Ning Xiao got divorced and left with nothing but the baby she was carrying.
She thought this was a matter of a writer's pride, but after the twins were born, all she wanted to do was roar: Ning Xiao, what the hell are you putting on airs for? What writer's pride? Formula and diapers both cost money! What? You can make money as a screenwriter? With that nitpicky boss, he won't accept a single script you write!!!
Lu Youze says he has no choice. He's a businessman who has to think about the market, not a therapist. How much money can an inspirational coming-of-age story make?
But he hadn't expected Ning Xiao to be such a stubborn mule, refusing to change her script!
Fine! You won't change it? Then I'll play along!
Ning Lan, sign her to the company. I'll personally star in this inspirational drama with her!
>>> Please don't dig through the rankings (╯3╰)
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1. Chong Er is just like her name: a little lazy and a little silly. She loves sleeping and often updates in her dreams, so, kids, give her a few more nudges o(╯□?t)o
2. Chong Er only writes about devotion and purity. Happiness is absolutely the most important thing in life O(∩_∩)O~
3. Chong Er likes it when you kids gently throw bricks at her, because thanks to you, I can become a better person O(∩_∩)O~
4. Chong Er, not Chong Er. Chong Er means
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I believe that the heroine will gradually grow up. Who hasn't come from an idiot? . . . . . Top. . . . .
I really don't like this heroine. You don't have to be stupid to know that there is something wrong with a man treating her like this. She actually enjoys it with peace of mind, which gives people a very improper feeling. So I gave up the article,,,,,,,
Happy Dragon Boat Festival to my favorite two. . . . . .
Send a flower basket to my little love. . . . . . . .
Sprinkle flowers spread flowers spread flowers. . . . . . . .
Does the author like to put small red moles on the collarbone? I found that both the second young master and the female pig's feet here were clicked.
Why not update it? Are you about to get ripped off?
Why do you need to update it every other day? I was so anxious to wait.
Hello, author.
After reading a few chapters of your article, I don't know why I suddenly wanted to write a review, so I started writing.
In fact, for an article like yours, it's not too much to give 0 points, because it looks very tiring, but out of respect for your labor, let's give it 2 points.
I don't know how long I will write. Maybe this comment will become your first comment on this article or even your first long comment.
First, let me tell you how I came across your article. Looking for articles in Jinjiang is a very interesting thing. If you find a needle in a haystack, you will make a profit if you find a good article that is not popular and has no V. If you find an average article, there is nothing wrong with it. Your article falls into the latter category. The subject matter and concept are good, but the name of the protagonist is really annoying, Mu Xiaomu? If you were a mother, would you name your child this? The novel comes from life and is higher than life. This is not how it came about. This name is so cruel that it makes my liver and gallbladder break. Then I came to read it today, hehe! The heroine has changed her name!
Ning Xiao, a very nice name. Although it is full of the style of the heroine in a Mary Sue romance novel, it is much better than the previous one. Classmate Mu Xiaomu finally found her biological mother, who gave her a good name! Moreover, while changing the name of the heroine, the author also changed the copywriting and title.
Speaking of the title of the novel, let's complain about it! The name "Yu Bi Shen Bian" is really rubbish. Compared with the rubbish, I don't know how many people who read your article will have the same idea as me, that is, this name is too similar to "Magic Brush Ma Liang", the story that almost ruined the ears when I was a child... Of course, very few people will click on it to read it, but! Now this name is not much better, dear!
Alternative love? In your article, what do you think is the difference between their love?
From my point of view, it is not unconventional in any way. It can barely be regarded as an entertainment industry article, but there are many combinations of screenwriters and bosses. You are not the first to write, he is not unconventional...
After complaining about the title, I want to complain about your paragraphs, sentences and punctuation.
Why do you think this is? Why are most of your paragraphs no longer than one line? Is one sentence and one paragraph really a big piece of tape? I always feel that it is too annoying to have a line break before the content is over. Moreover, even if it is a sentence in one line, what does it mean to put a period before the content is over? Punctuation marks really affect reading! Don't use punctuation marks indiscriminately, as that will really lose readers, and not every reader will tell you this like me. They usually delete the article and leave. Dear, believe it or not, I am saying this for your own good.
Generally speaking, the article is really good. Unfortunately, the title and copywriting make me not want to read it. If it weren't for some mistake, I would have missed this good article of yours.
Girl, the general content of the article cannot be clearly seen in the dialogue copywriting, especially if your expression is not clear, and you cannot let others see the general content of the article, so what can you use to attract people to read your article?
Hey, let me make the last comment, the gentle and obedient girl VS the hot-haired jumping boy...
