Author, You Have No Idea How Tough It Is to Transmigrate into a Beast Novel

Why are all the men so beautiful and there are so few women? Are all the extra men gay? I seem to have discovered the incredible truth? ! ! !

Come and stamp Jiujiu, (*^__^*) Hehe...

Finely divide my love! ! ! I want to use three exclamation points to express my love for the male protagonist! ! ! Sometimes he's cool and handsome, sometimes he's cute and silly, and he even calls me "sister". This really hits my cuteness point! This article is also a speed-travel article. I wrote a perfect ending and was cursed by readers (why would readers curse me if I wrote HE? Why would readers even pick out my ancestors and scold me if I wrote BE?), And then I passed through the article I wrote. (Pfft, in fact, this joke is really cute to me. I really wish I could slip into the book... And then have a lingering and pathos love with the protagonist I love [You are enough!]) Well, after reading so many time-traveling articles, I always feel that there is something strange. I suddenly travel into a world. Even if I know very little about the word time-travel, it is not so common as to be a daily occurrence, and I am not surprised at all. Feng Ge privately thought that the psychological description of the heroine here was too straightforward. Even when the two orcs appeared to compete for her later, she did not show the slightest panic. (Is this the so-called face that remains unchanged even when Mount Tai collapses?) However, the character of the heroine is Feng Ge's favorite, she is strong, smart and lively. Perhaps the author wanted to highlight the character of the heroine, so she made her so calm after time travel. The heroine found her biological son according to the description in the book (... I couldn't help but laugh every time I saw this word), and signed a contract with him... But unfortunately, the relationship between master and servant was reversed, and she became his slave instead. This reminds me of the first chapter. The heroine made the hero feel very aggrieved, letting the heroine in the book live freely and leaving the hero alone in the empty room... Now the heroine has penetrated into the book and has become the slave of the hero. This probably proves that a gentleman's revenge is never too late in ten years... As I read along, I felt that the author's descriptions were very vivid. Whether it was the description of scenery or expressions, I felt that the female protagonist and the male protagonist had distinct images. Especially the contrast between the two male protagonists is so sharp! But no matter what image the male protagonist is, he always cares about the female protagonist. However, the behavior of the female protagonist makes me a bit incomprehensible. It feels like she always wants to run away... But where can she run? The system has clearly told her that she can only go back if she helps the male protagonist complete the task of unifying the continent. So why does she always want to run outside when He Ye is sleeping? Feng Ge was a little confused here, but the male protagonist got her back in a flash. The author's occasional dialogues were very sharp and a little funny. I couldn't help but laugh at some parts. The male protagonist asked the female protagonist to end her cause and effect with her own hands. Well, what I saw here is quite emotional. You have to solve the problems you caused by yourself, especially in this world of the jungle, if you want to achieve great things, your relatives can also be killed (this sentence is said by Wu Zetian, please quote). Suddenly, from this sentence, I thought of a plot that may appear in the novel in the future. The male protagonist/female protagonist has to hurt the other party for a necessary reason, or perhaps to protect the other party. Then when the male protagonist/female protagonist desperately asks why you want to hurt me, the male protagonist/female protagonist can say, have you forgotten, what I/you said to you/I when you walked out of the cliff that day, your own cause and effect, you have to settle it yourself (Pfft, it feels quite cruel when you think about it, Feng Ge can just do it, the author can just ignore it~). However, Feng Ge felt a little confused when she saw the later part. The male protagonist's attitude seemed to change a bit quickly. In the first chapter, he called her a slave and wanted to kill her. In the next chapter, he became a slave and seemed to be gentle towards her. Feng Ge seems to have not found the reason for the change, so here is a small suggestion to the author. Feng Ge believes that the female protagonist is the creator of the male protagonist, and it is not difficult to make her fall in love with the male protagonist. However, if the male protagonist falls in love with the female protagonist, I always feel that the female protagonist should do something, such as showing her strength to attract the attention of the male protagonist, perhaps helping the male protagonist solve difficulties, or perhaps not leaving him when he is in danger. I feel that this can make the male protagonist's transformation seem natural. Although the male protagonist currently has two personalities, I haven't seen the role of the cute and soft personality that appeared that night. Maybe the author can lay some foreshadowings. This second personality can also play a role in some places in the future, so that readers will not feel that he is just another personality and has no effect. Putting aside the above two points, this article is actually very suitable for Feng Ge, and the plot progress is also very smooth, which will attract readers to continue reading. So I wish the author good luck in writing the article. Enter Feng Ge, commentator of Ink-Dye Thousand Cities.

It's finally finished ~ scattering flowers. . . But the portal is not working, there is no response. . .

Wow, this chapter is so sweet. It's a pity that Jiujiu still can't give Ye Ling a clear answer~ The following plot must be that the love rival is extremely jealous when he meets each other. Looking forward to it~~

I get tortured by empty chapters every time~~Come on~~In fact, maybe it can be an incentive if readers are given points.

If you don't like this guy, why do you have so much fun? ! No wonder the male protagonist is not him! ! Come and join Yeling quickly!

Why is the heroine so disobedient! Doesn't she know how dangerous this world is? Or I really want to be discovered by other orcs and have sex! Every time I see a heroine who is disobedient and gets into trouble, it makes me disgusted. I give it one point!

I have a bad memory recently and always forget to give marks...

My beloved concubine, I am back alone. I am here to tell you two things: 1. I am very happy that the original heroine finally came out and some people watched it. But what does that blond man do? Aoao Aogu is very unhappy to see him, please explain his origin quickly! ! ! Oh, by the way, are you handsome? If you are handsome, consider becoming a supporting actor. 2. My test scores have dropped sharply this time. My father threatened to sell his computer. SO, I may not be able to see you for a long time in the future. TAT, I have personally experienced it to tell you: Don't forget to study hard during your academic career... [Originally I wanted to send a surprise, but I ran out of money...] Beloved, you must update your text well, I will give you strength secretly, godfather.