The writing is really good, come on, I think you have it! Whee..
Huhu~~ Juanjuan's article~ This is my first time reading it. Have you submitted it? Huhu~~ I took the royalties and treated Ou to some sweets, Huhu~~
The adult's writing is very sad, which makes me feel sad when I read it!
Sir, I would like to ask you to post your article in Xuhongxuebai so that more people can appreciate your good article. Is it possible? ^_^
The writing is a bit short, but the writing is pretty good. Unfortunately, it is a tragedy... I have to write some follow-up adaptations related to comedy. If the writing is not good, please don't blame me. Hehe...
By the way, after Xiao Ruoshui found Bi Jian, he hurriedly took her back. When he entered the door, he was surprised to find that Xie Haotian was not in the room at all, but he found a pool of blood on the ground. At that moment, Xiao Ruoshui turned his face aside and shouted "Not good"
Bi Jian's face turned pale and she asked in a panic, "Xie Haotian, what's wrong with him?"
Xiao Ruoshui frowned, "I'm afraid it's an illness..."
Before Bi Jian finished listening, she fainted from nervousness.
Xiao Ruoshui reluctantly settled her down and went to find Xie Haotian who was missing for no reason.
After searching for a long time, no trace of Xie Haotian was found. Xiao Ruoshui wondered if it was because Xie Haotian didn't want others to see his miserable death, so he forced himself to hide with his terminally ill body...
After searching everywhere, Xiao Ruoshui had to give up. Unexpectedly, he found an unconscious Xie Haotian on the way back. Xiao Ruoshui hugged him back in surprise.
Bi Jian woke up and found that there was no one in the room. She was confused, so she got out of bed and saw Xiao Ruoshui carrying someone into the room in a panic. Looking closely at the person's face, it turned out to be Xie Haotian.
Xiao Ruoshui, the hurried helper, moved him to the bed. Bi Jian hurriedly asked, "What's wrong with him?"
Xiao Ruoshui said nothing, but frowned and checked Xie Haotian's pulse. After a long time, he relaxed his brows and thought, "His disease has been suppressed. He will be cured in the future as long as he takes good care of himself."
After hearing this, Bi Jian said gratefully, "Thank you so much, the miracle doctor, for your help. Your great kindness will be unforgettable by Bi Jian."
Xiao Ruoshui quickly waved his hand and said, "It's not me who brought him back to life. It seems that there is someone else helping me... But who could this person be?"
Xiao Ruoshui was puzzled when he suddenly heard someone outside the door laughing and saying, "Stupid apprentice, have you even forgotten the master?"
Xiao Ruoshui opened the door respectfully and said, "No wonder, Master is the only one in the world who can rejuvenate himself."
Xiao Ruoshui's master smiled and said, "If I hadn't come to visit you as master, I'm afraid your good friend would have passed away."
When Bi Jian heard this, he immediately bowed, "Thank you, Master, for saving Haotian."
Master Xiao Ruoshui just smiled and said, "Young couple, let's live a good life in the future."
Bi Jian's face immediately turned red after hearing this, but she just bowed her head in embarrassment and remained silent.
"Master, why are you here this time?" Xiao Ruoshui asked
"I just came to see if you smacked my sign."
Xiao Ruoshui smiled, "Master, just don't worry."
Master Xiao Ruoshui smiled and nodded, "In this case, I have nothing to say, so let's just say goodbye." After that, the figure disappeared in a flash.
Three days later, Xie Haotianshu woke up
Half a month later, he and Bi Jian got married.
Come on, come on, support you, Xiaoyu
Not bad, just a little lacking…
It starts off well, not laggy at all, but a little lacking
The writing is really good, come on, I think you have it! Whee..
Huhu~~ Juanjuan's article~ This is my first time reading it. Have you submitted it? Huhu~~ I took the royalties and treated Ou to some sweets, Huhu~~
The adult's writing is very sad, which makes me feel sad when I read it! Sir, I would like to ask you to post your article in Xuhongxuebai so that more people can appreciate your good article. Is it possible? ^_^
The writing is a bit short, but the writing is pretty good. Unfortunately, it is a tragedy... I have to write some follow-up adaptations related to comedy. If the writing is not good, please don't blame me. Hehe... By the way, after Xiao Ruoshui found Bi Jian, he hurriedly took her back. When he entered the door, he was surprised to find that Xie Haotian was not in the room at all, but he found a pool of blood on the ground. At that moment, Xiao Ruoshui turned his face aside and shouted "Not good" Bi Jian's face turned pale and she asked in a panic, "Xie Haotian, what's wrong with him?" Xiao Ruoshui frowned, "I'm afraid it's an illness..." Before Bi Jian finished listening, she fainted from nervousness. Xiao Ruoshui reluctantly settled her down and went to find Xie Haotian who was missing for no reason. After searching for a long time, no trace of Xie Haotian was found. Xiao Ruoshui wondered if it was because Xie Haotian didn't want others to see his miserable death, so he forced himself to hide with his terminally ill body... After searching everywhere, Xiao Ruoshui had to give up. Unexpectedly, he found an unconscious Xie Haotian on the way back. Xiao Ruoshui hugged him back in surprise. Bi Jian woke up and found that there was no one in the room. She was confused, so she got out of bed and saw Xiao Ruoshui carrying someone into the room in a panic. Looking closely at the person's face, it turned out to be Xie Haotian. Xiao Ruoshui, the hurried helper, moved him to the bed. Bi Jian hurriedly asked, "What's wrong with him?" Xiao Ruoshui said nothing, but frowned and checked Xie Haotian's pulse. After a long time, he relaxed his brows and thought, "His disease has been suppressed. He will be cured in the future as long as he takes good care of himself." After hearing this, Bi Jian said gratefully, "Thank you so much, the miracle doctor, for your help. Your great kindness will be unforgettable by Bi Jian." Xiao Ruoshui quickly waved his hand and said, "It's not me who brought him back to life. It seems that there is someone else helping me... But who could this person be?" Xiao Ruoshui was puzzled when he suddenly heard someone outside the door laughing and saying, "Stupid apprentice, have you even forgotten the master?" Xiao Ruoshui opened the door respectfully and said, "No wonder, Master is the only one in the world who can rejuvenate himself." Xiao Ruoshui's master smiled and said, "If I hadn't come to visit you as master, I'm afraid your good friend would have passed away." When Bi Jian heard this, he immediately bowed, "Thank you, Master, for saving Haotian." Master Xiao Ruoshui just smiled and said, "Young couple, let's live a good life in the future." Bi Jian's face immediately turned red after hearing this, but she just bowed her head in embarrassment and remained silent. "Master, why are you here this time?" Xiao Ruoshui asked "I just came to see if you smacked my sign." Xiao Ruoshui smiled, "Master, just don't worry." Master Xiao Ruoshui smiled and nodded, "In this case, I have nothing to say, so let's just say goodbye." After that, the figure disappeared in a flash. Three days later, Xie Haotianshu woke up Half a month later, he and Bi Jian got married.
Come on, come on, support you, Xiaoyu
Not bad, just a little lacking…
It starts off well, not laggy at all, but a little lacking