Jingche's indifference to the world. If the two of them find a deserted place, he wonders if Jing Che will get used to this kind of life. What will happen to him if the things he never cared about are gone? After all, he lives alone in that falsely constructed world. If he were asked to follow Wang Jingche, this would be impossible for him, so Wang Jingche would not ask him like this, and he still knew his pride. In fact, Wang Jingche has never cared about that. He Zhiqian knew it, but he was afraid, who could guarantee that Wang Jingche would suddenly regret it when they retired to the countryside. Therefore, he resolutely chose to leave. He couldn't help but think so much. I really feel that Wang Jingche understands this. Because I understand, I have never looked for him. He just said that he wanted to see him. However, a person who is about to die should always go see the person he loves most. He still wanted to see him and die peacefully. Okay, I admit, he is selfish, he knows what will happen to him after meeting He Zhiqian. Therefore, He Zhiqian said that he did it on purpose and that he was willful and cruel. Such two people understand each other and love each other. It's just that I can't compete with the distance of that era and my own heart. [I left too hastily and left my heart with you. What else can a person without a heart do? It's just that the world of mortals is so long, even if you are willing to let me go alone, and the underworld is so cold, I can't stand you enduring it alone. I like to see you smile. I have suffered too much in this life, so I will smile more in the next life! [Original quote]
Strongly support the author's ending. It is the most beautiful and happiest thing for two people to die together. In this way, a perfect love will be preserved, which will not be swallowed up by the secular world and fleeting time, but will become eternal.
Only this kind of silent ending is the most ideal and realistic one. Every postscript written by Juda summarizes it very well, including everything I thought and didn't expect. Indeed, only this kind of ending is the most ideal and most suitable for the identities of the two of them. Why doesn't he not love the king? It's not that his love is not as deep as the king's. It's just that his birth and the king's are too different. He doesn't dare and can't take the final step of staying with the king. As Ju Da said, he took the step of following the king and entering the royal family. His status and identity must be approved by the king. What if the king changes his mind in the future? How could such a life be unbearable? He would rather die with the king than despise himself. Thank you Juda for writing such a touching article. I have to keep writing.
Sigh... Orange, I prefer light-hearted comedies or stories with happy endings, just because I love you, so... Even if it is a sad story, I will jump in. Whenever I see a sad story, I feel very depressed. Why did Mao write such a sad article? I just know that there are many more tragic and tragic real-life stories in this world... If you write too much, you will definitely be affected by the tragic emotions and cannot be removed. So what should we do... You have to take care of your fans even if you don't care about yourself, just... I LOVE YOU =3=
In comparison, I personally may prefer the article about the Palace of Eternal Life. Because I feel like that ending is better.
Orange, I found that I prefer your postscript... Every article is