Cultivating Immortality: Two Beauties

I rarely have a venomous tongue, but I really can't help but be venomous. It is rare to see an article with two protagonists. I really hope that this article can be well written, so the words must be a bit straightforward. Please don't blame the author. I won't talk about the other protagonist who has no role yet (is she really the protagonist = =? If you, the author, sincerely want to write a dual protagonist, please be sure to pull out the second protagonist from time to time. Switching perspectives and walking together is the king of dual protagonists! Now I really feel that the other one is just soy sauce cannon fodder, even Cheng Nanxin looks more like the second protagonist than her). As for the current home character, to be honest, purely in terms of characterization and personal preference, the current home protagonist is not as impressive as Cheng Nanxin. Maybe it has something to do with my personal preference for characters. Charming characters are either frank and informal, or thoughtful and quick-witted. But this protagonist... Well, I only saw that she had a lot of thoughts, but I never saw her take any outstanding actions. She was either mad at A or felt aggrieved by B's squeeze. The psychological activity is either to suspect that C has some conspiracy or to think that D is going to be detrimental to him. In short, there is no magnanimity. When I saw this, I thought the highlight might be the quick response? Nowadays, there are a lot of articles that focus on wisdom, so I thought, let's take a look. So I read it, and as soon as the protagonist finished thinking about it, there was no further text - not even a word was mentioned about how to deal with it and how to protect herself. Don't even think about it without a plan, Kuuhu! After thinking about it but unable to solve it, just let nature take its course... If you feel in your heart that it is better to let nature take its course, then I really appreciate you. The problem is that you don't feel at all that you should let nature take its course... You are very entangled, and you don't want to let nature take its course at all, so why don't you think of something and do something quickly? Even if your strength is poor, the implementation of many plans may have to be compromised, but you still have to do something - or if you really can't do anything, at least have an attitude of "I want to solve the problem" to be able to cope with so many twists and turns = = What's more, many things don't require strength to do. For example, the attitude towards Cheng Nanxin, and the protagonist's language and behavior. Just like when faced with a sixth-level alien beast, it is an attitude to be scared to the point of peeing. It is an attitude to live with it for a second longer. It is an attitude to actively pave the way for escape. It is another attitude to be too lazy to think so much and just fight with it. The protagonist's current behavior is the second one - she thought about a bunch of messy things and analyzed a bunch of messy people's possible plots against her, but she didn't say anything. She was still passively led by Cheng Nanxin. Then while being led by someone, I was thinking about things but taking no action... Do you want to run away or fight, how about you show some expression? Even Cheng Nanxin behaves more magnanimously and decisively than you, right? Either she is doubtful and hesitant, or she is indecisive and indecisive... It's really hard not to think that she is living her life passively. To be honest, the protagonist's strength is quite poor, but there are also a lot of protagonists who are poor in strength but very popular in the early stage. To put it bluntly, in this Internet literary world where counterattacks have been devastating, eight of the ten protagonists came from Xiao Xiami. It can be seen that personality charm has nothing to do with strength. I think the low impression of the protagonist in my mind has a lot to do with the author's portrayal of her. Maybe the author is right. Wang Jiaoju is a person who has a lot of thoughts but lacks judgment and decision-making in actions, but this is undoubtedly not an advantage. If I want to like a character, I have to choose the good points to like - so the problem comes, I can't see her good points at all, and all the ones that are exposed now are shortcomings. The author said that this character has a calm personality (you can also see from Lu Zhixin's evaluation that she does not take things to be happy and does not feel sad about herself), but she is very strong on the road to becoming a strong person. These are her advantages for the time being. The problem is that it's useless to just talk. I only see that she gets angry easily over all kinds of trivial things, but does nothing when she encounters things that endanger herself. There are a lot of psychological descriptions, but they are basically hesitant, apprehensive, doubtful and analytical, and nothing truly positive and convincing can be seen at all. To put it bluntly, it means that you can't afford to pick it up and can't let it go. You have a high spirit but don't have the corresponding mental ability. You must know that ability is not only limited to the value of force, but also how one behaves, behaves, and even changes in mood. A person's ability can be seen in everything. What this protagonist lacks most happens to be this ability, so she gives me the feeling of "nothing without force". This is not the demeanor of a strong man. You must know that the potential of a strong person is not only about physical qualifications, but also depends more on the state of mind. Wang Jiaoju now behaves more like a person who has climbed up from the bottom with both pride and inferiority, rather than the eldest lady in a family of martial arts. She thinks too much and does too little - many people with low self-esteem have this characteristic: a lot of suspicion and lack of decision-making when faced with problems + She doesn't say anything, but in her heart she always has a darker attitude of envy and jealousy of other people's talents (what is a dark attitude? That is just envy and jealousy, but not digesting this negative emotion into a positive force. She even dares not to mention that she is inferior to others - note that it is not because she is proud that she does not mention it, but because she dare not mention it. Now the heroine's suspicious and weak character gives me the feeling that she does not dare to mention it, not because she does not admit it because of pride). The eldest lady's self-confidence should be revealed from the bottom of her bones. She will never care about the opinions of small people, because her life experience has determined that she has long been accustomed to looking down on these people (such as the senior brother of Black Pill, it is impossible for the eldest lady to take it seriously). She will never be envious of a genius like Cheng Nanxin, because the habit in her bones will naturally put herself in the same position as the geniuses - this is a habit, a habit developed by a proud girl who is used to being a genius since she was a child. It will never change easily because her qualifications are reduced to scum. Although Lin Qingjiao was more talented than her, no one could completely throw away the other in the end. The eldest lady will not easily admit that she has been left behind. This kind of person must be strong and proud. Even if she puts in a hundred thousand times the effort, she will grit her teeth and catch up. It is probably not until she is dying that she will admit that she has been outmatched in terms of talent by a guy from the bottom. . Or frankly admit that your qualifications are not as good as others, but dare to confidently tell the other party that you should not be too happy too early, I will not be easily crushed by you. ——But Wang obviously does not have such a cheerful personality, so just ignore this situation. So she won't give in easily, let alone be jealous secretly without saying anything. In terms of talent, she is not as good as Lin Qingjiao, but she also has a family that has supported her since she was a child and that no one else could ask for. How could she have such low self-esteem? In fact, after seeing it now, I have a feeling that Wang Jiaoju is not the noble person of Cheng Nanxin, but Cheng Nanxin is the noble person of Wang Jiaoju. Although Cheng had scheming intentions, he was open-minded. Although Wang had many thoughts, he held them back and did not turn them into actions. The two men are far behind the boss in terms of their demeanor, and if you look at the age gap... The protagonist suddenly becomes less interesting. Please give me some suggestions, don't worry the author.

