The Supporting Actress Slowly Climbs the Road to Immortality

The ending was too sudden and hasty. The author made the background of the characters very complicated, but there was no good explanation and planning. It felt messy and sudden, and it ended unexpectedly.

It can be seen that the author has carefully planned the details of the background and characters, but the writing style still needs to be strengthened. The past events can be mentioned as simply as possible, and the experience can add various exciting processes. Appropriate addition of emotional scenes in the article will make the characters appear more natural~Writing itself requires planning and long-lasting perseverance, the author should do your best~Mommy+Spread Flowers~

I think it's okay, it's not a bad article, and it's pretty much what needs to be explained, but I admire the author's brain circuit very much. It's such a big trap, and he buried himself in it. I really admire it. But it's okay, at least I watched it very happily, just treat it as a healing pastime or something, haha

This article is a mess. When explaining the relationship between the heroine and the heroine at the beginning, no matter how similar the names are, there should be no mistake. The internal lines of the article are unclear. What is the main line? What is a copy? I don't even know. Sometimes the main plot is like a copy. The places that should be emphasized are covered in just a few strokes, while the parts that should be briefly described are too long-winded. Regret buying it.

This can be described as a thousand-year pit. . .

I originally thought it would be a long way from ending, but I didn't expect it to end like this!

What a cheat~~It turned out to be a cheat at the end

Damn it, it's so unfinished. Damn it (‵o′). Author, don't you dare to trick us! Teasing the readers... Curse you for being thrown into a sadistic novel to be a vicious cannon fodder! ! ! !

I regret so much that I actually bought a crappy article! !

I have 10,000 idiots in my heart. This article has been like the end of the world since I encountered the space crack. The chaos is unbearable.