[Black Butler] My Butler Is a Demon

I always thought that I couldn't read BG-oriented Black Butler fanfics, but this novel attracted me enough. Because of the transformation of the heroine, and because even if the heroine falls into darkness, there will still be a gentle light in her heart. I believe that it was this stubborn yet gentle light of soul that kept that devil from letting go. At first, Catherine was just a simple and kind-hearted child. When faced with the injured elk, she would say: "I believe it, it will not hurt the people who help it." She always cared about others in this way. She had no idea that she would be protecting a demon. But it was her kindness that made the devil decide to stay there. In fact, I think the devil has already guessed what will happen to Catherine's family. Therefore, when Catherine and others prayed to the gods, the devil would show a sarcastic expression. Similar to the Shire, a fire changes everything. When she saw the devil smiling calmly, Catherine realized that the deacon who had always been gentle to her was actually just a phantom. Yes, there is no salvation without asking for anything in return. If you want to gain something, you must lose something first. Not everyone will be unconditionally kind. Facing the death of her loved ones and listening to the devil's seductive whispers, she decided to take the road of revenge. The hatred in her heart seemed to burn itself away. Unforgivable, absolutely... Unforgivable! In order to take revenge, she is willing to hide herself in the darkness. All she had left was resentment, she thought, but there was a demon beside her, a demon who came to her for her soul. However, even if he is a devil, his past interactions have left traces. She wanted to believe him, he was the only one she could trust. But she is still gentle, and would rather wear a cold mask in order not to hurt those kind people. She believes that if you keep distance from the beginning, even the loss will not be too painful in the end. She knew that she would step on blood, but she couldn't bear to bring innocent people into this revenge. What she doesn't want even more is that after her life ends, the people she cares about will be sad for her. As long as you are the only one who sacrifices everything for revenge, everyone else can go on with their lives. Her gentleness is still reflected in the subtleties. The doll given to Jill and the word "thank you" are enough to redeem a person. That's why the deacon thought like that: Miss, do you know? It's great for Asa to be by your side who is so gentle. Because of this gentleness, the gentleness of being willing to treat the devil as his family, Asa also began to change. She becomes strong for revenge. She can't cry, she can't stop, she can't show any weakness because the weight of the world is now on her shoulders, so she must not fall. Therefore, she will only show her weakness when no one is around. However, every time she was vulnerable, Deacon would be by her side. Even though he knew that what the deacon longed for was just his strong soul, he still couldn't help but want to keep the deacon by his side. So she chose to become stronger, hoping to stand side by side with the devil one day. The love between them was born in the day-to-day companionship, and their love was born in the tenderness towards each other. Perhaps the original rescue of the elk was a fateful encounter. She didn't know how much he had sacrificed to keep her safe, and he didn't know how much she had sacrificed to be by his side. They accompany each other, even if it is for use at the beginning, even if it is for the contract at the beginning, but in the end, they will still reach out to each other. Asa will bear Catherine's misunderstanding in order to let her rest well, and Catherine will pull out the God-Killer Sword to protect Asa. They are each other's family and lovers. This is a bond that will last for eternity. Therefore, Asa chose to betray, and Catherine chose to become possessed. Because they all work hard to be together. In the end, their hands remained clasped.

Have you ever discovered that the devil will train what kind of soul he likes?

Almost guessed it. Kindness. If it is the Bible, there are too many good sentences. You can use those sentences to hint at the character's personality. Moreover, the words before eating can be read to the end of the Old Testament hymn Song of Songs. Some jokes are useful. Let me drag you through a paragraph. You can use it and pay attention to the connotation. (Cain is the son of Adam and Eve) Cain was talking to his brother Abel, who were in the field. Cain got up and struck his brother Abel, killing him. The LORD said to Cain, Where is Abel your brother? And he said, I know not: am I my brother's keeper? The LORD said, "What have you done?" Your brother's blood cries out to me from the ground. The earth has opened its mouth to receive your brother's blood from your hand. Now you shall be cursed from this land. If you cultivate the land, the land will no longer serve you. You will be a wanderer on the earth. Cain said to the LORD, My punishment is too severe, beyond what I can bear. Now you have driven me out of this land, so that I will not see your face. I will be a wanderer on the earth, and whoever finds me will kill me. The LORD said to him, "Whoever kills Cain will be repaid sevenfold." So the LORD put a sign on Cain so that no one who found him would kill him. Personally, I think the Old Testament is more interesting than the New Testament. The Old Testament has unpredictable connotations, which appear to be bright but are actually dark. The New Testament is more dogmatic.

