There's no sense of involvement at all, it's boring! ! !
It's short and sweet. I can only say that the author's writing style was indeed a bit young at that time. It feels very different to watch the good mother revising the old writing.
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It's over! ! ! ~Spread flowers~~\\(≧▽≦)/~
No more, how can it be over?
Surprisingly... It ended just like that... It was too abrupt...
To be honest, what you wrote is not very interesting, there is no plot conflict, the article is too bland and there is no desire to read it. I think the first story you wrote is more interesting, but the plot after that is too bland, like a running account but there is a plot. But this is the first time I write a book, I am very diligent, I can not supervise, and it is not unfinished, so I would like to express my encouragement with a small flower. Come on, I will write better in the future.
It's almost over, the second update I've been waiting for for a long time (woo woo woo)
There's no sense of involvement at all, it's boring! ! !
It's short and sweet. I can only say that the author's writing style was indeed a bit young at that time. It feels very different to watch the good mother revising the old writing.
111111111111111111111111111111111111
It's over! ! ! ~Spread flowers~~\\(≧▽≦)/~
No more, how can it be over?
Surprisingly... It ended just like that... It was too abrupt...
To be honest, what you wrote is not very interesting, there is no plot conflict, the article is too bland and there is no desire to read it. I think the first story you wrote is more interesting, but the plot after that is too bland, like a running account but there is a plot. But this is the first time I write a book, I am very diligent, I can not supervise, and it is not unfinished, so I would like to express my encouragement with a small flower. Come on, I will write better in the future.
It's almost over, the second update I've been waiting for for a long time (woo woo woo)
Sitting among the chrysanthemums, hahahahahaha
Great, thank you for your hard work (>^ω^