(One Piece) Ship's Spirit 2

Let go of that pillow and let me come (⌒▽⌒)

Author Sang, can I take the liberty of asking? How do you turn a green page into purple? \(☆O☆)/

Finally finished it~Hold me~

Xiaoyou: I feel that compared to the first part, the writing style of this second part has improved not just a little bit, but too much. When I watched the first part, I only had one feeling: it was so white and childish, and I often felt embarrassed watching it. So when I watched it for the first time, I turned it off when I saw Sky Island. Later, I really wanted to read Luffy, but there were too few Luffy stories, so I opened your first Ship Elf. As I read it, I clearly felt that your writing style was improving. Let me make a suggestion. This is the writing method our teacher taught us. Maybe my writing is not very good, but I still want to tell you. First: When speaking, don't add the word "said" before or after what you want to say (I've seen this many times in the first movie) Second: Don't add the word "thinking" when writing about inner activities (although I really wish I had never seen it) Third: When writing about appearance characteristics, don't write "what kind of eyes you have; what kind of nose you have, etc." In short, don't include the word "has" (it seems I haven't seen it either) There seems to be one more thing I forgot, but that's it. Hope I can give you some advice. I don't know if you can see my comment, after all, this article has been completed for a long time. Finally, I wish: Xiaoyou's writing will get better and better. (It feels like such an old-fashioned blessing!)

Can you write a novel about Luffy's childhood sweethearts?

╮(╯▽╰)╭Is it bad again? Well, forget it, just finish it, celebrate the completion~ Looking forward to new pitfalls and opposing unfinished work╮(╯▽╰)╭

I still think Usopp is very willful=. =. It is obviously an unchangeable fact, but we still have to hold it accountable to ourselves and others. Instead, tragic history repeats itself again and again, and the worst of it is still in our hands! Yes! Road! Fly! Unforgivable, what a mouthful [=. =Actually, that's what I'm talking about]

Ah, why do you think I discovered it? →_→ Zoro will not be left here, right? [Laughs]

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Updated 0.0. It feels like it's been a long time. Meri is still very cute.