AKB0048: The Dream Continues
AKB0048]梦想的延续
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 15k Words
- Genre
- Unknown
- Era
- Unknown
- Updated
- 13y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
9Chapters
35Favorites
1.4kClicks per chapter
5Comments
Reader comments 4
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AKB0048]梦想的延续
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These two chapters are not very clear. There are a few places that are overemphasized and seem a bit redundant. The jump in thinking makes the subsequent articles seem unclear about what they are expressing, but overall it is acceptable. When uploading it in the future or while writing it, see if it can be connected with subsequent articles.
I have seen the dream in your article. Although it is not very detailed, the overall framework has been revealed. I hope you will continue to work hard.
Damn~Why didn't you put (comma) in some places where you said it = =! It looks a little confusing~! Thanks! Please keep up the good work!
O(∩_∩)O~