Chapter 15 is locked and I want to read QAQ

Hahahahahahaha (?ω?) Hiahiahia devil's focus, Zhuangshan, oh my god, I'm laughing to death hahahaha

Loli, let go of that handsome guy and let me do it! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The weird uncle is teasing the little loli, someone is here! ! !

It's been a while since I've written a long review. I was a little excited when I placed an order. I don't know if my skills are rusty. The author Sang said he wanted to focus on the plot, so I rolled up my sleeves rudely~ Before we begin, let's go through the entire plot. Bu Yao's article currently has not many words, only 30,000 words, but if you list it carefully, a lot of plots have been laid out. It ranges from the first encounter with Mr. Deacon, the death of his parents, encountering Charles during the Ripper case, the confrontation with the Queen... And so on, as small as the conflict with the maid, the gift given, the conversation with Mr. Deacon... If you take these plots separately and watch them, Bu Yao's design is already very good. There are highs and lows, details and scenes, and the links are designed very well. However, after reading these 30,000 words, if you don't pay attention deliberately, you will find in retrospect that almost none of the above plots left a deep impression on your mind. Whether it is details or big scenes, whether it is big events or small events, they are all balanced with ink, without shades. Isn't the rhythm of the story written in this way a bit strange when it wastes too much ink on small details but skimps on big events? The author is a storyteller, and a complete story does not necessarily have ups and downs, but it must have clear priorities. What the author Sang wants to write is the story of Miss Catherine and Mr. Deacon, and it is not appropriate to waste too much ink on other aspects. In this whole story, the heroine Miss Catherine occupies a dominant position, so all the stories will be unfolded by her hands, not the parents, accidents or the queen. All disasters imposed on her will have a certain impact on her, and her own will is the necessary factor in determining the development of the story. In addition to the issue of rhythm, the transition between plots is also crucial. The plot of Bu Yao is very good, but the jumps are too big. Often when readers are still immersed in one thing and want to see the development of the matter, they have suddenly jumped to another link. For example, in the episode when the heroine lost her parents, the author also effectively described some of her changes and tried to support this change in detail. However, he ignored the heroine's own thoughts and lacked psychological fluctuations. After that, Bu Yao went through the middle three years with Spring and Autumn style, and her life in the past few years was not mentioned in the following chapters. It was like the heroine's body grew up by three years out of thin air, but we don't know the maturity and changes of her thoughts. In response to the above shortcomings, Ah Daolai made some suggestions. The first is the problem of description. For the description of characters, psychology, action and dialogue are indispensable. Only these can create a full three-dimensional image and help the author develop the plot. Sometimes, the character itself is an important factor in the plot, so the character creation must not be neglected. The second issue is the thickness of the pen and ink. Bu Yao can first list the plots he wants to write on paper, and then consider which aspect needs to be focused on. If you plan ahead before writing, it will be much easier to control the rhythm. Finally, let's talk about the problem of excessiveness. At this point, Bu Yao can refer more to the original work, properly arrange his plot according to the original work's timeline, and intersperse psychological descriptions and some small events, so that the plot will appear to be fuller and smoother. I hope my long review can bring some help to your writing. Illegal gathering | Changpingpu BY rice

Why is the last one locked?

This is one of the better BG stories I've read in Black Butler. It feels like I haven't seen enough and want to read more. In fact, the ending is sentimental and touching, like a mermaid transforming into a bubble-like phantom and then shattering.