******************Kunlun Sea, here I come!******************
Caiya was battling demons in a pine forest when she discovered she had transmigrated to a world on an island of elves. Her body had become smaller, and her clothes had disappeared. This is bad! There are boys here too. Could they have seen me naked...?
Every elf on the island has a flower crest, but she's a human with no flower crest. Without one, she can't find a partner to marry. What should she do?
I don't want to be human. I want to be an elf. Huarui, help me get a flower crest! What? A magnolia would be fine too. My chance has finally come. Charge...
I commented on your article two years ago. It seems that you have given up completely. It is really difficult to persevere. I wonder how your painting is going?
Haha~ I saw the original poster's complaint in Jinjiangli. There are 160,000 words, but I haven't collected any of them and only commented on them, so I came here to take a look. It's actually really good! Don't give up, keep working hard~
Why isn't it updated? Are you about to give up?
One more suggestion: the content on the homepage of the novel needs to be brief and cute, and cannot be assigned with the computer.
Haha, like you, I rarely comment on other people's articles and have never developed the habit of rating them in the comment area. Score now.
The novel is beautifully written.
Make some suggestions:
1. The title of your novel is too literary. Titles that are too literary are not appreciated by people. You can take a look at the novels on Jinjiang's home page. Most of them have wonderful content and good writing, but the titles without exception are: a bit vulgar.
2. I opened the text page of your novel. The words are densely packed and it looks a bit difficult. I suggest that there be a space between the paragraphs in the text, so that it will be more comfortable to read. (You can refer to the layout of Jinjiang Hongwen, or you can refer to my article, haha)
3. Learn to communicate with readers. Communication between authors and readers is very important. Time has always put readers first.
The writing is really good, it has potential, keep it up. Pays great attention to the description of scenery.
He looks less than thirty. Is he younger than his actual age? Or is he getting married and having children early?
The second paragraph is beautifully written. Fantasy about the future? I usually don't read this subject, so I've collected it now to learn more about it.
I commented on your article two years ago. It seems that you have given up completely. It is really difficult to persevere. I wonder how your painting is going?
Haha~ I saw the original poster's complaint in Jinjiangli. There are 160,000 words, but I haven't collected any of them and only commented on them, so I came here to take a look. It's actually really good! Don't give up, keep working hard~
Why isn't it updated? Are you about to give up?
One more suggestion: the content on the homepage of the novel needs to be brief and cute, and cannot be assigned with the computer. Haha, like you, I rarely comment on other people's articles and have never developed the habit of rating them in the comment area. Score now.
The novel is beautifully written. Make some suggestions: 1. The title of your novel is too literary. Titles that are too literary are not appreciated by people. You can take a look at the novels on Jinjiang's home page. Most of them have wonderful content and good writing, but the titles without exception are: a bit vulgar. 2. I opened the text page of your novel. The words are densely packed and it looks a bit difficult. I suggest that there be a space between the paragraphs in the text, so that it will be more comfortable to read. (You can refer to the layout of Jinjiang Hongwen, or you can refer to my article, haha) 3. Learn to communicate with readers. Communication between authors and readers is very important. Time has always put readers first.
The writing is really good, it has potential, keep it up. Pays great attention to the description of scenery.
He looks less than thirty. Is he younger than his actual age? Or is he getting married and having children early?
The second paragraph is beautifully written. Fantasy about the future? I usually don't read this subject, so I've collected it now to learn more about it.
Very visual and very clear expression