I haven't seen another protagonist appear until now = = Is she really the protagonist and not a supporting role? .

I'm quite curious as to what the qualification is that has nothing to do with spiritual roots.

This protagonist doesn't have enough energy. Regarding a few bottles of elixirs, you either have to break up and stop taking advantage of the villain from the beginning, or you sell them happily - anyway, taking too many elixirs will really affect your future. Being entangled like this now, being unable to let go and biting back before leaving... Is actually not good for the state of mind. The matter of elixirs can be big or small, and whether it generates hatred or not depends entirely on whether the person involved takes it seriously. The protagonist is the one who wants to break the void. I don't think it's worth it to scheming with him over a few bottles of pills. Only those who have big things in mind can be considered a big shot, while those who are full of trivial matters can always be a small character who cannot get on the stage. A person with great ambitions doesn't care if there are villains on the road, because she has her own way to go, and there is no need to fight with those unworthy villains. I think there is absolutely no need for the protagonist to get angry because of one or two villains, he just needs to be more open-minded!

Author, I think your article is cold not because of the two protagonists, but because there are too many settings in the first few chapters. What kind of spiritual roots and sect elders? There are long sections that are dazzling to see. Even a setting control person like me can't help but want to skip large sections. I think you can adjust it and introduce these things later. If there is no eye-catching plot at the beginning of the novel, it will be easy for readers to give up.

You're right, if you look down on me and I look down on you, you are destined to have no future.

After reading this from the first chapter, my biggest feeling is: the heroine should become strong quickly. Not only should she be strong externally, but she should also be strong internally. Stop worrying about others despising you, plotting against you and being suspicious of others all day long. Hostess, you are not a eldest lady now. It is normal for you to be despised and plotted as a little handyman. You are so angry that you are struggling with what to do.

Author, don't give up! ! I've been reading your articles for a long time!

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