[Yunhai] Die Another Day

So sad. ,. . . .

Hello author~ Since it is a short story, I actually finished reading it. Ah hey! First of all, I surrender. I have not finished watching the Tutoring anime... Although there are still about ten episodes left. But fortunately, the author is from a different world. This setting is still a little comforting to me, who has not had time to study the tutor's timeline. The total number of the author's articles is only three chapters, and if you exclude the two chapters on perspective, there is only one chapter left. Well, I have to say, this is the weirdest piece of writing I've ever seen. Looking at the sky... It's not that the writing style is strange, but the plot of the article. I rarely read fanfics that have little connection to the original work. However, the author's writing style is still good. Whether it is scenes or psychology, the descriptions are very good. Judging from the description, the author does not know whether it is deliberate or unintentional. The whole article gives people a very calm feeling, and it is like looking at the entire world from the perspective of a bystander. This way of writing has advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is of course that readers who like this style of writing will find it very loving, but the disadvantage is that this style of writing will make readers have no sense of involvement. Again, let's talk about the structure of the author's novel. The time span of this novel is a bit large. Although it is only 10,000 words, it is written now... But it mentions ten years ago and a few years later. This span makes the plot of the novel slightly scattered, and it does not feel so compact. Similarly, such a plot will leave readers with no particularly deep impression of the plot. Then the author figures out the characters in the novel. Well, speaking of it, I actually didn't react when I saw the pineapple. The pineapples described by the author are a little bit OOC in my eyes. Of course, everyone has their own opinions. Maybe Pineapple's look was too deeply rooted in people's hearts, so he suddenly became self-sacrificial for others (Skylark?!) And it was hard to change. As for Skylark, maybe it's because his identity is not much different from before, but he feels pretty good about it. As far as the characters are concerned, although Pineapple looks a little awkward to me, the author's portrayal and impression of the original work are still quite good. Next, let's talk about the author's way of writing the entire article. In fact, although the entire article is three chapters, the last two chapters can actually be read as extras. However, the author's reminder scared me at first. I thought the change in perspective was a change in person, and I thought the author was going to write in the first person. However, after reading the article, I felt relieved a lot. I was also very curious and checked out all the foreign languages ​​in the author's adult novels [Fu forehead]. The author is thoughtful, but if the readers don't have the curiosity like me, it will feel a bit strange. However, it is here that I feel that pineapple is slightly more feminine. Of course, I still think this is quite beautiful and very touching. As for the last chapter, although it seems a bit like an extra chapter, it explains the ending of the two people very well, and finally completes the article. All in all, I like the author's writing very much, and I am also a reader who likes this style. Writing a short story is usually more difficult than a long story. It has to be detailed and comprehensive. The author's plot can still be seen in detail. At the same time, the whole cause and effect is also very complete - it is a pretty good short story! Above! I wish the author will write better and better articles~