Eileen Chang once said that every man has had at least two women in his life: one is his red rose, and the other is his white rose.
Marry the red rose, and in time she becomes a smear of mosquito blood on the wall, while the white one remains "moonlight before the window." Marry the white rose, and she becomes a grain of rice stuck to your clothes, while the red one becomes a cinnabar mole over your heart.
Yet in every woman's heart, there are also two men: one is the poison she willingly drinks to quench her thirst, and the other is the bitter medicine that can cure the poison eating away at her bones.
We've all been hurt by love. We've all been the most foolish, blind moths beneath the heavens. We knew flying into the flames would kill us, shatter us to pieces, turn us to ash, yet stubbornly did it anyway, without a second thought.
We've cried, grown tired, struggled, even tried to kill ourselves. But when the roses have bloomed and withered season after season, one day, the loves that once made you sob and suffer will make you smile and say to yourself: Isn't love just a pile of ashes after all that crazed sweetness?
You're still you, and I'm still me. No one can make another their own, so who could possibly use up all of someone else's good fortune?
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Congratulations on finishing the novel. It's amazing. Big thumbs up. Only by sticking to it will you go further.
It's very well written, but relatively unpopular. Hope to get more attention.
Beautiful article, graceful and fresh, stay tuned...
"Forgive You and Your Ring Finger" is the first online article I followed. This is not because I have just started reading online articles. I started reading online articles in Jinjiang very early, but because I am impatient and hate the feeling of waiting, I usually only read the finished ones. The reason why I followed this article is that I know the author, and secondly, it has changed some of my views on online articles.
Boring topics, outrageous plots, and funny language are almost common elements in the online articles I have read. I think online articles are just like that. The author entertains himself and others at the same time.
When I was a freshman and sophomore in college, I often held my phone and clicked it all day long. However, as a graduate student majoring in modern and contemporary literature, I have stopped reading online articles for a long time. In addition to the necessary elements of humor and entertainment, the articles that I can read must also have some of the author's experience and unique views on life. In other words, a good article should not just be for entertainment to make us laugh, nor should it be for the purpose of sensationalism to make us shed tears, nor should it be chattering without skills like Mrs. Xianglin's.
The article "Forgiveness" takes feelings as the warp and time as the latitude. In each love story, we are moved by the warm scenes and also feel some imperfections. This article not only tells stories about love, but also tells the author's views on feelings and life. The characters are full-bodied and have outstanding personalities, such as Yi Wan's twisting spirit, but each character is not one-dimensional. For example, the seemingly perfect Jia Ming actually has a lot of helplessness. This is more touching to us than those love affairs full of bloody plots. We say that "art comes from life and is higher than life." If the plot of a novel It's so bloody that it almost never happens in reality, so it can't even be said to originate from life, let alone other realms. Of course, novels are not the same as life. If the novel writes everything around you intact, I guess no one will want to read it, so the novel must be processed and selected by the author. "Forgiveness" takes Yiwan's feelings as the main line, and the feelings of other friends as the secondary line, which enriches the content of the article, and the plot arrangement is appropriately detailed and relaxed. In terms of style, it has the tranquility of Shen Congwen, the sadness of Zhang Ailing, the interest of Ming and Qing scripts and the beauty of Dream of Red Mansions. It is a rare masterpiece.
Spreading flowers⊙▽⊙The author is great!
The girl wants me to be gentle, okay, let's talk about the advantages first.
The overall reading is very smooth, the writing style is reasonable, it is very comfortable to read, and it will not make people unable to resist clicking the cross button.
However, I was surprised that the girl still had to submit an article even though she had already joined V. It seemed that your word count was almost finished, so I just exchanged experiences with the girl and gave some suggestions.
From the title to the copy, there is a literary style. To be honest, it is not a popular subject in JJ. The story of childhood sweethearts is very beautiful, but the Internet article is fast-paced and has a stronger story. The girl's article reads smoothly but is unremarkable, and it is easy to be buried. I have a good writing skills to spare. But the more important thing is that the language is more cheerful. If you are writing an article next time, I have a few suggestions: Try to avoid literature and art in the title copywriting, and focus on popular themes. It is best that the number of words in the article should not fluctuate too much per chapter. The first three chapters should have a strong story and try to catch people's attention within three chapters.
