A Demon’s Love

So short and unexciting (?`^??)

I really didn't expect Xiaoqing's love. It's beautifully written.

Love is sharper than a knife and more poisonous than a snake. If you love deeply, it will be bitter and hard to swallow. I really like Li Bihua's "Green Snake", which is why it took me so long to start writing a review—— Zhuyu first, it is really difficult to guarantee that Li Zhi will not be venomous and will not find faults everywhere, but I can't help but comment on this article myself, so I am very confused... I am sorry that I have been confused until so late. The most memorable scene in "Green Snake" is when Suzhen pointed her sword at Xiaoqing, who had seduced Xu Xian, "Xiaoqing, you are so cheap." A sentence that was so heavy that I couldn't bear it. ——I'm not worth it for Xiaoqing. There is such a person, she is bigger than you, knows more than you, and is more profound than you. She dotes on you and tolerates you. She always looks at your youth lovingly. She teaches you what love is. But just when you understand how beautiful and intoxicating love is, she gave all this beauty to others. You are not willing to give in, you are just a mortal, there is nothing special about it - you are just a mortal who is fascinated by her beauty, you don't love her as much as you do, and such a humble and short-lived mortal is not worth it... So you prove to her - She looked at your pride with cold eyes and slapped you hard on the face, "Xiaoqing, you are so mean." Use me to break my heart and lungs, in exchange for your indifference. You only think that he has failed you, but you don't know that you have failed me. I clumsily think that this is what the author wants to express. Let's start commenting on the eight-part form! The story is not very novel and brilliant, but it is still very fresh in form, and it is indeed not easy to combine three love affairs in such a short space, which is quite a test of your skills. However, using dialogue narration saves a lot of trouble - it also saves me a lot of trouble, because I don't have to criticize the author from the perspective of description and characterization (Hey, is this how you always criticize the author?). But Li Zhi still has to complain... I'm still not used to the author setting Xiaoqing and Suzhen as men... Of course I love Danmeijue! Right! I don't have any objections. I just feel that such changes are a bit narrow-minded and far-fetched. I always feel a little uncomfortable having my thoughts forced into my mind - but after all, they are two snakes, and their gender is not important... I have just been brainwashed by preconceptions for a long time. So I still think that it is generally accepted that two women would be better ORZ (not to point out the point, I just have a slight sense of disobedience and hope to understand QAQ), love has transcended species, what can't be overcome? Overall, the writing is very good, otherwise Li Zhi would definitely go dark and go berserk... Sure enough, it's because he likes Li Bihua's story so much ORZ... There's not much else... Being able to conceive of such a story shows that the author's imagination is still very rich! It is a very clever short story - short stories are not easy in the first place. The language needs to be very concise and the plot needs to be very compact. These authors have done a very good job. But fortunately they are the same author. Otherwise, I always feel that the author's strength is still a little bit weak in describing the characters simply using dialogue. But these can be accumulated and practiced slowly. Besides, the short story is not so demanding. It is not a problem. The author has done a good job... And there is really no need to change your original intention because of other people's opinions (this has almost become a common sentence pattern in Li Zhi QAQ). Finally, Li Zhi wishes the author great happiness! Wenwen is a hit!

Although it's a bit missing, it's pretty good-looking. I'm a porridge~ Dear, come on, there will be more, I will definitely watch it~

The author must reply to me

Author: Do you want this article to be published as a radio drama?

Hai, if it were longer, it would be great as a radio drama.

So rippling

I like it, it's great! ! !

It's so well written, I still haven't finished it. I like it so much Xiaoqing and Wenquxing, woo woo woo. . . .