Throwing an Egg Against a Stone

I accidentally clicked on your book. It's great. I hope the author will continue to work hard to update it. Your ideas and writing style are very good, but why is the book not getting much attention? It may be that someone did not promote your book enough, or it may be caused by a small flaw in your book. This flaw is not fatal, but the black spots on a piece of white paper are so obvious, and the characterization is lacking. The novel itself uses characterization to describe the plot. If people If the character description is not enough, the characters described in your book will not "live". There is also the importance of the beginning. The beginning is the first impression given to the readers. If this is not done well, it will also lead to the loss of your readers. There must be a good introduction at the beginning, and the plot must be compact. Come on, author, support you.