Slay Monsters, Grow Vegetables, and Fall in Love
打怪种菜谈恋爱
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 132k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 13y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
40Chapters
209Favorites
8.0Score
1Nutrient gifts
2.5kClicks per chapter
27Comments
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It's too messy and I can't understand it at all. The author will correct it and I will withdraw it first.
A messy article.
Same thing, I still don't understand it, what a messy jumping feeling - -!
I am looking forward to Yin Yezhe and Qi Chu. . Let's do some extra stuff - -
Full of bugs If you have time to edit the article Please reread the entire article carefully first Then a few suggestions 1. The relationship and personality of the characters must be confirmed clearly (ex. The love, hate and sorrow of the protagonist before his death, the front is opposite to the back) 2 There are too many jokes buried and no clear explanation (ex. What is the problem with Lin Fusheng's family) 3 I feel that when you write certain places, you will add some settings that are not in line with the previous text for the sake of the rationality of the plot, which will make you feel unclear when reading it. The above is purely my personal opinion. If any offense is caused, I apologize in advance. Although I quite like the subject matter and writing style, there are really too many bugs QAQ Then shamelessly asked for Yin Yebai x Qi Chu's extra story
This portable space is of no use, and I haven't written a long article about killing monsters yet.
Chapter 3. I can't hold it any longer, There are too many characters, and I think the relationships are so complicated... But come on, author.
By the way, what is MT DPS PVP? ? ? ? ? ?
Is this the time to give up? QAQ?