Finally, if there is anything I said that is wrong, I hope you will forgive me. We can learn and make progress together, and I wish you the best!
What a sophisticated writing style, keep it up to date, keep it up!
Congratulations on finishing the novel. It's amazing. Big thumbs up. Only by sticking to it will you go further.
It's very well written, but relatively unpopular. Hope to get more attention.
Beautiful article, graceful and fresh, stay tuned...
"Forgive You and Your Ring Finger" is the first online article I followed. This is not because I have just started reading online articles. I started reading online articles in Jinjiang very early, but because I am impatient and hate the feeling of waiting, I usually only read the finished ones. The reason why I followed this article is that I know the author, and secondly, it has changed some of my views on online articles. Boring topics, outrageous plots, and funny language are almost common elements in the online articles I have read. I think online articles are just like that. The author entertains himself and others at the same time. When I was a freshman and sophomore in college, I often held my phone and clicked it all day long. However, as a graduate student majoring in modern and contemporary literature, I have stopped reading online articles for a long time. In addition to the necessary elements of humor and entertainment, the articles that I can read must also have some of the author's experience and unique views on life. In other words, a good article should not just be for entertainment to make us laugh, nor should it be for the purpose of sensationalism to make us shed tears, nor should it be chattering without skills like Mrs. Xianglin's. The article "Forgiveness" takes feelings as the warp and time as the latitude. In each love story, we are moved by the warm scenes and also feel some imperfections. This article not only tells stories about love, but also tells the author's views on feelings and life. The characters are full-bodied and have outstanding personalities, such as Yi Wan's twisting spirit, but each character is not one-dimensional. For example, the seemingly perfect Jia Ming actually has a lot of helplessness. This is more touching to us than those love affairs full of bloody plots. We say that "art comes from life and is higher than life." If the plot of a novel It's so bloody that it almost never happens in reality, so it can't even be said to originate from life, let alone other realms. Of course, novels are not the same as life. If the novel writes everything around you intact, I guess no one will want to read it, so the novel must be processed and selected by the author. "Forgiveness" takes Yiwan's feelings as the main line, and the feelings of other friends as the secondary line, which enriches the content of the article, and the plot arrangement is appropriately detailed and relaxed. In terms of style, it has the tranquility of Shen Congwen, the sadness of Zhang Ailing, the interest of Ming and Qing scripts and the beauty of Dream of Red Mansions. It is a rare masterpiece.
Spreading flowers⊙▽⊙The author is great!
The girl wants me to be gentle, okay, let's talk about the advantages first. The overall reading is very smooth, the writing style is reasonable, it is very comfortable to read, and it will not make people unable to resist clicking the cross button. However, I was surprised that the girl still had to submit an article even though she had already joined V. It seemed that your word count was almost finished, so I just exchanged experiences with the girl and gave some suggestions. From the title to the copy, there is a literary style. To be honest, it is not a popular subject in JJ. The story of childhood sweethearts is very beautiful, but the Internet article is fast-paced and has a stronger story. The girl's article reads smoothly but is unremarkable, and it is easy to be buried. I have a good writing skills to spare. But the more important thing is that the language is more cheerful. If you are writing an article next time, I have a few suggestions: Try to avoid literature and art in the title copywriting, and focus on popular themes. It is best that the number of words in the article should not fluctuate too much per chapter. The first three chapters should have a strong story and try to catch people's attention within three chapters. Finally, if there is anything I said that is wrong, I hope you will forgive me. We can learn and make progress together, and I wish you the best!
What a sophisticated writing style, keep it up to date, keep it up!
Childhood sweethearts, lovely heroine, spreading flowers.
I would like to offer you one for collection~Sprinkle flowers~Great cheers~
Sprinkle flowers~~~Spread flowers