"Soul of Chess" martial arts fan bl
The east wind blows away thousands of flowers and trees at night, and even blows down the stars like rain. BMW carvings fill the road with fragrance, phoenixes rustle, jade pots turn with light, and fish and dragons dance all night long.
The moths are covered with golden threads of snow and willows, and the laughter is full of hidden fragrance. The crowd looked for him thousands of times, but suddenly looking back, he was there, in the dim light.
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I still remember the pain of catching up and suddenly finding out that it was over. I liked the first one the most among all the stories, and hated the one who married the mistress or the second child the most (if I remember correctly). Watching the heroine who lost herself made me uncomfortable for about an hour (no more). I plan to write a genre for my next book. I quite like the fantasy idea of Binghuo, even though her two aunts have all kinds of hatred???
Good... Short, come on (
I have been practicing with the protagonist until today, and my heart is quite tired. The traditional Chinese medicine saying of "working the brain and body diligently but not the heart" still makes sense. Regrets, disappointments, and unforeseen thorns and bumps can only be faced with a sincere heart, face it bravely, experience it with your heart, move forward firmly on the chosen journey, and cherish it.
Come out soon, I don't want to wait
Bai Lanlan is still more promising
Throw flowers_(:3″∠?)_
Why is there no sf... Crying?
Gugu, I don't want to see be
Is it only half written? OMG, how long do you plan to spend writing the remaining 100,000 words of ROSE?
Oriental fantasy background
Demonic barrier
http://www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=128822
Demonic Obstacle Author: Baise Hula Skirt
Finished reading Chapter 18 of the main text.
It's a very sad thing to say that so far, I have not been able to find out what the main contradiction of the article is and who is the protagonist of this article. The video has too many cuts, and while the view is three-dimensional, the clues are confusing. According to the author's structure, this story has not even begun to finish. Choosing this plot theme and writing technique is destined to be left out in the Internet. It has nothing to do with whether the article is good or not.
World: an imaginary world of humans and demons, demon masters and immortals. Although some of the names are a bit weird, the essence belongs to Dongxuan. (It is still in the pseudo-martial arts stage).
Characters: Minsheng is honest and honest, Yun Zhilian is beautiful and cold. Yan Nuo seems old and careless, but he is careful and affectionate. You Zhuo is mysterious. The five members of Jinlu are righteous, brave and loyal. There are many characters on the scene, but the perspective changes too quickly, making it impossible to portray the characters in a single-minded way. Can't grasp the protagonist.
Plot: Minsheng's village was attacked by monsters. Yun Zhilian rescued them at the moment of life and death and took Minsheng as his disciple. Then the perspective shifts to the demons, and the two sides alternate. The plot is very extended, but the conflicts between the various segments are explained too slowly and the connections are not strong. For example, Chapters 5 and 6 seem to be out of touch with 4 and 6. Ma JiaDa left in this chapter, and I guess other people will feel the same way. Although you will get used to it after reading too much, it will be more difficult for ordinary online readers to accept. To set up such a plot structure, you should look for plots with close logical connections between both sides. The main text has just begun and then it is cut to the outside, which is a huge leap.
Writing style: third person, non-rear-end perspective (it is recommended to look at how to lock the protagonist in rear-end stories). Perspective switching is mundane. Language expression is basically normal. Delicate description.
My advice to the author is not to use too many parentheses. There is no problem with the white text, but your opening is solemn and seems uncomfortable.
It's like the kind of writing that writes plots. Every time I get to the plot chapter, I feel like a gorilla.
Hhhhh poisonous!
I'm not spending money to see the past
I want to see the car! ! ! ! ! ! Update it quickly! ! ! ! !
Field battle for the first time?! O. Oh, that's too bold
Was it King Ling who saved him or his son? Can't even explain
There are classes on the weekends of the third year of junior high school. As expected, happiness is all yours QAQ
I still remember the pain of catching up and suddenly finding out that it was over. I liked the first one the most among all the stories, and hated the one who married the mistress or the second child the most (if I remember correctly). Watching the heroine who lost herself made me uncomfortable for about an hour (no more). I plan to write a genre for my next book. I quite like the fantasy idea of Binghuo, even though her two aunts have all kinds of hatred???
Good... Short, come on (
I have been practicing with the protagonist until today, and my heart is quite tired. The traditional Chinese medicine saying of "working the brain and body diligently but not the heart" still makes sense. Regrets, disappointments, and unforeseen thorns and bumps can only be faced with a sincere heart, face it bravely, experience it with your heart, move forward firmly on the chosen journey, and cherish it.
Come out soon, I don't want to wait
Bai Lanlan is still more promising
Throw flowers_(:3″∠?)_
Why is there no sf... Crying?
Gugu, I don't want to see be
Is it only half written? OMG, how long do you plan to spend writing the remaining 100,000 words of ROSE?
Oriental fantasy background Demonic barrier http://www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=128822 Demonic Obstacle Author: Baise Hula Skirt Finished reading Chapter 18 of the main text. It's a very sad thing to say that so far, I have not been able to find out what the main contradiction of the article is and who is the protagonist of this article. The video has too many cuts, and while the view is three-dimensional, the clues are confusing. According to the author's structure, this story has not even begun to finish. Choosing this plot theme and writing technique is destined to be left out in the Internet. It has nothing to do with whether the article is good or not. World: an imaginary world of humans and demons, demon masters and immortals. Although some of the names are a bit weird, the essence belongs to Dongxuan. (It is still in the pseudo-martial arts stage). Characters: Minsheng is honest and honest, Yun Zhilian is beautiful and cold. Yan Nuo seems old and careless, but he is careful and affectionate. You Zhuo is mysterious. The five members of Jinlu are righteous, brave and loyal. There are many characters on the scene, but the perspective changes too quickly, making it impossible to portray the characters in a single-minded way. Can't grasp the protagonist. Plot: Minsheng's village was attacked by monsters. Yun Zhilian rescued them at the moment of life and death and took Minsheng as his disciple. Then the perspective shifts to the demons, and the two sides alternate. The plot is very extended, but the conflicts between the various segments are explained too slowly and the connections are not strong. For example, Chapters 5 and 6 seem to be out of touch with 4 and 6. Ma JiaDa left in this chapter, and I guess other people will feel the same way. Although you will get used to it after reading too much, it will be more difficult for ordinary online readers to accept. To set up such a plot structure, you should look for plots with close logical connections between both sides. The main text has just begun and then it is cut to the outside, which is a huge leap. Writing style: third person, non-rear-end perspective (it is recommended to look at how to lock the protagonist in rear-end stories). Perspective switching is mundane. Language expression is basically normal. Delicate description. My advice to the author is not to use too many parentheses. There is no problem with the white text, but your opening is solemn and seems uncomfortable.
It's like the kind of writing that writes plots. Every time I get to the plot chapter, I feel like a gorilla.
Hhhhh poisonous!
I'm not spending money to see the past
I want to see the car! ! ! ! ! ! Update it quickly! ! ! ! !
Field battle for the first time?! O. Oh, that's too bold
Was it King Ling who saved him or his son? Can't even explain
There are classes on the weekends of the third year of junior high school. As expected, happiness is all yours QAQ