Urr's Short Stories: The Black Wings

This is a short story I wrote years ago. At the time, I was reading Bleach and had just reached the part where Ulquiorra dies. I'd been mulling it over for a long time before finally writing it. I remember sending it to a magazine's editorial department, but they rejected it = =. I was devastated. ORZ I found it today and haven't changed anything. Please point out anything that doesn't work. Thank you~ Theme: