Drop Dead, You Cheating Scumbags!

It's so confusing and fast. There are typos and it's uncomfortable to read.

This is a quick travel article, not something that can be invaded by anything, including vampires and demons. I can completely understand that the author wants to give his daughter a high-ranking identity, but please stop it in moderation! I think the heroine's IQ and strength are more than enough to deal with a little Bailian and her brain-dead family. Moreover, it's really nice to meet acquaintances in the small world. And it's not enough for her to have so many people like her. She even wants to bring people from the small world back to her territory. Although it's not forced, but isn't it her reason! Are you out of your mind, the author? The logic is confusing, the theme is not prominent, there is too much ink in the background of the introduction to Lilith, the content is not smooth, the golden finger is completely unnecessary, it feels like you have to use more than ten rolls of toilet paper to wipe a drop of mosquito blood. Although the heroine appears not to be bothered, but from the actual situation, her man can form a reinforced platoon, and suddenly I feel that the gods are all fools , if a pervert who has lived for so long can't even tell what is a disguise, it is better to try human brain fragments, maybe it can be cured. What the author writes makes people want to read it, but it is messy. I hope the author will work hard. I really like the setting of the witch. I hope the author will not pay too much attention to how many backers the heroine Mo Yu has, and just abuse the scum. Come on.

This is a quick travel article, not something that can be invaded by anything, including vampires and demons. I can completely understand that the author wants to give his daughter a high-ranking identity, but please stop it in moderation! I think the heroine's IQ and strength are more than enough to deal with a little Bailian and her brain-dead family. Moreover, it's really nice to meet acquaintances in the small world. And it's not enough for her to have so many people like her. She even wants to bring people from the small world back to her territory. Although it's not forced, but isn't it her reason! Are you out of your mind, the author? The logic is confusing, the theme is not prominent, there is too much ink in the background of the introduction to Lilith, the content is not smooth, the golden finger is completely unnecessary, it feels like you have to use more than ten rolls of toilet paper to wipe a drop of mosquito blood. Although the heroine appears not to be bothered, but from the actual situation, her man can form a reinforced platoon, and suddenly I feel that the gods are all fools , if a pervert who has lived for so long can't even tell what is a disguise, it is better to try human brain fragments, maybe it can be cured. What the author writes makes people want to read it, but it is messy. I hope the author will work hard. I really like the setting of the witch. I hope the author will not pay too much attention to how many backers the heroine Mo Yu has, and just abuse the scum. Come on.

It's the first time I've seen such ugly quick wear

Why does this have the same beginning as the heroine is an alien?

Could the author not write a long paragraph connected together?

Check in~ In view of JJ's recent convulsions, I won't leave a message~

It's so convoluted that the author can't control it and his head is dizzy.

It's a mess, what's the point?

It's so profound that I feel dizzy and can't understand it!