The Red of Roses

I didn't expect the rose to be finished. . . The Internet has been banned since my senior year in high school. . . Some things were unfinished, but I always remembered my promise to Overlord after Sesu signed. . . . Once the food reserves are replenished, he will fulfill his promise. . .

Roar~~Happy New Year's Day, scatter flowers~~

Big, really awesome~~I admire it

Waiting for the extra episode to come out QAQ

I jumped over from You Ming. Before, I just liked big words, which were very profound, so I liked it. Then I came to this article, reading every line of poetry, thinking about the proud An Yi, and it was like seeing myself in the past. I read it countless times and felt sad, like the best hidden place has been seen through. From being proud, to compromising tenderness for one person, to finally being injured and leaving, but not as lucky as An Yi, in the end I couldn't look back, that person is buried deep in my heart. Like Anyi, with her proud personality and unyielding bones, red roses generally have both defensive thorns and gentle petals. Come on, keep persevering, I really appreciate your writing style

Review of "The Rose Is Red" Let's not mention the cover. I think it goes well with the literary style of the title. The copywriting... How should I put it, describes the central context of the article and allows readers to choose which dish they like. This is well done. But it has lost a little sense of expectation and mystery. To put it bluntly, you, the author, have spoiled too much. The literary style of the latter paragraph does not create a desire to click into the text to read more, and it feels a bit incomprehensible (it is true that the writing and art are consistent to the end...). The phrase "Sing all the lovesickness in a song and let you go" even gave Mosquito the illusion that he was not watching Danmei, but a romance. There is no masculine smell, the feminine smell of girls is too strong. And the recommendations in the red letter part look a bit messy. It would be better if they could be rearranged more neatly. Because a clean page gives readers a good first impression. The first chapter of the main text, the attack and attack successfully met. There are slightly more characters, and there is basically no plot or conflict. The author's sister is not very good at controlling the literary style, her writing style is not sophisticated enough, and it does not reflect the proper atmosphere. The first chapter passed like boiled water, and I couldn't arouse the desire to continue reading. In fact, it is more suitable to be used as the first chapter. The beginning is straightforward and introduces the background of Xiao Shou. It does not use much pen and ink, and it is easy to make people want to read on. But it becomes a bit trivial later on. Continuing from the first chapter, the scene is still in a bar, which is a bit monotonous. There are as many narrative parts as ever, with no fixed center point and many places introducing wine varieties. This kind of informative narrative makes it easy for readers to start scanning the article and scan through it. When the scan is over, the second chapter is over. The plot begins in the third chapter. Mosquito checked the word count. It is about 300,000 words. The plot starts from the third chapter, which is nearly 10,000 words. Girl, the author, you are slow to warm up. The article itself is short, not as long as a long article, and the slow start at the beginning is to pave the way for the rest. For a 300,000 article, it is best to have plot points in each chapter, and then connect them together to form a big plot to round out the story. The three golden chapters were wasted, and the writing failed due to improper use of literary style. The author sister still needs some practice in plot arrangement. Please use your best writing style and don't do it deliberately. Only in this way can you write the best. In terms of clicks, from the first chapter to the last chapter, the ups and downs of clicks are clear, but has the author, the girl, thought about it carefully? Why do I click back on some chapters in the middle? What is it about those chapters that keeps readers coming back for more? Which chapters and places are particularly cute? Think about these carefully. If you can get the answer, then the author's next article will definitely be better. Literary style is a very difficult style to master. Those with good writing skills can use it properly to exaggerate the atmosphere and create a climax. Anything less will just end up being a forced feeling that doesn't please the readers. In fact, the literary style is not so popular in online articles. Internet articles are more suitable for refreshing ones, so that the meaning of the author can be clearly understood at a glance. In her free time, the author sister can study the articles on the gold list or the articles of great masters. No matter what the subject matter and style are, they are all simple and concise. Maybe the author wants to stick to her own style, which is fine, but how to go further while maintaining her true identity is more important. No matter what you are writing for, progress is the key. I hope that the few words of Mosquito can bring some help to the author, and I look forward to seeing more exciting articles from the author in the next article. By12|Pumosquito

I wanted to make up for it, but when I saw that I was with this scumbag in the end, my attitude was totally lacking, so I'll give it one point!

I was touched by the author's message~ People who insist on their dreams are really amazing! Congratulations on the completion! Throw flowers!

Finished reading the entire article. . . To be honest, I didn't feel any positive energy from it, and the things that touched me before had changed their flavor. In fact, I don't care much about CP, because the protagonist's own mentality is the most important, but until the end, I didn't feel that the protagonist really lived a comfortable life, and it probably won't be more comfortable in the future. In this sense, the author's story was a failure. I originally wanted to give a negative score to warn the author, but after all, I liked this article, so I forgot about it. One final reminder, there is no need to distort the characters' souls just to make the story watchable. The characters are the most important. If the protagonist is broken, no matter how bloody the story is, what's the use of the ending?

This is my first time writing an article with an author. Real companionship. I am a coser myself, and I can understand Sese's desire to be recognized by everyone. There may be many people better than you, but you have to believe that you have a group of friends who are willing to accompany you. They are happy to share their feelings and feelings about reading the article with you. They may just give you comfort when you say you are sad, but you also need to know that they care about you and are willing to see you chase your dreams. Why can't dreams be linked to fame, fortune and money? Fame, fortune and money are recognized by people, but only because a small number of people turn them into unworthy things. I am a person who is quite content with the status quo, not very creative, and I envy those who are brave enough to pursue their dreams. How can we get the desired result if we don't work hard? Life may be long or short, just don't let yourself regret it! That's all for today. If you have time, I'll give you a long review to congratulate you on the completion! Ps Erse's Weibo fans are mutual! =W=