From the heroine's reaction after seeing her husband having an affair in the first chapter, it gives the impression that this heroine is not gentle and obedient. Has the author ever thought about what the heroine's character should be when she calmed down? Don't write whatever you think about. After such a sharp reaction, you want her to be gentle and obedient in the later stage. If you arrange a big ups and downs for the heroine later, the gentle and obedient girl will be exhausted to cope with it. Wouldn't that be contrary to the content of your first chapter?
Anyway, it's for your own good. I can't bear to read a good article like this all the time. Come on, author.
That's it for now, I look forward to some changes.
There are only comments and no articles, so it is in vain to say more. I can't figure out whether I'm here mainly to read the article, or whether I'm here for comments and exchanges. If you don't want to write an article, just explain it directly and open a separate communication area. If you like to communicate and comment, find another place. Don't put the cart before the horse. Why bother letting those who like articles wait here and waste your mood!
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I believe that the heroine will gradually grow up. Who hasn't come from an idiot? . . . . . Top. . . . .
I really don't like this heroine. You don't have to be stupid to know that there is something wrong with a man treating her like this. She actually enjoys it with peace of mind, which gives people a very improper feeling. So I gave up the article,,,,,,,
Happy Dragon Boat Festival to my favorite two. . . . . .
Send a flower basket to my little love. . . . . . . . Sprinkle flowers spread flowers spread flowers. . . . . . . .
Does the author like to put small red moles on the collarbone? I found that both the second young master and the female pig's feet here were clicked.
Why not update it? Are you about to get ripped off?
Why do you need to update it every other day? I was so anxious to wait.
Hello, author. After reading a few chapters of your article, I don't know why I suddenly wanted to write a review, so I started writing. In fact, for an article like yours, it's not too much to give 0 points, because it looks very tiring, but out of respect for your labor, let's give it 2 points. I don't know how long I will write. Maybe this comment will become your first comment on this article or even your first long comment. First, let me tell you how I came across your article. Looking for articles in Jinjiang is a very interesting thing. If you find a needle in a haystack, you will make a profit if you find a good article that is not popular and has no V. If you find an average article, there is nothing wrong with it. Your article falls into the latter category. The subject matter and concept are good, but the name of the protagonist is really annoying, Mu Xiaomu? If you were a mother, would you name your child this? The novel comes from life and is higher than life. This is not how it came about. This name is so cruel that it makes my liver and gallbladder break. Then I came to read it today, hehe! The heroine has changed her name! Ning Xiao, a very nice name. Although it is full of the style of the heroine in a Mary Sue romance novel, it is much better than the previous one. Classmate Mu Xiaomu finally found her biological mother, who gave her a good name! Moreover, while changing the name of the heroine, the author also changed the copywriting and title. Speaking of the title of the novel, let's complain about it! The name "Yu Bi Shen Bian" is really rubbish. Compared with the rubbish, I don't know how many people who read your article will have the same idea as me, that is, this name is too similar to "Magic Brush Ma Liang", the story that almost ruined the ears when I was a child... Of course, very few people will click on it to read it, but! Now this name is not much better, dear! Alternative love? In your article, what do you think is the difference between their love? From my point of view, it is not unconventional in any way. It can barely be regarded as an entertainment industry article, but there are many combinations of screenwriters and bosses. You are not the first to write, he is not unconventional... After complaining about the title, I want to complain about your paragraphs, sentences and punctuation. Why do you think this is? Why are most of your paragraphs no longer than one line? Is one sentence and one paragraph really a big piece of tape? I always feel that it is too annoying to have a line break before the content is over. Moreover, even if it is a sentence in one line, what does it mean to put a period before the content is over? Punctuation marks really affect reading! Don't use punctuation marks indiscriminately, as that will really lose readers, and not every reader will tell you this like me. They usually delete the article and leave. Dear, believe it or not, I am saying this for your own good. Generally speaking, the article is really good. Unfortunately, the title and copywriting make me not want to read it. If it weren't for some mistake, I would have missed this good article of yours. Girl, the general content of the article cannot be clearly seen in the dialogue copywriting, especially if your expression is not clear, and you cannot let others see the general content of the article, so what can you use to attract people to read your article? Hey, let me make the last comment, the gentle and obedient girl VS the hot-haired jumping boy... From the heroine's reaction after seeing her husband having an affair in the first chapter, it gives the impression that this heroine is not gentle and obedient. Has the author ever thought about what the heroine's character should be when she calmed down? Don't write whatever you think about. After such a sharp reaction, you want her to be gentle and obedient in the later stage. If you arrange a big ups and downs for the heroine later, the gentle and obedient girl will be exhausted to cope with it. Wouldn't that be contrary to the content of your first chapter? Anyway, it's for your own good. I can't bear to read a good article like this all the time. Come on, author. That's it for now, I look forward to some changes.