Xiaoyou's short story fanfic
"Missed"
"Lipstick"
"Happy Birthday"
"Grey Rain" added in 2005.1.4
Being added one after another...
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I should explain why I like wild vegetables.
哼哼，我果然猜对了
Throughout the whole text, the author has a good grasp of the characters and plots. However, the heroine seems a bit confused at the moment. She has not yet seen the eternal life in her and the courage to face difficulties, which makes the plot relatively depressing. What she suffered in the secret realm is a bit inexplicable. It doesn't matter if she is weak now, but the heroine must be mentally tough. You can write down the heroine's mental journey, and she will not seem to be blindly passive and controlled by others. I hope that the heroine will become stronger soon and live a wonderful life as a cultivator. The author will give you a big boost!
#我是不是少看了一章"(?Д?*)#
#求解释_(:3」∠)_#
Forgot to give points? Make up points.
I just wanted to know the follow-up, but found that it was over😣
I still feel that people like Father Xia are very annoying. He will give in to everything and let his wife and daughter suffer. That woman is really in trouble for eight lifetimes when she marries such a man. She also hides the matter of this house from her wife. If she loves his wife and daughter so much, it will be easier for them to get away with it otherwise. And Being scolded by the heroine and running away, this kind of behavior is really drunk. If I were a father and had such a child, I would have slapped him in the face. Even if Xia's father is cowardly and not very good, he has at least fulfilled his responsibilities as a father. As a child, who has the right to scold his own father! ! !
…Oh my god, this Su is so scary.
好看好看，可是感觉不够啊
La la la, the writing is awesome. I hope I can discuss the plot, □ number, Er Er San Si Yi Yi Ling 4, 5, and 4 with the author. Let's make progress together~~~
I should explain why I like wild vegetables.
哼哼，我果然猜对了
Throughout the whole text, the author has a good grasp of the characters and plots. However, the heroine seems a bit confused at the moment. She has not yet seen the eternal life in her and the courage to face difficulties, which makes the plot relatively depressing. What she suffered in the secret realm is a bit inexplicable. It doesn't matter if she is weak now, but the heroine must be mentally tough. You can write down the heroine's mental journey, and she will not seem to be blindly passive and controlled by others. I hope that the heroine will become stronger soon and live a wonderful life as a cultivator. The author will give you a big boost!
#我是不是少看了一章"(?Д?*)# #求解释_(:3」∠)_#
Forgot to give points? Make up points.
I just wanted to know the follow-up, but found that it was over😣
I still feel that people like Father Xia are very annoying. He will give in to everything and let his wife and daughter suffer. That woman is really in trouble for eight lifetimes when she marries such a man. She also hides the matter of this house from her wife. If she loves his wife and daughter so much, it will be easier for them to get away with it otherwise. And Being scolded by the heroine and running away, this kind of behavior is really drunk. If I were a father and had such a child, I would have slapped him in the face. Even if Xia's father is cowardly and not very good, he has at least fulfilled his responsibilities as a father. As a child, who has the right to scold his own father! ! !
…Oh my god, this Su is so scary.
好看好看，可是感觉不够啊
La la la, the writing is awesome. I hope I can discuss the plot, □ number, Er Er San Si Yi Yi Ling 4, 5, and 4 with the author. Let's make progress together~~~