In her previous life, her lover Tang Zhe betrayed her and shot her dead. When she wakes, she finds herself in another world. A highly skilled agent, she uses her intelligence and abilities to make a name for herself in this unfamiliar land.
An accidental escape brings her together with the right man, and from then on fate binds them together.
He is clad in white as brilliant as snow, sly and wise. When he meets her, all his bold ambition turns to tenderness. He rules the world, yet all he does is wait for her to give him her heart...
War and turmoil, tangled grudges, love and heartbreak: this is her legend!
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The Art of the Brocade Heart
The heroine is too childish and does not fit the title of the book
This doesn't look like an agent, just a "little" girl who knows some martial arts.
The beginning of Huantuoxiang's copywriting can actually be summarized in a simple sentence without spending so much ink. It was only after reading the third line of Mosquito that I realized what kind of story this article was telling. Here, the original text: Empress Fengjiu looked towards Jiang Xincheng with a surprised expression, and her words were as shocking as ever, "Ah, Chief, you are here too, what a coincidence." The corners of her mouth twitched again, "What are you talking about? I was not there for any meeting, but you are good, you are late for me every time, ah, does the country support you for free?!..." The corner of his mouth hesitated again. The words behind his mouth should have been said by Jiang Xincheng. He read it twice before he understood it. When I read it for the first time, I always felt that something was inconsistent. It was only after I carefully linked the context that I understood it. And here, the original text:. "When this mission is over, Azhe promised to accompany her to celebrate her birthday and go to the aquarium." This is just a narrative. The use of double quotation marks can easily be misinterpreted as what the heroine said or thought. Once misunderstood, you will feel that there is a simple mistake in the pronoun. Also, the author's punctuation marks often have bugs in the wrong use, and there are more than one, which really makes Mosquito's obsessive-compulsive disorder very uncomfortable. Mosquito thinks the second chapter is more cute than the first chapter. I don't know how the author arranged the overall plot, and whether the content of the first chapter will play a big role in the subsequent plot or the psychology of the characters. If not, then the first chapter is a non-event plot and does not have much need to exist. At the beginning, go straight to the point, hit the explosive and cute points, and be fascinating - this is a better starting technique. In fact, some things in the past life can be used in flashbacks and interludes, and they can be interspersed and brought in later in the article. Because the focus of this article is the story after rebirth, it has no connection with the previous life. So when writing, just give it a brief summary, otherwise it will steal the limelight of the plot after rebirth, and it will be easier to disrupt the rhythm of the writing. The author's sister is pretty good at describing the appearance, but sometimes the adjectives are a little wrong. For example, the expression "weighty" cannot be imagined as being used on a hairpin. I don't know if the author uses this adjective to express what is better about hairpins than ordinary ones. It's really puzzling. The overall writing is a bit clumsy. This is not a derogatory sense. I just feel that the writing style of the author's sister is not very outstanding. The words and sentences are composed of very simple words and sentences. This has the advantage that readers will not feel too strenuous when reading, and can easily understand it without having to think about any difficult parts. The shortcomings are also obvious. It is not outstanding enough and it is difficult to leave a deep impression on people. If you want to attract readers, you must rely on an excellent plot to do so. Although the author's sister is good at describing the characters' appearance, the psychological portrayal is not so good in comparison. First of all, I don't quite understand why the heroine immediately forgot about the actions of Tang Zhe, whom she trusted and seemed to like as soon as she came through. Secondly, after the heroine came through, she didn't express any thoughts about the decisions made by the organization she worked for in her previous life. It seems that everything in his previous life has nothing to do with his rebirth, but the author, the sister, spent nearly another chapter describing the events in his previous life. There is no connection or transition between the previous life and the period after rebirth. The psychological description of the heroine is basically used by the author's sister as Mary Sue, so the portrayal of other people is even more... If there is any exaggeration in the above, please let me know. By12|Pumosquito
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