A Heavenly Sword Dream (GL)

No matter how many times I read it, it is an excellent fanfic. I hope that one day the author will continue to write more.

It's rare to see a Jin Yong fan written so well. I would like to thank the author for bringing us such a great reading experience. I'm sorry, please leave a comment and express your excitement when you first read this article. In terms of characters, both the protagonist and the supporting characters are well portrayed by the author. First of all, the author portrays Xiao Jiang, a very successful new Yitian character. The author created a new character based on the characters in the original work - the time traveler Jiang Mengzhou, who is Spanish and half-blood. Regarding Jiang Mengzhou, when I read the comments, many people criticized her as the Virgin White Lotus, who didn't kill people when she should, and who always meddles in other people's business, but I think this person is well portrayed. Here's why: First, as a well-educated modern wealthy girl living in peaceful times, it is only in line with human nature to be very repulsive to murder. Moreover, Jiang Mengzhou studied medicine with Master Shui Jing for many years, and under the guidance of Master Shui Jing, he did not like killing people (it is mentioned in the novel that Master never killed anyone, at least in front of Jiang Mengzhou). In addition, Jiang Fangzhou mostly lived in Spain in modern times, and he was even more repelled by killing people (after reading foreign cases and history, their culture is very repulsive to killing people, and there is still a strong concept of homomorphic revenge in China, but it should be almost gone abroad). Second, it is Jiang Fangzhou's behavior of not killing people, meddling in other people's business, and even sometimes unprincipled rescues (good guys, bad guys, and even enemies are drunk) that greatly promotes the development of the plot and the psychological growth of the characters. For example, he saved Gang Leader Mai Shao, which paved the way for him to open up the second line of Ren and Du in the Shaolin Temple, and he responded to the saying "If you sow melons, you will get melons, and if you sow beans, you will get beans." For another example, when Yin Susu planned to disguise herself as Zhang Cuishan and kill Du Dajin's family, Jiang Fangzhou's meddling in other people's affairs prevented Yin Susu from killing anyone. At this time, many people scolded Jiang Fangzhou for being a fetishist, a virgin, and meddling in other people's own business. However, if Yin Susu really killed seventy-one members of Du Dajin's family and three Shaolin monks as in the original work, the incident would eventually come to light. If Jiang Fangzhou knew about it then, would she still accept Yin Susu, and would she still be calm in her heart? Putting myself in my shoes, as an adult, I will not accept that my girlfriend killed more than 70 people (this is only known, and there must be hundreds of unknown people), including old, weak, women and children who were powerless (and it was just because of the lack of escorts, rather than killing evildoers for revenge like Xie Xun). I would wake up in my dreams at night with fright. I believe that it is also Jiang Fangzhou's various actions to save people that subtly affect Yin Susu's character (will be analyzed below). Moreover, I personally feel that it is Jiang Fangzhou's repeated "meddling" and protection that also add points to her in Yin Susu's heart. After all, who doesn't like their other half to be kind-hearted and heroic. Secondly, there is Yin Susu. In the original work, Yin Susu's ending is very tragic, but she is also an out-and-out witch. In several of Jin Yong's novels, there are many little witches, but there are only a few who can really be called little witches, and Yin Susu is one of them. In the original work, she acted very willfully, pretending to kill all seventy-three members of Du Da Shi's family just because her bodyguard was unlucky, leaving no chickens or dogs behind. He kills people at every turn. What follows is that he stayed on Binghuo Island for ten years and was reformed by Zhang Cuishan (every time I see this section, I think it is ten years of labor reform). In this article, the author portrayed Yin Susu very well. Reading chapter by chapter, I found that Yin Susu's character was changed little by little by Jiang Fangzhou. This can be seen by reading the article without going into details. In terms of emotions and plot, there is no love at first sight in this article (the first impression is that of a slut, which is very bad), and there is no life-saving grace. It can be seen that the relationship between Yin and Jiang in this article developed bit by bit. From the original cold face to Jiang Fangzhou, who could ruthlessly leave Jiang Fangzhou, to the subsequent "hair pulling", and then to Yin Susu's words to Jiang Fangzhou, "I don't want you to kill anyone, not even a cat or a dog." It can be seen that the relationship between the two is getting deeper and deeper. Moreover, the emotional line develops along the plot. Although the emotional description takes up little space, it makes people feel deeply affectionate. Moreover, from discovering that the other party is a woman, to accepting the woman's love, I think the character's psychology and transitional plot are well written. After all, no matter how open-minded and evil a heretic she is, Yin Susu is always an ancient person, a girl of eighteen or nineteen years old. There is always a process of acceptance for the love between a woman and a woman. I don't think it is possible to accept it all at once. As for the depiction of other small characters, the depiction of martial arts competitions, and the explanation of martial arts moves, they are all very well written, especially the section about Shaoshi Shan writing about opening up acupuncture points, which allows readers to see the connotation of traditional Chinese martial arts style. Although the author asked us not to wait any longer, we are still looking forward to the author coming back to finish it. Thanks again to the author for writing such a good article. Ps: The above foreign countries all refer to Western countries.

It has been many years, and time flies by. How are you, author?

It's really uncomfortable to be confused by a good article. It's okay if I can't remember it. But when I think about it, I always think about it.

August 2020 Stay, the author brought this good article, thank you

I originally wanted to ask how many people remembered this article, and I was very happy after reading through the comments. Because good articles will not be forgotten for any other reason. We come and remember them all because they are good. Even if it is cut off in the middle, I can feel that the subsequent events will develop on their own, and everyone has their own imagination. Of course, I still hope that the author can come back to full circle. I want to see the development of the story in the author's writing, and I am honored to be able to match the author's train of thought occasionally.

Don't worry, just post it

Dad, come back soon! Miss you

It has been four years, author. I wonder if I will be able to see it in my lifetime.

One of my favorite fan fictions, but it's a pity that it doesn't have an ending. The author must have had something really big happen to get him into trouble. I hope everything goes well!