
The Distant Cry of the Lone Swan
断鸿声远
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 3k Words
- Genre
- –
- Era
- –
- Updated
- 12y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
3Chapters
1Favorites
345Clicks per chapter
20Comments
Reader comments 18
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断鸿声远
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The cover is stolen from my friend's picture. If you really need it, please apply for authorization.
The cover is stolen from my friend's picture. If you really need it, please apply for authorization.
Jiujiu, when will you update? My flowers have all been thanked
First of all, I would like to state that I am not looking for fault, I just hope that the author can write better works. First, it is really not sincere to have only coded so many words since June 15. Well, looking at your first and second word count, I feel like, sister, you are writing long and short sentences. Second, the beginning of the second part of the article is completely filled with historical and geographical information. Third, the male protagonist is secondary, right?! At the beginning, a young man actually appeared. Unexpectedly, you also like to play sibling relationships. Fourth, the male protagonist's mother was shouting at the top of her lungs, but the male protagonist still had time to look at the beautiful woman and was lost in thought. At this point, I don't want to say any more critical words so that people think I'm here to find trouble. Hope you do it well!!!!
Why is the male protagonist still a teenager? Is it a sibling relationship? And why is the male protagonist sweating? His mother is already like this. Why is the martial arts leader's child not coming out? Why is it that the male protagonist is coming out? Let the author explain. P. S. The male protagonist has too few scenes, just like a soy sauce actor, and there aren't as many quacks as he does!!
Looking forward to daily updates from Jiujiu
Well written! Don't be a trap! Ten million, ten million! Looking at that Jiang Zhen is not bad
I like this heroine, she looks so handsome! I want to watch the male and female protagonists play opposite each other
Keep up the good work ~~~~~~~~~~·
Keep up the good work~~~~~~~~~~~~~~·