Until We Meet Again

@(^_^)@The author writes well

First of all, I want to apologize here first, because I was so busy that I waited so long after I received the order to read it before rushing to review it. I am really, really sorry! So without further ado, here are my personal reflections (I'm not saying I deliberately don't write or read!) After reading the copy, I thought this article would be 3PH or even more!!! After reading it with trepidation, I found that there was actually no place for a real threesome. Although Xiao Shou and Gong Er had sex, the situation was still excusable! (Actually, Xiaolei's 3P here is even QAQ) Therefore, the writing style of the article is okay, and it is quite comfortable to read, but I really rarely read martial arts here, because some things really have full flaws, well, I won't complain about those things that have their own flaws. Regarding Xiao Shoujun, my only thought after reading it (actually because I didn't have time to watch it) was, what is Xiao Shoujun's character?! What does Xiao Shoujun look like?! I recall it and have no impression at all orz Then Gong 1 and Gong 2 have some personalities, but they don't seem to be very distinct. I feel that their personalities are very similar (could it be my illusion?!) So I silently said that I think Gong 1 and Gong 2 are actually quite suitable. Hahaha~ By the way, Gong 1 and Gong 2's appearance seems to have not been described. It seems that if Orz can describe the personalities and appearances of various characters in detail. It would be better if these can be cleverly integrated into the text so that people don't feel stiff and abrupt. In short, after watching it, I still can't imagine what the two of them look like. I only know that Gong Yijun is so beautiful that the country will be captivated. As a senior member of the Appearance Association and an art student, I feel sad about any article that doesn't clearly explain appearance. You know how painful it is to watch a pretty good movie but everyone's faces are blurry QAQ!!! Regarding the prince and other things, I can dig more quickly. Some things feel that they are not explained clearly and have been hastily. I will add some analysis in the middle of writing the plot or other things, and then it will make people feel that the various foreshadowings or pitfalls have been explained reasonably and clearly. I will like it. In fact, when I was watching it, I didn't understand for a long time that Gan Mao Xian must have his son sit on the throne. He didn't seem to want it, and neither did his son. His mother didn't say she wanted her son to be the emperor, so where did that obsession come from? There are many, many ways to protect your son. And about that so-and-so lady, I didn't understand what she was going to do in the end orz The plot of the story is a bit simple, and there are no special surprises (could it be that some of my lines are too high?!) The article could be fuller in some places, whether it is the plot or sentences. Although it does not have the luxury of deliberate modification, it is too simple. The rhythm of the whole story has a rhythm of going to the market. Many places are touched upon in one stroke, and then immediately connected to the next plot. In fact, there are many things that can be expanded upon, such as my one-hour experience (not to mention that I am just curious here), and some other small details. If you expand them all, it will be a long article. And generally if you want to write something like this, it is very easy to write more than 100,000 words. Why not write more descriptions? For example, scenery and the like, enrich the article. Then I want to ask, where did Nadeshiko go in the end?! Why would such a loving and loyal dog Wei Mao disappear inexplicably after the protagonist enters the palace?! For the sake of hair?! Finally, although this article has been completed, if the author has the leisure, I still hope that the author will consider revising the article or writing an extra chapter or sequel. Personally, if I revise this article a little, I can make a lot of improvements. Above Illegal party|Produced by Changpingpu by Bamboo

Very good article! I feel like the author has quite a lot of potential for development, so keep up the good work! ↖(^ω^)↗

It's well written. I hope to become a master one day. Let me give you some suggestions. Your character dialogue writing is not very good. Sometimes a bunch of dialogue is added in the middle, which is basically A:\"…\" B:\"…\" A:\"…\" B:\"...\", This pattern. The atmosphere of the dialogue was not quite right, and it felt like it separated the plot. The dialogue doesn't blend well with the plot. . . . Come on!

Alas, I said why I like this article so much and read it again. I used to have this relatively clean and concise style, but later I started to learn from others when writing scenes, and started to be wordy... I like the little Shou Shou...

This article is really good-looking, concise and vivid, with good writing skills and clear clues. The two attacks have their own characteristics. Xiaoshou is my favorite type... In fact, it would not be a problem to write another 100,000 words. The plot is not particularly developed, so it ends faster. Like the loving late brother (the one who died), and the loving late brother (the one with Wu Shaofu and so on), you can write extra stories... This clean writing style is very good, I look forward to the next one!

Could it be that Uncle Master is really dead? No...

I forgot to rate it just now, sorry... I'm not used to Jinjiang yet...

Indeed, it is well written! I came here after seeing your comment to me. I feel like the writing is pretty good!

Yu'er is so smart (starry eyes~~) Uncle Shi and Xingchen are so good and bad. Just throw the responsibility on such a little kid and you can be happy (biting the handkerchief and pointing angrily~~