Amid the bustling market, a pair of eyes watched a tall figure and a small one strolling leisurely up ahead. The owner of those eyes looked around, then approached. He pointed at the wealthy young man beside him and shouted, "That's him! He bumped into me and stole my money. Beat him up!"
"Young master, are you all right?"
"You useless fools! Hurry up and chase her! Bring that reckless little brat back here!"
"Yes, sir." These servants were so slow to react. "Stop! Stop! Don't run!"
Cai Ning seized her chance and spun around with a kick. The servants toppled like dominoes. "Hahaha!" I thought, These servants are terrible fighters. They're even worse than security guards in the 21st century. "You told me to stop, so I..."
Don't plan to update again?
It's a bit white and a bit outrageous, but the most important thing is that it's in the first person, which is really awkward. . .
Nc, it's a mess, and it looks like it has no quality at first glance.
I said, your article is written as if you are trying to catch a plane, it is too hasty! You can describe it in more detail, it's too much like a running account ~ and the emotions in many places are too sudden and unnatural... Come on ~